Hey ppl
Ive been getting sort of depressed not having any reviews
and the chibis have been getting mad
Im wondering why you guyz dont like reviewing my storys
And maybe you guyz could tell me
like is it the summarys our somethin
Well please review when your done the chappie
Ive been trying to make the chapters longer but its not working to well
Well happy reading
Lights, Camera, Action...
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"Hello little girl, readdy to die" Nappa yelled
"Umm can I help you Nappa?" A dark haired girl asked looking amused
"Dont play games with me Maria, you put me in there and so help me if I go your coming with me"
"Umm I'm not.." She was cut of by someone punching her in the stomach. She doubled over for a second then looked up. Her daark onyx eyes were filled with burning rage and hatred, "OK Nappa do you have a death wish, cause if you do I'll be happy to fill it for you" She launched herself into a series of kicks and punches wich Nappa had trouble blocking.
Off in the air four men sat watching, "Should we help her Sir" Goten asked.
"No, leave her be GOten, she can take care of herself" Kakarotto butted in.
"Kakarotto you do not have the right to give my sons guard orders" Vegeta scowled.
"ITS MY DAUGHTER AND MY SON AND I THINK I HAVE RIGHT OVER THAT" He yelled at the king, "She can handle Nappa just watch. Vegeta looked stunned by the younger mans action towards him. HE had never known he had kids, all he knew was that he had a wife, guess he was wrong.
They sat watching the young girl pummel Nappa. SHe had a definite style of fighting, the same as Kakarottos. She made great combinations of punches and kicks. Her form was perfect, but how? She had never had a teacher, if her mother was dead her father and brother worked at the castle how could she ever learn how to fight like that. IT was a mystery to him.
She decided that it was time to end this fight. SHe had always hated Nappa and his drones, raping her friends and beating on Maria, maybe it was a good thing he didnt recognize her. A big circle had formed around the two fighters, well one fighter beating a helpless man into oblivian.
"Ya know Nappa, I really dont like you, and I never will, say goodbye to your worthless life" She told him. She thought of the messiest way to kill him, distructo disks, naw to clean, Beam cannon, nope to boring. THen it hit her. She started to power up.
KA..
MA...
HA...
MA...
HA...
She let off a powerful beam of pure white light. It hit dead on and tore his body to pieces. Smoke rose up from the ground and formed a domw around his body fragments. She walked over to his remains. Nothing there, it was to powerful, blew his body to bits. "Aww to bad hes gone, hope no one misses him" She smirked the evil Vegeta smirk.
She started to walk away when she was ambushed by a tall spiky haired boy. "OH GOD SAIYA I MISSED YOU I MISSED YOU I MISSED YOU IVE BEEN STUCK WITH DAD FOR THE LAST 6 YEARS ALL BY MYSELF DO YOU KNOW HOW BAD THAT IS" Gothe yelled in her ear.
"Hey thats not funny" Kakarotto laughed. The other to just stood in shock of what they had just seen.
"GOTEN!! I missed you so much" She ran and gave him a hug, "How do you think I feel living with Grandpa and Raditz, thats worse"
"Thats true" Goten laughed. They started talking rapidly with each other until someone brock their chain of thought.
"So do I get a hug or am I gonna be forgotten again" KAkarotto laughed.
"Oh Im so sorry daddy, she ran up and gave him a hug, "I missed you"
"I missed you to baby" He laughed, "Why dont we go back to the castle and talk for a while, 6 years is a long time ya know"
"Ya but on one condition"
"And what might that be princess?"
"You got to carry me" She laughed at the look on his face.
"Fine I will, but only cuz I havent seen you in 6 years" He picked her up and cradled her in his arms.
"Kakarotto can I ask what your doing" Vegeta finally butted in
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ok Im sorry this is so short I was in a hurrycuz of that stupid thing called homework and
my mom told me to stop and post or else she would delete everything I had
so I had no choice.
SO please press the little button right below and review
I will except flames even though they will be laughed at
unless i take them into consideration
Ja-ne
Pheonix Destiny
Ive been getting sort of depressed not having any reviews
and the chibis have been getting mad
Im wondering why you guyz dont like reviewing my storys
And maybe you guyz could tell me
like is it the summarys our somethin
Well please review when your done the chappie
Ive been trying to make the chapters longer but its not working to well
Well happy reading
Lights, Camera, Action...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Hello little girl, readdy to die" Nappa yelled
"Umm can I help you Nappa?" A dark haired girl asked looking amused
"Dont play games with me Maria, you put me in there and so help me if I go your coming with me"
"Umm I'm not.." She was cut of by someone punching her in the stomach. She doubled over for a second then looked up. Her daark onyx eyes were filled with burning rage and hatred, "OK Nappa do you have a death wish, cause if you do I'll be happy to fill it for you" She launched herself into a series of kicks and punches wich Nappa had trouble blocking.
Off in the air four men sat watching, "Should we help her Sir" Goten asked.
"No, leave her be GOten, she can take care of herself" Kakarotto butted in.
"Kakarotto you do not have the right to give my sons guard orders" Vegeta scowled.
"ITS MY DAUGHTER AND MY SON AND I THINK I HAVE RIGHT OVER THAT" He yelled at the king, "She can handle Nappa just watch. Vegeta looked stunned by the younger mans action towards him. HE had never known he had kids, all he knew was that he had a wife, guess he was wrong.
They sat watching the young girl pummel Nappa. SHe had a definite style of fighting, the same as Kakarottos. She made great combinations of punches and kicks. Her form was perfect, but how? She had never had a teacher, if her mother was dead her father and brother worked at the castle how could she ever learn how to fight like that. IT was a mystery to him.
She decided that it was time to end this fight. SHe had always hated Nappa and his drones, raping her friends and beating on Maria, maybe it was a good thing he didnt recognize her. A big circle had formed around the two fighters, well one fighter beating a helpless man into oblivian.
"Ya know Nappa, I really dont like you, and I never will, say goodbye to your worthless life" She told him. She thought of the messiest way to kill him, distructo disks, naw to clean, Beam cannon, nope to boring. THen it hit her. She started to power up.
KA..
MA...
HA...
MA...
HA...
She let off a powerful beam of pure white light. It hit dead on and tore his body to pieces. Smoke rose up from the ground and formed a domw around his body fragments. She walked over to his remains. Nothing there, it was to powerful, blew his body to bits. "Aww to bad hes gone, hope no one misses him" She smirked the evil Vegeta smirk.
She started to walk away when she was ambushed by a tall spiky haired boy. "OH GOD SAIYA I MISSED YOU I MISSED YOU I MISSED YOU IVE BEEN STUCK WITH DAD FOR THE LAST 6 YEARS ALL BY MYSELF DO YOU KNOW HOW BAD THAT IS" Gothe yelled in her ear.
"Hey thats not funny" Kakarotto laughed. The other to just stood in shock of what they had just seen.
"GOTEN!! I missed you so much" She ran and gave him a hug, "How do you think I feel living with Grandpa and Raditz, thats worse"
"Thats true" Goten laughed. They started talking rapidly with each other until someone brock their chain of thought.
"So do I get a hug or am I gonna be forgotten again" KAkarotto laughed.
"Oh Im so sorry daddy, she ran up and gave him a hug, "I missed you"
"I missed you to baby" He laughed, "Why dont we go back to the castle and talk for a while, 6 years is a long time ya know"
"Ya but on one condition"
"And what might that be princess?"
"You got to carry me" She laughed at the look on his face.
"Fine I will, but only cuz I havent seen you in 6 years" He picked her up and cradled her in his arms.
"Kakarotto can I ask what your doing" Vegeta finally butted in
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ok Im sorry this is so short I was in a hurrycuz of that stupid thing called homework and
my mom told me to stop and post or else she would delete everything I had
so I had no choice.
SO please press the little button right below and review
I will except flames even though they will be laughed at
unless i take them into consideration
Ja-ne
Pheonix Destiny