Hiiiii! I did not get 10 reviews but I don't care the ones I got were worth 12! (OK so I felt
like writing more..) So on to my story.
What on irk?
When Jwar awoke she was lying on cold hard pavement outside staring at the star
filled sky. She sat up groaned and rubbed her head. She stopped in med groan when she
realized what she was dressed in and where she was. She was in the middle of a street in
front of a odd looking lime green house, with freaky gnomes, and an odd I love earth
sighn. What looked like a cross between a flimingo and a puffer fish also decorated the
odd yard.
Her jaw dropped and she put her hand over her mouth. Then she looked at her
hand. It was in a jet black glove. She Jumped up, and took a good look at her self. She
was wareing a cross between Dib's fighting outfit in the episode Battle Dib, and Zim's
space suit in battle of the planets. She wore Zim's gloves and space boots, but She had a
helmet and waist guard like Dib's. The helmets visor snapped down or up to guard her
blue eyes, and had a hole in the back where he long brown/blond hair came out in a pony
tail. She also had shoulder pads that were a combination of both. A Irken back pack was
attached to her back topping it all off.
Jwar Screamed, jumped in the air then nearly fainted. As she stood in the middle
of the street a jumble of thoughts raced through her messed up mind. How the? What the!
why the!?! OK. That house looks like Zim's would if it was real. Am I ? I was sitting in
font of my computer. I am! I was just clicking on that add button when.... I am in Invader
Zim. . . . . . ! !! !!!
Jwar felt like jumping in the air, running around in circles, hugging some one and
screaming YEEEEAASSSSS! All at the same time. She was shaken out of this when she
heard a loud honking. A car was racing towards her and it did not look like it was slowing
down, if anything it looked like it was speeding up. Jwar stood there like a deer as the car
came racing at her. Then Just as she was about to be hit some one pushed her out of the
way.
Ooooo suspence gota love it. Yes I do think you are that good (^*^) muahahahaha!
like writing more..) So on to my story.
What on irk?
When Jwar awoke she was lying on cold hard pavement outside staring at the star
filled sky. She sat up groaned and rubbed her head. She stopped in med groan when she
realized what she was dressed in and where she was. She was in the middle of a street in
front of a odd looking lime green house, with freaky gnomes, and an odd I love earth
sighn. What looked like a cross between a flimingo and a puffer fish also decorated the
odd yard.
Her jaw dropped and she put her hand over her mouth. Then she looked at her
hand. It was in a jet black glove. She Jumped up, and took a good look at her self. She
was wareing a cross between Dib's fighting outfit in the episode Battle Dib, and Zim's
space suit in battle of the planets. She wore Zim's gloves and space boots, but She had a
helmet and waist guard like Dib's. The helmets visor snapped down or up to guard her
blue eyes, and had a hole in the back where he long brown/blond hair came out in a pony
tail. She also had shoulder pads that were a combination of both. A Irken back pack was
attached to her back topping it all off.
Jwar Screamed, jumped in the air then nearly fainted. As she stood in the middle
of the street a jumble of thoughts raced through her messed up mind. How the? What the!
why the!?! OK. That house looks like Zim's would if it was real. Am I ? I was sitting in
font of my computer. I am! I was just clicking on that add button when.... I am in Invader
Zim. . . . . . ! !! !!!
Jwar felt like jumping in the air, running around in circles, hugging some one and
screaming YEEEEAASSSSS! All at the same time. She was shaken out of this when she
heard a loud honking. A car was racing towards her and it did not look like it was slowing
down, if anything it looked like it was speeding up. Jwar stood there like a deer as the car
came racing at her. Then Just as she was about to be hit some one pushed her out of the
way.
Ooooo suspence gota love it. Yes I do think you are that good (^*^) muahahahaha!