Yukitsu ()
Cool!!!
Aqua: LOL!! Thanks! ^_^;;
VHS ()
Have you ever written a Hei and Kurama (When he is in his fox form) as a married couple and Kurama is or had Hei's children? Have you eve read a story where Hei and Kurama (When he is in his fox form) are a married couple and Kurama is or had Hei's children?
Aqua: Hai hai, I have so, actually!! Sandy Youko's fics stretch on into the "Makai Files". There is another author as well... *thinks* Julie Farel. I've been looking for more of her fics, but I have quite a few that are about Hiei, Youko Kurama, and their family.
Black Starr Kitsune
Poor Koenma the rigors of power. Anyway Kurama better go ballistic just because Haru took HIS Little Korime! (^_^)
Aqua: LOL!! Don't we know he will!! Kurama is most certainly NOT a happy camper right now.
Virginia
Hi!
I've just stumbeled on to this fic, and I read all 45 parts in one day! I can't wait for more!
Bye,
Virginia
Aqua: Hiyo!! ^_^ That's impressive!! I don't think I could read all of it in one sitting. *eyes cross* I'd end up looking like this! ^_~ I usually update a chapter every day!
Armageddon ()
Evil Baka, (Hits Aqua in head) never do that again, the cilfhanger I mean not the writing maybe you should let the story write itself more often.
Aqua: *rubs head* Itai yo!! *sniffle sniffle* ^_^;; well, actually, I'm pretty sure it will write itself rather well. hehe. Except, there tends to be cliffhangers when it does.
Tifalee
0_0;; You're almost updating faster than I can find time to read this! Wow...
Interesting plot twist, BTW.
Aqua: LOL!! Hai hai!!! A chapter a day! ^_^;; If you miss a few days, I guess it can be a pain to catch up on, ne? Naah, Sankyuu!!
ShiTiger
Kurama is going to be really upset when he hears this piece of news. Nice chapter, bye!
Aqua: Hai hai!! Kurama should transform into the youko and go on a rampage!!! *cough* but that wouldn't fit in with the storyline at all, so we'll have to see ^^;
WM ()
Please don't be mean....... Can't wait to see what happen next!!
Aqua: hai hai!! ^____^ Honestly, me either! *grin*
Chambers ()
Yes! Here comes the action. I've been waiting patiently for our boys to finally head into battle. I just know that they're going to choose to go after Hiei early, at least Kurama will. He he..**Rubs her hands**..This is going to be getting good. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Aqua: LOL!!! Hai hai, the battle is coming up very soon! Probably the next chapter, or the one after it!
Yonaka no Inu-Ryuu
This is getting suspenseful!! And Kei, one of these days that masochistic trend is goona get you in touble. But until then! *grabs a feather and tickles Kei with it while he's still hung by his toes* BWAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!! Anywho! WRITE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! *emphasizes each "MORE" with a poke to Kei's ribs*
Kei: How can it get me in trouble? I live in pergatory and Shinimegami continuously brings me back to life....
Aqua: *shakes head* Kei, one of the few who want to die. LOL! Hate to break it to you, but Kei's as ticklish as I am. A better torment for him would be....
Kei: Ripping out my fingernails one at a time!
Aqua: Ewwww....
koashura ()
eeeee! hiei! 0_0 is youko kurama going to save him? :P well doubtful but um i know _something_ will happen, so until that nice little next chapter comes out ill be waiting (Semi)patiently ^^ goodgoodgood work
Aqua: Wai wai!! *bounces happily* ^_^ Hai hai, I've got a few Evil Ideas (tm) for how this is going to turn out. *big grin* Hope you can wait that long!!
One with the ficcie!!
I just finished watching "The Blob". What a gross show. *makes a face* decided to work on this to distract myself from images of overgrown, melted bubble gum devouring innocent people... *shudder*
Reaching Your Limits: A YYH alternate universe
Episode 43: Surrender. The New Plan
Akare had knocked him out during their passage to the Demonworld. When Hiei awoke, he was chained and warded down, in a black room that was most likely some kind of holding cell. The only source of light was from through a barred window in the door, just large enough for him to make out the shadow of the guard when he walked past. At least the room was clean, although it didn't matter much since Hiei's chains wouldn't allow him to move more than a few inches.
He had no idea how long he'd been there, but it was likely not to of been too long judging by the amount of times the guard walked past. They were still worried that he might find a way to escape. The wards were slowly draining his youki, so that he would soon be too weak to fight against any opponent that came. Until then, Hiei figured that the guard was to pay close attention.
Honestly, his chance of escape looked slim. Any power which he could of called upon to break the chains was quickly sucked away by the wards, so he'd given up after the first attempt. There was no reason to drain himself even faster.
"My Lord, the child has awoken," he heard the guard say, his voice echoing in the quiet air.
"Well, what do you say we pay my son a visit?" a deep voice replied, sounding overly amused with the situation.
Hiei watched with narrowed eyes as keys jingled before the door opened and admitted two males. The guard carried a sword in his hand, his slanted eyes revealing the faintest trace of fear as they looked toward the captured demon. He was certainly an unimpressive sight, besides his height, Hiei noted.
His father, on the other hand, was a man that Hiei would of been proud to be spawned from if it were anyone else. Haru black hair fell down his shoulders and back in waves, white strands mingling with the black in the front. His green eyes were sharp and clear, taking in everything but revealing none of his own thoughts other than his amusement. He was tall, standing above Hiei by nearly three feet, and walked with an assured grace.
"Well, Hiei, I have to admit that I was rather surprised when word reached me that I'd spawned two children," he commented as he made his way over. "I have to say that, upon hearing your history, I'm rather impressed. For a child rejected by both of his races, you have done well."
Remaining silent, Hiei's only reply was a glare. He owned this man nothing, and he certainly wasn't going to take part in such idiotic banter.
"You have certainly lived up to my expectations, although you were frightfully easy to capture. Did Ikare catch you off guard?" Haru purred, leaning closer to him.
Stiffening slightly, Hiei fought back the urge to start shooting off his mouth. There was nothing he could say to change the situation. It would be more affective to keep silent. Hopefully, he could get a rise out of Haru this way if nothing else.
It did seem that his temper had been inhereted by his father. Haru growled at him and returned his glare. "You should speak when spoken to, brat. Our first meeting and you won't even give me the satisfaction of a death threat? Cancel my original impressions. I'm deeply disappointed," he stated.
"I have nothing to say to you," Hiei replied, turning his head away.
"Well, you might change that decision later. Things have been getting rather interesting between us, wouldn't you say? I'm the leader of a force which is going to wipe out the humans and claim the Humanworld. You, my bastard son, are the leader of a sorry bunch of beings that is going to try and stop me. Any chance which you might of had to win has been wiped away, now that I've got you. Do you really think that your little human boys will be able to stand up against the force of myself and my army?" Haru taunted.
Hiei bit his cheek, trying to keep his snapped reply from bursting out. Haru was baiting him, and he refused to rise to it. "They can, and they will," he said instead, drawing the words out slowly.
Haru actually laughed at his reply. "Perhaps. Either way, they won't be able to stop me. Whether I have your help or not," he stated.
"What do you mean?" Hiei demanded.
Smiling, Haru drew back and walked around him a little. "Under normal circumstances, I would of killed you by now. However, seeing as you are my own flesh and blood, I'm offering you a choice. Commit yourself to me, join my army, and I will allow you to rule as my heir once I've passed on. Refuse, and I'll kill you after you watch the defeat of your companions," he stated.
Hiei was quiet for a few moments, then snickered. "You don't leave me with many options, do you?" he questioned.
Triumph lighting up his eyes, Haru reached forward. He stopped when Hiei inclined his head, hand only a few inches from the ward on the forbidden child's forhead. "At least do me the honor of a quick death," Hiei stated.
He couldn't stop a smile when Haru slapped him across the cheek before storming from the room, declaring that he would be sorry for his decision. Hiei didn't care about his impending death or the pain in his cheek. He'd won the first battle between them, and he was determined to win the second.
***
"So, Haru has him," Yukina said softly, her eyes downcast.
Koenma sighed and nodded. He'd called Yukina, Urameshi, Kurama, and Kuwabara to his office, along with Botan and Genkai. "I received the letter only a few hours ago. Hiei was captured last night, and will be killed if I don't give Haru access to the Humanworld without opposition."
"Between a rock and a hard place," Kuwabara growled.
"Are we strong enough to beat him?" Yuusuke questioned, getting right to the point.
Koenma sighed, rubbing his temple. He felt a migrane coming on, caused by the stress of this situation. "Previously, I had been placing most of my hopes on Hiei and his abilities, with the rest of you to watch his back. The fact is that the three of you, while you do possess remarkable abilities for humans, are relatively untrained and have never fought demons before. This won't be like fighting school yard bullies," he said.
"So, we're just supposed to sit here and let Hiei die?" Kurama questioned, his tone harsh enough to surprise everyone into staring at him. The youth didn't seem to care about the attention. "I don't care if my chance of beating Haru is slim, so long as there still is one. Besides the past life I hardly remember, I've known Hiei for only a short time. Still, I'm not going to do nothing."
Koenma stared at him for a long moment, seeing the determination in those angry emerald eyes. He nodded once, then turned to Urameshi and Kuwabara. "What about you? Unlike Kurama, you have no real connection to him. Are you willing to put your lives on the line for him?"
Both of the teens looked away from his gaze, and he felt a stab of disappointment go through him. He was surprised when Urameshi looked up again. "Shu... Kurama cares about Hiei a lot. And, although I haven't spent much time with him, I have grown to feel as though he is my friend. I've sparred with him, been trusted with his secrets. The least I can do is help him when he needs it."
"Besides," Kuwabara commented with a grin, "we were asked to fight Haru, weren't we? We would be the lowest kind of cowards if we backed out now, when one of our own is in danger."
Smiling, Koenma resisted the urge to jump up and hug them all. He'd known that he'd made the right decision in recruiting them. "Then we will prepare for battle and send you out first thing tomorrow morning, before I'm expected to give Haru my answer. I doubt he will be expecting such a quick assalt," he stated with a smile.
"I'd like to go as well," Genkai said, startling him.
"But, Genkai," Yukina said softly, touching her arm.
The old woman pinned the younger girl with a glare. "I might be old, but I am not dead. I've known you two since you first came to work for Koenma. I have a personal problem to solve here, but the least I can do after knowing the two of you is to help out when you need it," she stated.
Yukina stared at her for a long time, then smiled and nodded. "I'm sure that your powers will be a great asset to this battle," she said.
"What about you, Yukina? You can't fight," Yuusuke pointed out.
The Koorime nodded, but still looked determined. "Hiei is my brother. I'm not going to wait here for you to retrieve him. Besides, I have a healing ability that I think may come in handy," she stated.
Koenma smiled and climbed from his chair, walking around his desk until he stood in front of all of them. "Well, we had better see to the last minute preperations before I send the five of you out. I have a few tricks up my sleeve as well," he said, smiling his most mysterious smile as he led them from the room.
End Episode 43
Cool!!!
Aqua: LOL!! Thanks! ^_^;;
VHS ()
Have you ever written a Hei and Kurama (When he is in his fox form) as a married couple and Kurama is or had Hei's children? Have you eve read a story where Hei and Kurama (When he is in his fox form) are a married couple and Kurama is or had Hei's children?
Aqua: Hai hai, I have so, actually!! Sandy Youko's fics stretch on into the "Makai Files". There is another author as well... *thinks* Julie Farel. I've been looking for more of her fics, but I have quite a few that are about Hiei, Youko Kurama, and their family.
Black Starr Kitsune
Poor Koenma the rigors of power. Anyway Kurama better go ballistic just because Haru took HIS Little Korime! (^_^)
Aqua: LOL!! Don't we know he will!! Kurama is most certainly NOT a happy camper right now.
Virginia
Hi!
I've just stumbeled on to this fic, and I read all 45 parts in one day! I can't wait for more!
Bye,
Virginia
Aqua: Hiyo!! ^_^ That's impressive!! I don't think I could read all of it in one sitting. *eyes cross* I'd end up looking like this! ^_~ I usually update a chapter every day!
Armageddon ()
Evil Baka, (Hits Aqua in head) never do that again, the cilfhanger I mean not the writing maybe you should let the story write itself more often.
Aqua: *rubs head* Itai yo!! *sniffle sniffle* ^_^;; well, actually, I'm pretty sure it will write itself rather well. hehe. Except, there tends to be cliffhangers when it does.
Tifalee
0_0;; You're almost updating faster than I can find time to read this! Wow...
Interesting plot twist, BTW.
Aqua: LOL!! Hai hai!!! A chapter a day! ^_^;; If you miss a few days, I guess it can be a pain to catch up on, ne? Naah, Sankyuu!!
ShiTiger
Kurama is going to be really upset when he hears this piece of news. Nice chapter, bye!
Aqua: Hai hai!! Kurama should transform into the youko and go on a rampage!!! *cough* but that wouldn't fit in with the storyline at all, so we'll have to see ^^;
WM ()
Please don't be mean....... Can't wait to see what happen next!!
Aqua: hai hai!! ^____^ Honestly, me either! *grin*
Chambers ()
Yes! Here comes the action. I've been waiting patiently for our boys to finally head into battle. I just know that they're going to choose to go after Hiei early, at least Kurama will. He he..**Rubs her hands**..This is going to be getting good. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Aqua: LOL!!! Hai hai, the battle is coming up very soon! Probably the next chapter, or the one after it!
Yonaka no Inu-Ryuu
This is getting suspenseful!! And Kei, one of these days that masochistic trend is goona get you in touble. But until then! *grabs a feather and tickles Kei with it while he's still hung by his toes* BWAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!! Anywho! WRITE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! *emphasizes each "MORE" with a poke to Kei's ribs*
Kei: How can it get me in trouble? I live in pergatory and Shinimegami continuously brings me back to life....
Aqua: *shakes head* Kei, one of the few who want to die. LOL! Hate to break it to you, but Kei's as ticklish as I am. A better torment for him would be....
Kei: Ripping out my fingernails one at a time!
Aqua: Ewwww....
koashura ()
eeeee! hiei! 0_0 is youko kurama going to save him? :P well doubtful but um i know _something_ will happen, so until that nice little next chapter comes out ill be waiting (Semi)patiently ^^ goodgoodgood work
Aqua: Wai wai!! *bounces happily* ^_^ Hai hai, I've got a few Evil Ideas (tm) for how this is going to turn out. *big grin* Hope you can wait that long!!
One with the ficcie!!
I just finished watching "The Blob". What a gross show. *makes a face* decided to work on this to distract myself from images of overgrown, melted bubble gum devouring innocent people... *shudder*
Reaching Your Limits: A YYH alternate universe
Episode 43: Surrender. The New Plan
Akare had knocked him out during their passage to the Demonworld. When Hiei awoke, he was chained and warded down, in a black room that was most likely some kind of holding cell. The only source of light was from through a barred window in the door, just large enough for him to make out the shadow of the guard when he walked past. At least the room was clean, although it didn't matter much since Hiei's chains wouldn't allow him to move more than a few inches.
He had no idea how long he'd been there, but it was likely not to of been too long judging by the amount of times the guard walked past. They were still worried that he might find a way to escape. The wards were slowly draining his youki, so that he would soon be too weak to fight against any opponent that came. Until then, Hiei figured that the guard was to pay close attention.
Honestly, his chance of escape looked slim. Any power which he could of called upon to break the chains was quickly sucked away by the wards, so he'd given up after the first attempt. There was no reason to drain himself even faster.
"My Lord, the child has awoken," he heard the guard say, his voice echoing in the quiet air.
"Well, what do you say we pay my son a visit?" a deep voice replied, sounding overly amused with the situation.
Hiei watched with narrowed eyes as keys jingled before the door opened and admitted two males. The guard carried a sword in his hand, his slanted eyes revealing the faintest trace of fear as they looked toward the captured demon. He was certainly an unimpressive sight, besides his height, Hiei noted.
His father, on the other hand, was a man that Hiei would of been proud to be spawned from if it were anyone else. Haru black hair fell down his shoulders and back in waves, white strands mingling with the black in the front. His green eyes were sharp and clear, taking in everything but revealing none of his own thoughts other than his amusement. He was tall, standing above Hiei by nearly three feet, and walked with an assured grace.
"Well, Hiei, I have to admit that I was rather surprised when word reached me that I'd spawned two children," he commented as he made his way over. "I have to say that, upon hearing your history, I'm rather impressed. For a child rejected by both of his races, you have done well."
Remaining silent, Hiei's only reply was a glare. He owned this man nothing, and he certainly wasn't going to take part in such idiotic banter.
"You have certainly lived up to my expectations, although you were frightfully easy to capture. Did Ikare catch you off guard?" Haru purred, leaning closer to him.
Stiffening slightly, Hiei fought back the urge to start shooting off his mouth. There was nothing he could say to change the situation. It would be more affective to keep silent. Hopefully, he could get a rise out of Haru this way if nothing else.
It did seem that his temper had been inhereted by his father. Haru growled at him and returned his glare. "You should speak when spoken to, brat. Our first meeting and you won't even give me the satisfaction of a death threat? Cancel my original impressions. I'm deeply disappointed," he stated.
"I have nothing to say to you," Hiei replied, turning his head away.
"Well, you might change that decision later. Things have been getting rather interesting between us, wouldn't you say? I'm the leader of a force which is going to wipe out the humans and claim the Humanworld. You, my bastard son, are the leader of a sorry bunch of beings that is going to try and stop me. Any chance which you might of had to win has been wiped away, now that I've got you. Do you really think that your little human boys will be able to stand up against the force of myself and my army?" Haru taunted.
Hiei bit his cheek, trying to keep his snapped reply from bursting out. Haru was baiting him, and he refused to rise to it. "They can, and they will," he said instead, drawing the words out slowly.
Haru actually laughed at his reply. "Perhaps. Either way, they won't be able to stop me. Whether I have your help or not," he stated.
"What do you mean?" Hiei demanded.
Smiling, Haru drew back and walked around him a little. "Under normal circumstances, I would of killed you by now. However, seeing as you are my own flesh and blood, I'm offering you a choice. Commit yourself to me, join my army, and I will allow you to rule as my heir once I've passed on. Refuse, and I'll kill you after you watch the defeat of your companions," he stated.
Hiei was quiet for a few moments, then snickered. "You don't leave me with many options, do you?" he questioned.
Triumph lighting up his eyes, Haru reached forward. He stopped when Hiei inclined his head, hand only a few inches from the ward on the forbidden child's forhead. "At least do me the honor of a quick death," Hiei stated.
He couldn't stop a smile when Haru slapped him across the cheek before storming from the room, declaring that he would be sorry for his decision. Hiei didn't care about his impending death or the pain in his cheek. He'd won the first battle between them, and he was determined to win the second.
***
"So, Haru has him," Yukina said softly, her eyes downcast.
Koenma sighed and nodded. He'd called Yukina, Urameshi, Kurama, and Kuwabara to his office, along with Botan and Genkai. "I received the letter only a few hours ago. Hiei was captured last night, and will be killed if I don't give Haru access to the Humanworld without opposition."
"Between a rock and a hard place," Kuwabara growled.
"Are we strong enough to beat him?" Yuusuke questioned, getting right to the point.
Koenma sighed, rubbing his temple. He felt a migrane coming on, caused by the stress of this situation. "Previously, I had been placing most of my hopes on Hiei and his abilities, with the rest of you to watch his back. The fact is that the three of you, while you do possess remarkable abilities for humans, are relatively untrained and have never fought demons before. This won't be like fighting school yard bullies," he said.
"So, we're just supposed to sit here and let Hiei die?" Kurama questioned, his tone harsh enough to surprise everyone into staring at him. The youth didn't seem to care about the attention. "I don't care if my chance of beating Haru is slim, so long as there still is one. Besides the past life I hardly remember, I've known Hiei for only a short time. Still, I'm not going to do nothing."
Koenma stared at him for a long moment, seeing the determination in those angry emerald eyes. He nodded once, then turned to Urameshi and Kuwabara. "What about you? Unlike Kurama, you have no real connection to him. Are you willing to put your lives on the line for him?"
Both of the teens looked away from his gaze, and he felt a stab of disappointment go through him. He was surprised when Urameshi looked up again. "Shu... Kurama cares about Hiei a lot. And, although I haven't spent much time with him, I have grown to feel as though he is my friend. I've sparred with him, been trusted with his secrets. The least I can do is help him when he needs it."
"Besides," Kuwabara commented with a grin, "we were asked to fight Haru, weren't we? We would be the lowest kind of cowards if we backed out now, when one of our own is in danger."
Smiling, Koenma resisted the urge to jump up and hug them all. He'd known that he'd made the right decision in recruiting them. "Then we will prepare for battle and send you out first thing tomorrow morning, before I'm expected to give Haru my answer. I doubt he will be expecting such a quick assalt," he stated with a smile.
"I'd like to go as well," Genkai said, startling him.
"But, Genkai," Yukina said softly, touching her arm.
The old woman pinned the younger girl with a glare. "I might be old, but I am not dead. I've known you two since you first came to work for Koenma. I have a personal problem to solve here, but the least I can do after knowing the two of you is to help out when you need it," she stated.
Yukina stared at her for a long time, then smiled and nodded. "I'm sure that your powers will be a great asset to this battle," she said.
"What about you, Yukina? You can't fight," Yuusuke pointed out.
The Koorime nodded, but still looked determined. "Hiei is my brother. I'm not going to wait here for you to retrieve him. Besides, I have a healing ability that I think may come in handy," she stated.
Koenma smiled and climbed from his chair, walking around his desk until he stood in front of all of them. "Well, we had better see to the last minute preperations before I send the five of you out. I have a few tricks up my sleeve as well," he said, smiling his most mysterious smile as he led them from the room.
End Episode 43