Arigato for all the kind reviews!!!! Here are my replies:
Jessica-thanks. I'm glad that you find it interesting and thanks 4 being the first one to review! You made my day!
Fransisca-r u sure it's a dude and not a dudette? Hehe
LilFoxgirl- thanks and you'll find out really soon…
Fabi-chan- u'll find out soon (and r u sure it's a guy?).
Cherry-Kawaii-Wolf- thanks, even though I don't think that this fic is good and I like ur hyperness (is that even a word?!)!
Lady Pluto-I want the readers to slowly find out if Meili Chang is a jealous ex or just someone helpful. Sorry if the last chapter was a bit lame.
Fireblaze-hehe, don't worry. It's not lame.
Starrie- thanks and you write good fan-fics yourself!
Devilblossomgrl-k, I will! ^_^
Kat-^_^
A n g e l- thanks for the helpful reviews! (4 ur chap. 3 review I was considering that problem, but I wanted to get the chap. out really soon) Meiling Li (Syaoran's cuz) mite be in the story later on… oh, and I have read your other fan-fics (I loved them so much that I copied them to my discs that are filled w/ fan-fics!)
Tsukino Chibi-Usa-thanks! ^_^
The best review that I got for chapter 5 was:
Pochacco-HEY!!!! GREAT FIC!!!!!!!!! this is getting better and better!! great job, now i can't wait to read more! SO YOU BETTER CONTINUE OR YOU'LL GET A MOB OF ANGRY REVIEWERS!!! hehe seriously this is a verry, KAWAII fic sooo..........CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONINTUE!
and please tell me when you do!!!!
(o':'o)-Pochacco
P.S I updated my fic, 'The Valentine Dance...Who Will Go With Me?' R+R!
My reply: uh-oh…*stares nervously at the angry reviewers* hehe. I got the next chapter rite here so pleaz don't kill me!!!! (I read ur fan-fic! It's really good!)
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"I love you." they both said in unison.
She kissed him lightly on his lips. "Lets go back to our dorm now. It's getting late" She said.
"Yeah." He whispered. He put his right arm over her slender shoulders as the two of them walked down the street.
"Enjoy your life now Sakura. Soon you will lose your precious Syaoran. Who knows, you may lose your life too." Whispered a mysterious figure in the shadows, as it disappeared in a flash.
And now to cont…
1 "Never Had A Dream Come True"
By: MingShao
Chapter Six: "The Mysterious Encounter"
Disclaimer: I do NOT own Card Captor Sakura…period. I only own the characters that are not in Card Captor Sakura.
A dark figure rose from the shadows. The candlelight reveled her identity as a young woman. Her dark, raven locks fell a little bellow her shoulders and curved around her face. Her mahogany colored eyes shone in the dim light. She wore a tight black dress with wide sleeves. The bottom of her gown trailed behind her on the floor.
She walked over to her golden chair and sat down. She looked at the glass beneath her and whispered evilly "I wonder how Sakura Kinomoto is doing."
"Revel a human, known as the Card (?) Mistress, before me!" She commanded. Her voice echoed throughout the room.
Suddenly, underneath her, the glass floor (the kind that Eriol used to see Sakura with in the anime series) showed Sakura going on a walk with Syaoran at the park.
"The stars are so beautiful tonight" Sakura whispered as she stared up at the starry sky. The breeze gently ruffled her honey colored hair.
"Not as beautiful as you are" Syaoran said as he kissed her sweetly on her soft pink lips. He tried not blush, but didn't succeed.
"Do you really mean it?" Sakura asked as she felt her cheeks turn pink.
"Hai, I do," He said softly as he wrapped his arms around her shoulders from behind her. Sakura sighed softly and leaned her head against his arm.
"I HATE THAT BITCH! But once my brilliant plan succeeds, she won't have anything or anyone anymore…But best of all, the cards will be mine!" she muttered under her breath.
She took out a card that looked just like a Sakura card, expect that it was completely black. It was labeled "Dark Card" (stupid name, I know).
"Change," she whispered, "Disguise me as a human! Change!"
"Instantly, her dark dress disappeared and was quickly replaced by blue, flare jeans and a baby blue colored shirt that said, "What part of perfect don't you understand?" Her long locks turned into honey colored ones and were in a messy bun. Her amber eyes turned into pools of emeralds. Her black aura was replaced by a bright pink one that matched Sakura's.
"Perfect" she said smiling, at her reflection.
"Now I look just like the card mistress herself." she said as she tucked the card away in her pocket and vanished.
~*~
The next day…
"Sakura?" Syaoran asked. When he didn't hear an answer he quickly ran over to the refrigerator to check if there was a note. Luckily there was. It said:
Dear Syaoran,
Tomoyo wanted me to go to the mall with her to pick out some clothes for her date with this guy. (Between you and me, I think it's Eriol-kun.) So I'll be gone for probably most of the day.
Love,
Sakura
::So, Tomoyo's going on a date with Eriol eh?:: Syaoran thought, silently laughing to himself as he jumped on his brown leather couch and turned on the T.V.
~*~
"My plan is going to work perfectly." She said whispering.
She walked up to Sakura and Syaoran's dorm and knocked on the door.
"Who is it?" A male voice asked.
"It's me, Sakura. I forgot to take my keys with me. Sorry." she lied.
"Oh, hey Sakura. I didn't think that you would be home right now," Syaoran said nervously, running his hand through dark, messy hair.
"Tomoyo surprisingly found her clothes quickly so I decided to come back here and spend some time with you." She whispered.
"Uh, okay. Do you want to watch a movie or something?" Syaoran asked. He closed his eyes and focused on finding her aura. It was pink, but I didn't seem to be the same for some reason.
"Sure." she said. She sat down on the couch and moved closer to him.
"I'll just pick-" But before he could finish, she pressed her lips hard against his. ::This doesn't feel right:: He thought and quickly pushed away from her grasp just as he heard the sound of a door slamming shut. He turned around and saw Sakura, standing right in front of him, with her hands on her hips.
"What do you think you're doing?" Sakura asked, with tears glimmering in her emerald green eyes.
"Sakura!" He turned toward the other girl, who had transformed back to her original form. Her dark eyes gleamed at him.
"I didn't know that you had a girlfriend." She said, smirking.
"What's going on here? You," He said, pointing at the dark haired girl in front of him, "You looked just like Sakura…and then you changed…"
"I'm not going to fall for your stupid joke!" Sakura shouted furiously.
"Please, let me explain!" Syaoran pleaded.
"Just leave me alone! Just leave me alone!" Sakura cried as she went into her room and slammed the door.
Syaoran turned to the other girl, only to find that she wasn't there anymore.
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Author's Note: Hey, I hope that you liked this chapter. I will cont. if I get 10 reviews. Also, if u want me to tell u when the next chapter is up, please review and tell me your email address. If you want to give me suggestions or ideas, pleaz email them to: oxoangel4everoxo @aol.com. Thanx! Oh, by the ways, please R&R!!!!!!
Jessica-thanks. I'm glad that you find it interesting and thanks 4 being the first one to review! You made my day!
Fransisca-r u sure it's a dude and not a dudette? Hehe
LilFoxgirl- thanks and you'll find out really soon…
Fabi-chan- u'll find out soon (and r u sure it's a guy?).
Cherry-Kawaii-Wolf- thanks, even though I don't think that this fic is good and I like ur hyperness (is that even a word?!)!
Lady Pluto-I want the readers to slowly find out if Meili Chang is a jealous ex or just someone helpful. Sorry if the last chapter was a bit lame.
Fireblaze-hehe, don't worry. It's not lame.
Starrie- thanks and you write good fan-fics yourself!
Devilblossomgrl-k, I will! ^_^
Kat-^_^
A n g e l- thanks for the helpful reviews! (4 ur chap. 3 review I was considering that problem, but I wanted to get the chap. out really soon) Meiling Li (Syaoran's cuz) mite be in the story later on… oh, and I have read your other fan-fics (I loved them so much that I copied them to my discs that are filled w/ fan-fics!)
Tsukino Chibi-Usa-thanks! ^_^
The best review that I got for chapter 5 was:
Pochacco-HEY!!!! GREAT FIC!!!!!!!!! this is getting better and better!! great job, now i can't wait to read more! SO YOU BETTER CONTINUE OR YOU'LL GET A MOB OF ANGRY REVIEWERS!!! hehe seriously this is a verry, KAWAII fic sooo..........CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONINTUE!
and please tell me when you do!!!!
(o':'o)-Pochacco
P.S I updated my fic, 'The Valentine Dance...Who Will Go With Me?' R+R!
My reply: uh-oh…*stares nervously at the angry reviewers* hehe. I got the next chapter rite here so pleaz don't kill me!!!! (I read ur fan-fic! It's really good!)
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"I love you." they both said in unison.
She kissed him lightly on his lips. "Lets go back to our dorm now. It's getting late" She said.
"Yeah." He whispered. He put his right arm over her slender shoulders as the two of them walked down the street.
"Enjoy your life now Sakura. Soon you will lose your precious Syaoran. Who knows, you may lose your life too." Whispered a mysterious figure in the shadows, as it disappeared in a flash.
And now to cont…
1 "Never Had A Dream Come True"
By: MingShao
Chapter Six: "The Mysterious Encounter"
Disclaimer: I do NOT own Card Captor Sakura…period. I only own the characters that are not in Card Captor Sakura.
A dark figure rose from the shadows. The candlelight reveled her identity as a young woman. Her dark, raven locks fell a little bellow her shoulders and curved around her face. Her mahogany colored eyes shone in the dim light. She wore a tight black dress with wide sleeves. The bottom of her gown trailed behind her on the floor.
She walked over to her golden chair and sat down. She looked at the glass beneath her and whispered evilly "I wonder how Sakura Kinomoto is doing."
"Revel a human, known as the Card (?) Mistress, before me!" She commanded. Her voice echoed throughout the room.
Suddenly, underneath her, the glass floor (the kind that Eriol used to see Sakura with in the anime series) showed Sakura going on a walk with Syaoran at the park.
"The stars are so beautiful tonight" Sakura whispered as she stared up at the starry sky. The breeze gently ruffled her honey colored hair.
"Not as beautiful as you are" Syaoran said as he kissed her sweetly on her soft pink lips. He tried not blush, but didn't succeed.
"Do you really mean it?" Sakura asked as she felt her cheeks turn pink.
"Hai, I do," He said softly as he wrapped his arms around her shoulders from behind her. Sakura sighed softly and leaned her head against his arm.
"I HATE THAT BITCH! But once my brilliant plan succeeds, she won't have anything or anyone anymore…But best of all, the cards will be mine!" she muttered under her breath.
She took out a card that looked just like a Sakura card, expect that it was completely black. It was labeled "Dark Card" (stupid name, I know).
"Change," she whispered, "Disguise me as a human! Change!"
"Instantly, her dark dress disappeared and was quickly replaced by blue, flare jeans and a baby blue colored shirt that said, "What part of perfect don't you understand?" Her long locks turned into honey colored ones and were in a messy bun. Her amber eyes turned into pools of emeralds. Her black aura was replaced by a bright pink one that matched Sakura's.
"Perfect" she said smiling, at her reflection.
"Now I look just like the card mistress herself." she said as she tucked the card away in her pocket and vanished.
~*~
The next day…
"Sakura?" Syaoran asked. When he didn't hear an answer he quickly ran over to the refrigerator to check if there was a note. Luckily there was. It said:
Dear Syaoran,
Tomoyo wanted me to go to the mall with her to pick out some clothes for her date with this guy. (Between you and me, I think it's Eriol-kun.) So I'll be gone for probably most of the day.
Love,
Sakura
::So, Tomoyo's going on a date with Eriol eh?:: Syaoran thought, silently laughing to himself as he jumped on his brown leather couch and turned on the T.V.
~*~
"My plan is going to work perfectly." She said whispering.
She walked up to Sakura and Syaoran's dorm and knocked on the door.
"Who is it?" A male voice asked.
"It's me, Sakura. I forgot to take my keys with me. Sorry." she lied.
"Oh, hey Sakura. I didn't think that you would be home right now," Syaoran said nervously, running his hand through dark, messy hair.
"Tomoyo surprisingly found her clothes quickly so I decided to come back here and spend some time with you." She whispered.
"Uh, okay. Do you want to watch a movie or something?" Syaoran asked. He closed his eyes and focused on finding her aura. It was pink, but I didn't seem to be the same for some reason.
"Sure." she said. She sat down on the couch and moved closer to him.
"I'll just pick-" But before he could finish, she pressed her lips hard against his. ::This doesn't feel right:: He thought and quickly pushed away from her grasp just as he heard the sound of a door slamming shut. He turned around and saw Sakura, standing right in front of him, with her hands on her hips.
"What do you think you're doing?" Sakura asked, with tears glimmering in her emerald green eyes.
"Sakura!" He turned toward the other girl, who had transformed back to her original form. Her dark eyes gleamed at him.
"I didn't know that you had a girlfriend." She said, smirking.
"What's going on here? You," He said, pointing at the dark haired girl in front of him, "You looked just like Sakura…and then you changed…"
"I'm not going to fall for your stupid joke!" Sakura shouted furiously.
"Please, let me explain!" Syaoran pleaded.
"Just leave me alone! Just leave me alone!" Sakura cried as she went into her room and slammed the door.
Syaoran turned to the other girl, only to find that she wasn't there anymore.
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Author's Note: Hey, I hope that you liked this chapter. I will cont. if I get 10 reviews. Also, if u want me to tell u when the next chapter is up, please review and tell me your email address. If you want to give me suggestions or ideas, pleaz email them to: oxoangel4everoxo @aol.com. Thanx! Oh, by the ways, please R&R!!!!!!