A/N Hello again people, though you didn't think that I would ever be
here again… well then again, I never thought I would be here either.
But during a long period of boredom, I reread my story and decided
that I ended it too quick and I decided to make an alternate ending.
And this is the first chapter of my alternate ending; I still don't
know how it will end. The reviews decide.
Melfina woke up the next morning to find herself in Gene's arms, slowly the memories of last night advents fell together like pieces of puzzle, (OH god no… I can't let this happen again… I refuse to be hurt again!?!) She ruffly pushed his arms off her and scrambled into a counter. Gene instantly felt the loss of her warm body against his, he started to moan her name and his arms reached out to try and pull her back to him. After a while he stopped, he opens his eyes to look where Melfina was only to see her get up and run away from him. He followed her down the hall and out the hatch into the spaceport city. (Melfina, why do u keep running from me…) Gene started to look for her in the streets. What he didn't know was that Melfina was hoping for him to do that.
"Good bye forever Gene…"Melfina whispered softly to the direction the outlaw had went as she ran back to her ship.
Sakeria woke to find her older sister preparing to launch out of port. She was confused… (Where did the red haired man go, the one Melfina was sleeping with on the floor.) She was about to ask her when she heard the hatch out, watched silently as a teenager with blond hair walked in, and looked around. Sakeria may have only been 10 years old, but she knew what she thought of him. (DAMN..!! He is HOT!!!)
"Melfina… are you here..!?!" Sakeria's sister turned around to see who was calling her name only to find herself lost in another pair of blue eyes, but this time it was topped with shaggy blond hair. When she finally registered who this guy was, Melfina gasped and reached out to touch him. Only to expect him to push her away, she quickly pulled back her hand and backed away from him. His blue eyes clouded over with hurt and confusion (Where did my Melfina go… why did she leave me, she was like my mother… Did I hurt her this bad? I'm so sorry Melfina; I will always love you..) Melfina looked up lust in time to catch that last look of hurt. Melfina tried one more time to talk to him.
"Jim…" sobs choked her voice when she tried to speak, Jim stopped at the sound of his name being spoken. He turned to face her with tears in his eyes. But the next words spoken to him, left him in shock. As it did Sakeria.
"I so sorry… Please don't hate me… Please, I would die if u hated me Jim, you were always like my son and I still love you like one and I thought of you ever single day…"
"Hate you..?? Melfina… you think I hate you…"
"God, I'm so sorry for running away, I just couldn't stay with Gene after what he did to me…" After she said that, Melfina finally lifted her eyes off the floor to meet his. Jim had thought that he the old Melfina was lost, but now that the eyes had connected, he could still see the lost and sadness inside. Without saying another word, Jim walked up to the woman had looked up to and pulled her into a huge hug. Tears started to run tracks down her cheeks as she buried her face into his shirt and wept for the first time since that night.
"I love you… I love you…I love you… mom…" he whispered over and over to her and she cried.
Sakeria smiled as she walked down the hall to her room to change, knowing that Melfina had finally took one step forward to healing her past.
Soooo…. How was it..?!? Should I continue or stop right now, this is NOT a J/M fic. See ya next time… ^_^ P.S.- Please R&R!!
~*~Viddy~*~
Melfina woke up the next morning to find herself in Gene's arms, slowly the memories of last night advents fell together like pieces of puzzle, (OH god no… I can't let this happen again… I refuse to be hurt again!?!) She ruffly pushed his arms off her and scrambled into a counter. Gene instantly felt the loss of her warm body against his, he started to moan her name and his arms reached out to try and pull her back to him. After a while he stopped, he opens his eyes to look where Melfina was only to see her get up and run away from him. He followed her down the hall and out the hatch into the spaceport city. (Melfina, why do u keep running from me…) Gene started to look for her in the streets. What he didn't know was that Melfina was hoping for him to do that.
"Good bye forever Gene…"Melfina whispered softly to the direction the outlaw had went as she ran back to her ship.
Sakeria woke to find her older sister preparing to launch out of port. She was confused… (Where did the red haired man go, the one Melfina was sleeping with on the floor.) She was about to ask her when she heard the hatch out, watched silently as a teenager with blond hair walked in, and looked around. Sakeria may have only been 10 years old, but she knew what she thought of him. (DAMN..!! He is HOT!!!)
"Melfina… are you here..!?!" Sakeria's sister turned around to see who was calling her name only to find herself lost in another pair of blue eyes, but this time it was topped with shaggy blond hair. When she finally registered who this guy was, Melfina gasped and reached out to touch him. Only to expect him to push her away, she quickly pulled back her hand and backed away from him. His blue eyes clouded over with hurt and confusion (Where did my Melfina go… why did she leave me, she was like my mother… Did I hurt her this bad? I'm so sorry Melfina; I will always love you..) Melfina looked up lust in time to catch that last look of hurt. Melfina tried one more time to talk to him.
"Jim…" sobs choked her voice when she tried to speak, Jim stopped at the sound of his name being spoken. He turned to face her with tears in his eyes. But the next words spoken to him, left him in shock. As it did Sakeria.
"I so sorry… Please don't hate me… Please, I would die if u hated me Jim, you were always like my son and I still love you like one and I thought of you ever single day…"
"Hate you..?? Melfina… you think I hate you…"
"God, I'm so sorry for running away, I just couldn't stay with Gene after what he did to me…" After she said that, Melfina finally lifted her eyes off the floor to meet his. Jim had thought that he the old Melfina was lost, but now that the eyes had connected, he could still see the lost and sadness inside. Without saying another word, Jim walked up to the woman had looked up to and pulled her into a huge hug. Tears started to run tracks down her cheeks as she buried her face into his shirt and wept for the first time since that night.
"I love you… I love you…I love you… mom…" he whispered over and over to her and she cried.
Sakeria smiled as she walked down the hall to her room to change, knowing that Melfina had finally took one step forward to healing her past.
Soooo…. How was it..?!? Should I continue or stop right now, this is NOT a J/M fic. See ya next time… ^_^ P.S.- Please R&R!!
~*~Viddy~*~