Dragon Sorcerer
prologue
It was misty and damp, making the bamboo poles sticking out of the pools slippery. It still would not have been all that bad, but Ranma's luck was usually bad and today was no exception to the rule.
"Come on boy, we have training to do!" Genma yelled this as he leapt up to the top of a pole. "Hey pops, don't you think we should wait until it's light out?"
asked Ranma, (Hhhmmmppphhh, stupid pop I just wanna go home, but nnoooo we have to go to these stupid pools of sorrow). "Quit wining like a little girl and get your sorry but up here!!." 'Sheeeaeesh, don't have a cow pops I'm a comin' I'm a comin'.' With that he leapt up on to the pools immediately he leapt at his father. His pop not seeing as a bug had just flew in his eye was knocked off the pole into a pool below. ( Hah my luck must be changin', I've never creamed pop that bad before.) With that his luck changed for the worse. crack ( crud the poles breaking i better jump to a new one. "Crap!!!!!" ssswwooosssshhhh!!! with that last word he slipped of a pole and fell in to the icy water below.
"AAAAAAARRRRRRRRRHHHHHHHHHHGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" (What's happenin to me I feel as if my whole body is on fire, beein' ripped apart and frozen at the same time.) With that consciousness left him.
Ain't I a stinker, I just love to make cliffhangers.
Oh well. This is my first fanfic and I hope that you guys and gals out there like it.
I hope to write at least a hundred new words a day, if not more.
-----DARKSTRIKER