A Cloudy Trainer
By Cavan McEachern
Disclaimer: I don't own Monster Rancher and all related characters. But the character "Cloud" is mine.
Chapter 1: The Arrival
As the U.S.S. Emily docked on the shores of goat on the Coast of Tochacania all of the passengers looked at the buteyfull land from the deck. When the boat finally docked the crew laid down the ramp for the passengers to get off. This was the ships 5th trip carrying tourist to visit Tochakaina. Over the dock's PA the captain made an announcement. "Thank you for choosing the U.S.S. Emily for your voyage here to Tockakaina. We all hope you enjoy your stay. The next voyage back to New York, USA will be in one month" the PA turned off.
One boy though wasn't there for sight seeing. His name was Cloud. He had bright red hair, light blue eyes wearing jean shorts and a dark green t- shirt and was carrying a sky blue pack with the letters "CCM" printed on it. He stepped off the ship and onto the dock and walked into the town they docked at. All over the place you could see different monsters and people, most of them Touchakis and all the monsters were mostly Goat type. He saw a small beach next to the dock and decided to see something. He heard on the ship that the waters in Goat had so much air it you can breathe underwater. So he decided to try it he kneeled over the water and dunked his head in. a second later he took his head out coughing out water.
"That was not a smart thing to do" he though to him self. He stood up and shook most of the water out of his red hair. He then walled back into town. He looked all over for someone to take him to the shrine till he saw a zoom dawn carriage with the words "Taxi" on the side of it. "How covenant" he thought to himself so he walked over to the taxi.
"Excuse me sir can you take me to the monster Shrine?" he asked the driver. The driver was a tall man a little fat and bald.
"Sure hop on" he said in a cheery tone. So Cloud smiled at the driver and got on the wagon. The driver whipped on the rings and started to head to the shrine "But you do know the shrine is off limits to tourist" informed the driver
"I'm not a tourist I'm going to become a breeder" replied Cloud.
"Ahhhh. I see well good luck. I have a niece who's a breeder. Her names Gadamon. She's pretty good. If you plan on fighting her kid I suggest you quit wile your ahead."
"NO WAY" barked Cloud. The Driver shut up immediacy, obviously being scared by Cloud's loud voice.
"So why is your hair wet?" asked the driver. "I tried breathing in the water" Cloud told him.
"O. you have to go where the trainers are to do that" The driver told him.
"I found that out all ready" Said cloud sarcastically. About 30 minuets later they arrived at the shrine and Cloud got off.
"Thanks, how much do I pay you?" asked Cloud.
"300 gold" Answered the driver. Cloud pulled out the money from his pocket and handed it to the driver and walked toward the shrine.
"Thanks bye" yelled Cloud back to the driver as the rode away. Cloud finally got to the shrine. It was an old yet well maintained white building that floated in the air and was assessed by a wooden bridge. As he walked up the bridge he said to him self
"Here it begins. The book of Cloud 3:16
Authors note: Well not bad for my first chapter if I do say so my self. More will come soon so don't worry. Well R+R. See you next time folks.
By Cavan McEachern
Disclaimer: I don't own Monster Rancher and all related characters. But the character "Cloud" is mine.
Chapter 1: The Arrival
As the U.S.S. Emily docked on the shores of goat on the Coast of Tochacania all of the passengers looked at the buteyfull land from the deck. When the boat finally docked the crew laid down the ramp for the passengers to get off. This was the ships 5th trip carrying tourist to visit Tochakaina. Over the dock's PA the captain made an announcement. "Thank you for choosing the U.S.S. Emily for your voyage here to Tockakaina. We all hope you enjoy your stay. The next voyage back to New York, USA will be in one month" the PA turned off.
One boy though wasn't there for sight seeing. His name was Cloud. He had bright red hair, light blue eyes wearing jean shorts and a dark green t- shirt and was carrying a sky blue pack with the letters "CCM" printed on it. He stepped off the ship and onto the dock and walked into the town they docked at. All over the place you could see different monsters and people, most of them Touchakis and all the monsters were mostly Goat type. He saw a small beach next to the dock and decided to see something. He heard on the ship that the waters in Goat had so much air it you can breathe underwater. So he decided to try it he kneeled over the water and dunked his head in. a second later he took his head out coughing out water.
"That was not a smart thing to do" he though to him self. He stood up and shook most of the water out of his red hair. He then walled back into town. He looked all over for someone to take him to the shrine till he saw a zoom dawn carriage with the words "Taxi" on the side of it. "How covenant" he thought to himself so he walked over to the taxi.
"Excuse me sir can you take me to the monster Shrine?" he asked the driver. The driver was a tall man a little fat and bald.
"Sure hop on" he said in a cheery tone. So Cloud smiled at the driver and got on the wagon. The driver whipped on the rings and started to head to the shrine "But you do know the shrine is off limits to tourist" informed the driver
"I'm not a tourist I'm going to become a breeder" replied Cloud.
"Ahhhh. I see well good luck. I have a niece who's a breeder. Her names Gadamon. She's pretty good. If you plan on fighting her kid I suggest you quit wile your ahead."
"NO WAY" barked Cloud. The Driver shut up immediacy, obviously being scared by Cloud's loud voice.
"So why is your hair wet?" asked the driver. "I tried breathing in the water" Cloud told him.
"O. you have to go where the trainers are to do that" The driver told him.
"I found that out all ready" Said cloud sarcastically. About 30 minuets later they arrived at the shrine and Cloud got off.
"Thanks, how much do I pay you?" asked Cloud.
"300 gold" Answered the driver. Cloud pulled out the money from his pocket and handed it to the driver and walked toward the shrine.
"Thanks bye" yelled Cloud back to the driver as the rode away. Cloud finally got to the shrine. It was an old yet well maintained white building that floated in the air and was assessed by a wooden bridge. As he walked up the bridge he said to him self
"Here it begins. The book of Cloud 3:16
Authors note: Well not bad for my first chapter if I do say so my self. More will come soon so don't worry. Well R+R. See you next time folks.