Here's the next chapter.
I don't find t as good as the 1st chapter but well just read it.
It starts out at about the same time as the last chapter.
Chapter 2: A Promise That Is Not Forgotten
A bird chirping?
A bell ringing?
A voice calling to him?
The young man dressed in a yellow top with a white hood and black shorts, one side of the shorts a bit longer than the other one and his eyes closed heard these things. What is that noise Tidus thought. It sounded so familiar but he couldn't put his tongue on it.
He opened his eyes. Water? I'm in water? The feeling of the water finally reaching him. There's the sound again! What is---------a. . . . whistle? The last one, much softer but much more distinguishable as a whistle, was full of pain and sorrow. Just whistle and I'll come running, he remembered his promise to the one he loved, Yuna.
Could it be Yuna . . . but how? I'm just a dream. I no longer exist. But, If I don't exist then how am I here. If I didn't exist any more then I wouldn't even be in the farplane. Finally realizing that he had somehow gotten back to Spira he swam toward what he though was the surface. Yuna, I'm coming! He yelled in his mind.
When the young man reached the surface, he found himself in the middle of the ocean. He looked around spinning around until---There! A city! He looked closer at the city and realized. Luca! And YUNA! She was walking off the dock.
"YUNA!" he yelled at the top of his lungs. She spun around at the entrance of the dock. She heard me! He thought with joy. She looked at everything that was on the dock but never out to the sea. "YUNA!" he screamed again. Yuna turned around and headed toward the Blitzball stadium entrance. The wind must be too loud for her to hear me. He thought I can't be a dream. I just can't.
Tidus swam toward the dock Yuna had left moments earlier. It took him a few minutes, even with his speed from being a blitzball player, to reach the dock. He pulled himself out of the water and into life once more. He strode up the dock and then went in the direction that Yuna had gone.
"Everyone...everyone has lost something precious." He heard the beginning of Yuna's speah to Spira. The Staium! Tidus ran as fast as he could to get to the entance. He ran to the entance only to find four guards at the entrance. He walked up to them and tried to enter.
"Sorry sir, the Stadioum is at it's full capasity." one of the Guards stated.
"But----------" Tidus started but was cut off by another guard.
"NO! EXCEPTIONS!" the second guard stated.
Guess I'll just have to find another way in. I can't just sit here a wait for Yuna. For all I know she won't even come out of this entrance.
I don't find t as good as the 1st chapter but well just read it.
It starts out at about the same time as the last chapter.
Chapter 2: A Promise That Is Not Forgotten
A bird chirping?
A bell ringing?
A voice calling to him?
The young man dressed in a yellow top with a white hood and black shorts, one side of the shorts a bit longer than the other one and his eyes closed heard these things. What is that noise Tidus thought. It sounded so familiar but he couldn't put his tongue on it.
He opened his eyes. Water? I'm in water? The feeling of the water finally reaching him. There's the sound again! What is---------a. . . . whistle? The last one, much softer but much more distinguishable as a whistle, was full of pain and sorrow. Just whistle and I'll come running, he remembered his promise to the one he loved, Yuna.
Could it be Yuna . . . but how? I'm just a dream. I no longer exist. But, If I don't exist then how am I here. If I didn't exist any more then I wouldn't even be in the farplane. Finally realizing that he had somehow gotten back to Spira he swam toward what he though was the surface. Yuna, I'm coming! He yelled in his mind.
When the young man reached the surface, he found himself in the middle of the ocean. He looked around spinning around until---There! A city! He looked closer at the city and realized. Luca! And YUNA! She was walking off the dock.
"YUNA!" he yelled at the top of his lungs. She spun around at the entrance of the dock. She heard me! He thought with joy. She looked at everything that was on the dock but never out to the sea. "YUNA!" he screamed again. Yuna turned around and headed toward the Blitzball stadium entrance. The wind must be too loud for her to hear me. He thought I can't be a dream. I just can't.
Tidus swam toward the dock Yuna had left moments earlier. It took him a few minutes, even with his speed from being a blitzball player, to reach the dock. He pulled himself out of the water and into life once more. He strode up the dock and then went in the direction that Yuna had gone.
"Everyone...everyone has lost something precious." He heard the beginning of Yuna's speah to Spira. The Staium! Tidus ran as fast as he could to get to the entance. He ran to the entance only to find four guards at the entrance. He walked up to them and tried to enter.
"Sorry sir, the Stadioum is at it's full capasity." one of the Guards stated.
"But----------" Tidus started but was cut off by another guard.
"NO! EXCEPTIONS!" the second guard stated.
Guess I'll just have to find another way in. I can't just sit here a wait for Yuna. For all I know she won't even come out of this entrance.