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"Hey Brenda!" Holly yelled as she stirred her coffee. It was Mocha and it was really good.
"Don't call me Brenda you freak!" Shannen slapped Holly playfully. Holly smiled.
"Hey where's Alyssa?" Julian asked.
"Oh she's outside right now with Rose," answered Kit the Cat. Everyone stared and gasped, for Kit had talked! Lots of 'Wows' came from around the room.
Suddenly the doorbell rang. "I'll get it," said Julian, and he and Brian ran to the door. It ended up being Aaron Spelling.
"Hey everyone! Party I see, isn't that so cute. Anyway I just stopped by to see if you guys were up for dinner tonight. Brenda I hope you come especially."
"Everyone STOP CALLING ME BRENDA!" Shannen yelled loudly, and almost knocked Aaron down!
"Watch it!" Aaron yelled, and they all laughed together. Alyssa entered with Rose.
"Hey guys where's the party? I wanna go!" she said, and they laughed some more. "Okay now seriously where is it?"
"Hahaha Alyssa," said Brian and they smiled. "Ok what's so funny about that? Absoultly nothing, so don't laugh."
"Okay, well I gotta go," Shannen said, not so comfortable being around Rose. After all, Rose was her replacement. "See you guys later."
"Bye honey! Call you later, or you call me!" Holly hugged Shannen and she left.
"No come back!" said Rose. "I want to get to know you. I know that sounds rushed, but even though I replaced you, I think that you could give me some tips on acting like a witch!"
Shannen wasn't sure how to react. After all, she barely knew the gal! But she decided to give her a try.
"Yeah stay please," Alyssa said and smiled.
Shannen returned the smile. 'Maybe me and Alyssa can patch things up now!' she thought.
They all went in smiling and laughing.
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"Hey Brenda!" Holly yelled as she stirred her coffee. It was Mocha and it was really good.
"Don't call me Brenda you freak!" Shannen slapped Holly playfully. Holly smiled.
"Hey where's Alyssa?" Julian asked.
"Oh she's outside right now with Rose," answered Kit the Cat. Everyone stared and gasped, for Kit had talked! Lots of 'Wows' came from around the room.
Suddenly the doorbell rang. "I'll get it," said Julian, and he and Brian ran to the door. It ended up being Aaron Spelling.
"Hey everyone! Party I see, isn't that so cute. Anyway I just stopped by to see if you guys were up for dinner tonight. Brenda I hope you come especially."
"Everyone STOP CALLING ME BRENDA!" Shannen yelled loudly, and almost knocked Aaron down!
"Watch it!" Aaron yelled, and they all laughed together. Alyssa entered with Rose.
"Hey guys where's the party? I wanna go!" she said, and they laughed some more. "Okay now seriously where is it?"
"Hahaha Alyssa," said Brian and they smiled. "Ok what's so funny about that? Absoultly nothing, so don't laugh."
"Okay, well I gotta go," Shannen said, not so comfortable being around Rose. After all, Rose was her replacement. "See you guys later."
"Bye honey! Call you later, or you call me!" Holly hugged Shannen and she left.
"No come back!" said Rose. "I want to get to know you. I know that sounds rushed, but even though I replaced you, I think that you could give me some tips on acting like a witch!"
Shannen wasn't sure how to react. After all, she barely knew the gal! But she decided to give her a try.
"Yeah stay please," Alyssa said and smiled.
Shannen returned the smile. 'Maybe me and Alyssa can patch things up now!' she thought.
They all went in smiling and laughing.