Sorry about the delay in the update but here it is. I've kinda been lazy
and busy too. My friend asked me to write the music for the game he's
making so that's been taking up a lot of my time.
I guess having to read Hamlet in Intermediate Composition and Literature help me improve my writing (Even though I hated the book. LoL)
And Suggestions on how to improve would be nice
Chapter 3: The Search
All the entrances are blocked off! Where could I go that would lead into the stadium!? Tidus thought furiously. He had been to all the entrances. They were all guarded with large guards. Yuna had just finished her speech and Tidus was trying even harder to find an entrance. THE AUROCH'S (I think that's how it spelled) LOCKER ROOM! Tidus finally realized
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"That was a wonderful speech Yunnie!" Rikku shouted with joy then saw that the frown had returned to Yuna's face. She had obviously meant the words she said from the bottom of her heart Rikku thought.
"Yuna" Lulu started, "Time to go. Cid said he wanted to get to the Al Bhed Home and start repairs" Yuna sighed and nodded dazing off into the distance and listening to the crowd still cheering and whistling.
Whistling. Yuna sighed once again remembering Tidus' promise.
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As Tidus entered the Locker room, he saw on the small screen that the Blitzball Sphere was being filled with tremendous amounts of water.
"GHOST!" screamed Letty when he saw Tidus. All the players turned their heads from the screen to see Tidus. All their eyes grew wide and their jaws dropped to the ground.
"Hey" Tidus said in reply to their action. All the players crowded around him asking him questions of why he wasn't dead or how he got back. He explained to them that he didn't know how or why he was back but that he wanted to see Yuna.
"Yun...Yun...Yuna is heading home to Besaid" Letty replied still in shock to see Tidus. Tidus nodded his head. He had a feeling that was where she would head. He turned toward the door to leave then realized he might encounter some trouble on the way to Besaid.
"Would any of you have any spare Gil I could have to buy a sword?" Tidus asked scratching his neck. "I seem to have left it on the airship when I jumped off" he smiled thinking of what they thought when he told them he jumped off the airship.
The whole team pitched in to help Tidus buy a sword. Tidus said his good byes to the team and headed to a shop to but himself a temporary sword.
This chapter a bit short but I'll try to update when I can but I'm really busy writing music for my friend's game.
I guess having to read Hamlet in Intermediate Composition and Literature help me improve my writing (Even though I hated the book. LoL)
And Suggestions on how to improve would be nice
Chapter 3: The Search
All the entrances are blocked off! Where could I go that would lead into the stadium!? Tidus thought furiously. He had been to all the entrances. They were all guarded with large guards. Yuna had just finished her speech and Tidus was trying even harder to find an entrance. THE AUROCH'S (I think that's how it spelled) LOCKER ROOM! Tidus finally realized
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"That was a wonderful speech Yunnie!" Rikku shouted with joy then saw that the frown had returned to Yuna's face. She had obviously meant the words she said from the bottom of her heart Rikku thought.
"Yuna" Lulu started, "Time to go. Cid said he wanted to get to the Al Bhed Home and start repairs" Yuna sighed and nodded dazing off into the distance and listening to the crowd still cheering and whistling.
Whistling. Yuna sighed once again remembering Tidus' promise.
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As Tidus entered the Locker room, he saw on the small screen that the Blitzball Sphere was being filled with tremendous amounts of water.
"GHOST!" screamed Letty when he saw Tidus. All the players turned their heads from the screen to see Tidus. All their eyes grew wide and their jaws dropped to the ground.
"Hey" Tidus said in reply to their action. All the players crowded around him asking him questions of why he wasn't dead or how he got back. He explained to them that he didn't know how or why he was back but that he wanted to see Yuna.
"Yun...Yun...Yuna is heading home to Besaid" Letty replied still in shock to see Tidus. Tidus nodded his head. He had a feeling that was where she would head. He turned toward the door to leave then realized he might encounter some trouble on the way to Besaid.
"Would any of you have any spare Gil I could have to buy a sword?" Tidus asked scratching his neck. "I seem to have left it on the airship when I jumped off" he smiled thinking of what they thought when he told them he jumped off the airship.
The whole team pitched in to help Tidus buy a sword. Tidus said his good byes to the team and headed to a shop to but himself a temporary sword.
This chapter a bit short but I'll try to update when I can but I'm really busy writing music for my friend's game.