Kay, well, today I was just wondering how confusing a fanfic would be without puncuation, so I made this. Review and tell me if you thought it was as confusing as I thought it was. This story isn't the best, but I didn't want to go and make a huge good story on something like this.

Go to chapter two to see this with puncuation.
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Hey Brenda Holly yelled as she stirred her coffee it was Mocha and it was really good

Dont call me Brenda you freak Shannen slapped Holly playfully Holly smiled

Hey wheres Alyssa Julian asked

Oh shes outside right now with Rose answered Kit the Cat Everyone stared and gasped for Kit had talked Lots of Wows came from around the room

Suddenly the doorbell rang Ill get it said Julian and he and Brian ran to the door It ended up being Aaron Spelling

Hey everyone Party I see isnt that so cute anyway I just stopped by to see if you guys were up for dinner tonight Brenda I hope you come especially

Everyone STOP CALLING ME BRENDA Shannen yelled loudly and almost knocked Aaron down

Watch it Aaron yelled and they all laughed together and Alyssa entered with Rose

Hey guys wheres the party I wanna go she said and they laughed some more Okay now seriously where is it

Hahaha Alyssa said Brian and they smiled Ok whats so funny about that absoultly nothing so dont laugh

Okay well I gotta go Shannen said not so comfortable being around Rose After all Rose was her replacement See you guys later

Bye honey call you later or you call me Holly hugged Shannen and she left

No come back said Rose I want to get to know you I know that sounds rushed but even though I replaced you I think that you could give me some tips on how to act like a witch

Shannen wasn't sure how to react after all she barely knew the gal but she decided to give her a try

Yeah stay please Alyssa said and smiled

Shannen returned the smile Maybe me and Alyssa can patch things up now she thought

They all went in smiling and laughing