Disclaimer: see chapter 1 & if you don't recognize a character or species or place it's probably mine.
Thank you to everyone who reviewed.
Renee-sorry about the # 2, I'm just used to iming & emailing & writing notes to my friends like that
Arista Greenleaf-thanks. I wasn't sure if ne one would like it.
Cinda, Beatrice, & Jinn & everyone else who reviewed (I'm getting tired of adding a new name every time someone reviews, but keep reviewing and vote on a title.) I've been told about it and will continue with the words spelled out. & I'll try to make it more detailed, but this is my first fic & I don't know all the characters very well yet. Sorry if anyone is ooc.
If you give a signed review, I'll go look at the stuff you've written.
Good spells (not evil) are in s
Please tell me which title you want.
Ps: the ones on the left and the ones on the right are the same ones in eleven.
Under Darkness/ Nu Dùath
Within Darkness/ Im Dùath
Terror of Darkness/ Goe o Dùath
Hidden Fears/ Thurin Del
The Darkness Within/ I Dùath Im
Lord of Darkness / Brannon o Dùath
The Journey/ I Lend
Darkness Overthrown/ Dùath Tharhador
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the next morning
Aragon & Gimli
Deleb Guruthos
***************
"Gimli, Help me find some rein flowers. It is the only way to track the Morngwanu, Daeroch, & Gwathîr. It was created by ancient, wise, and powerful wizards to track them," Aragon explained while building up the fire.
"Aragon, what exactly does this plant look like?" Gimli wanted to know.
"It's a pure white flower with a light blue stem that glows softly when you seek it. Be sure to bow to the plank and politely ask for a flower. If you don't, you will most likely end up in a curse very difficult to break," Aragon answered.
So Gimli went off in search of the plant while Aragon went off to get some water.
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Gimli
***************
"How did I get stuck going after a plant," Gimli muttered under his breath, "This is a job for an elf, not a dwarf."
"You do wish to rescue your friend, do you not?" someone called from behind him.
Gimli spun around to see the speaker was a beautiful elf maid, clothed in all white & glowing softly.
"Of course I do," Gimli said, "May I ask your name?"
"My name is Meluibrennil & I am Queen & top sorceress of Brassenangol & I will assist you on your quest," The lady said. "The flower you seek is over the brook over there." `Maer galu an elvellon.'
Meluibrennil disappeared in a soft twinkling of light.
Gimli went over the brook on a bridge made of light that had appeared when Meluibrennil left. "I'm going to have to get her to teach me how to do that. Sure beats trying to swim or wade," Gimli said aloud.
When Gimli got to the other side, he saw a faint glow coming from atop a small hill. *That must be the flower, * Gimli thought as he climbed the hill. He was about to grab the flower when he remembered Aragon's warning, so he stepped back and bowed then asked, "The great plant called Rein, I have come to humbly ask for a flower."
"Why have you come to seek one of my flowers?" the plant asked, gradually glowing brighter.
"To rescue my friend captured by the Morngwanu," Gimli answered.
"Very well," the Rein said softly. Then a bright light flared and when it faded, in Gimli's hand was a softly glowing flower.
"Hurry back to you companion," Meluibrennil said, she was nowhere to be seen and it seemed her voice came from the air itself.
Gimli hurried back across the bridge and as soon as he reached the other side, it shimmered and disappeared. Then he went back to the camp.
***************
Meanwhile, with
Aragon,
(A/N, these take place
at roughly the same
time, and the Lady is
only at one place at
a time.)
***************
Aragon headed in the opposite direction heading for a small, clear stream he had seen the day before while traveling. When he arrived, he bent down to get some water and a voice behind him said, `Aragon, I have decided to help you with your quest. Take this amulet and give it to Legolas. He may be strong enough, but his ordeal may prove to be to much for him.'
Aragon turned around and saw an elven maid holding a necklace out to him. The necklace was made of pale silver and had a sapphire in the middle of the pendent surrounded by alternating rubies, white pearls, and black pearls.
``Tis beautiful Lady, may I be so bold as to ask of you your name?' Aragon asked with a bow.
`I cannot stop you from asking, but I can choose not to answer,' she said with a smile in her eyes, `my name is Meluibrennil & I am Queen & top sorceress of the Brassenangol.'
`I thank you for your assistance, Queen of the Light, I don't want to sound ungrateful, but why are you helping us?' Aragon asked.
`I loathe the Morngwanu, Daeroch, & Gwathîr and am forbidden to go against them directly. I also don't like people to suffer needlessly,' Meluibrennil said. `Maer galu an elvellon.'
She then disappeared in a shimmering of light.
Aragon got the water and putting the amulet in a silk pouch the lady had given him then hung the pouch around his neck then set off for camp.
***************
Back at camp
***************
"Gimli, did you get the rein flower?" Aragon wanted to know.
"Yes. A lady who called herself Meluibrennil came and showed me where to get the plant," Gimli answered.
"Seems we have both run into the Queen of the Light. `Tis strange, she usually stays in her realm with her husband," Aragon said. "Now give me the plant."
Gimli handed Aragon the plant and watched Aragon making the potion, entranced.
Tirio an i um gwaith gad Legolas Aragon chanted over and over above the boiling water with the rein flower.
Suddenly, a line of light led away from the camp, deeper into the land of Deleb Guruthos.
"We must follow the line before it fades," Aragon said starting to follow the line.(A/N. They are already packed and have grabbed their stuff.)
They followed the line until it led to a small cave, but when they went inside, they found themselves in a large cavern. Then the line disappeared, the spell was over.
To be continued. I'll write a new chapter for every five constructive reviews. Please no flames. Vote on a title please. If you give a signed review, I'll go read your stories. I'd like a beta reader if anyone wants to, e-mail me. The titles are:
Under Darkness/ Nu Dùath
Within Darkness/ Im Dùath
Terror of Darkness/ Goe o Dùath
Hidden Fears/ Thurin Del
The Darkness Within/ I Dùath Im
Lord of Darkness/ Brannon o Dùath
The Journey I Lend
Darkness Overthrown Dùath Tharhador
Choose one of these or feel free to tell me one of your own.
Thank you to everyone who reviewed.
Renee-sorry about the # 2, I'm just used to iming & emailing & writing notes to my friends like that
Arista Greenleaf-thanks. I wasn't sure if ne one would like it.
Cinda, Beatrice, & Jinn & everyone else who reviewed (I'm getting tired of adding a new name every time someone reviews, but keep reviewing and vote on a title.) I've been told about it and will continue with the words spelled out. & I'll try to make it more detailed, but this is my first fic & I don't know all the characters very well yet. Sorry if anyone is ooc.
If you give a signed review, I'll go look at the stuff you've written.
Good spells (not evil) are in s
Please tell me which title you want.
Ps: the ones on the left and the ones on the right are the same ones in eleven.
Under Darkness/ Nu Dùath
Within Darkness/ Im Dùath
Terror of Darkness/ Goe o Dùath
Hidden Fears/ Thurin Del
The Darkness Within/ I Dùath Im
Lord of Darkness / Brannon o Dùath
The Journey/ I Lend
Darkness Overthrown/ Dùath Tharhador
***************
the next morning
Aragon & Gimli
Deleb Guruthos
***************
"Gimli, Help me find some rein flowers. It is the only way to track the Morngwanu, Daeroch, & Gwathîr. It was created by ancient, wise, and powerful wizards to track them," Aragon explained while building up the fire.
"Aragon, what exactly does this plant look like?" Gimli wanted to know.
"It's a pure white flower with a light blue stem that glows softly when you seek it. Be sure to bow to the plank and politely ask for a flower. If you don't, you will most likely end up in a curse very difficult to break," Aragon answered.
So Gimli went off in search of the plant while Aragon went off to get some water.
***************
Gimli
***************
"How did I get stuck going after a plant," Gimli muttered under his breath, "This is a job for an elf, not a dwarf."
"You do wish to rescue your friend, do you not?" someone called from behind him.
Gimli spun around to see the speaker was a beautiful elf maid, clothed in all white & glowing softly.
"Of course I do," Gimli said, "May I ask your name?"
"My name is Meluibrennil & I am Queen & top sorceress of Brassenangol & I will assist you on your quest," The lady said. "The flower you seek is over the brook over there." `Maer galu an elvellon.'
Meluibrennil disappeared in a soft twinkling of light.
Gimli went over the brook on a bridge made of light that had appeared when Meluibrennil left. "I'm going to have to get her to teach me how to do that. Sure beats trying to swim or wade," Gimli said aloud.
When Gimli got to the other side, he saw a faint glow coming from atop a small hill. *That must be the flower, * Gimli thought as he climbed the hill. He was about to grab the flower when he remembered Aragon's warning, so he stepped back and bowed then asked, "The great plant called Rein, I have come to humbly ask for a flower."
"Why have you come to seek one of my flowers?" the plant asked, gradually glowing brighter.
"To rescue my friend captured by the Morngwanu," Gimli answered.
"Very well," the Rein said softly. Then a bright light flared and when it faded, in Gimli's hand was a softly glowing flower.
"Hurry back to you companion," Meluibrennil said, she was nowhere to be seen and it seemed her voice came from the air itself.
Gimli hurried back across the bridge and as soon as he reached the other side, it shimmered and disappeared. Then he went back to the camp.
***************
Meanwhile, with
Aragon,
(A/N, these take place
at roughly the same
time, and the Lady is
only at one place at
a time.)
***************
Aragon headed in the opposite direction heading for a small, clear stream he had seen the day before while traveling. When he arrived, he bent down to get some water and a voice behind him said, `Aragon, I have decided to help you with your quest. Take this amulet and give it to Legolas. He may be strong enough, but his ordeal may prove to be to much for him.'
Aragon turned around and saw an elven maid holding a necklace out to him. The necklace was made of pale silver and had a sapphire in the middle of the pendent surrounded by alternating rubies, white pearls, and black pearls.
``Tis beautiful Lady, may I be so bold as to ask of you your name?' Aragon asked with a bow.
`I cannot stop you from asking, but I can choose not to answer,' she said with a smile in her eyes, `my name is Meluibrennil & I am Queen & top sorceress of the Brassenangol.'
`I thank you for your assistance, Queen of the Light, I don't want to sound ungrateful, but why are you helping us?' Aragon asked.
`I loathe the Morngwanu, Daeroch, & Gwathîr and am forbidden to go against them directly. I also don't like people to suffer needlessly,' Meluibrennil said. `Maer galu an elvellon.'
She then disappeared in a shimmering of light.
Aragon got the water and putting the amulet in a silk pouch the lady had given him then hung the pouch around his neck then set off for camp.
***************
Back at camp
***************
"Gimli, did you get the rein flower?" Aragon wanted to know.
"Yes. A lady who called herself Meluibrennil came and showed me where to get the plant," Gimli answered.
"Seems we have both run into the Queen of the Light. `Tis strange, she usually stays in her realm with her husband," Aragon said. "Now give me the plant."
Gimli handed Aragon the plant and watched Aragon making the potion, entranced.
Tirio an i um gwaith gad Legolas Aragon chanted over and over above the boiling water with the rein flower.
Suddenly, a line of light led away from the camp, deeper into the land of Deleb Guruthos.
"We must follow the line before it fades," Aragon said starting to follow the line.(A/N. They are already packed and have grabbed their stuff.)
They followed the line until it led to a small cave, but when they went inside, they found themselves in a large cavern. Then the line disappeared, the spell was over.
To be continued. I'll write a new chapter for every five constructive reviews. Please no flames. Vote on a title please. If you give a signed review, I'll go read your stories. I'd like a beta reader if anyone wants to, e-mail me. The titles are:
Under Darkness/ Nu Dùath
Within Darkness/ Im Dùath
Terror of Darkness/ Goe o Dùath
Hidden Fears/ Thurin Del
The Darkness Within/ I Dùath Im
Lord of Darkness/ Brannon o Dùath
The Journey I Lend
Darkness Overthrown Dùath Tharhador
Choose one of these or feel free to tell me one of your own.