AN- Helllooo and thanx sssooooo much to every one who has reviewed,
especially.. O'Haragal- Thanx!
Sweet Star- Oh wow thank you so much!
fluffy junior- Thank-you, so am I !!!
Time Twins- My work, good? What ARE you taking!? Thanx though!
Kali Hana Katemii- Well at first I thought so but everyone else has her dreaming later and this is my fic, and if its her future, why should she not know it earlier?
Hermione- Hey gal! Thanx for reviewin. WASSUP?
To make it easier for you the normal story is in * black * Lily's thoughts are in * Blue * and her diary entries are in * Red *.
Disclaimer- I own Rose, Nicky, Miranda, Ashley and a couple others- the rest are J.K.'s and who she sees fit to own them. As you probably know, 'The Lord Of The Rings' is J.R.R. Tolkien's and 'The Beatles' belong to George, Ringo, John and Paul.
Lily took a deep breath in and sighed slowly. This is it. This is it. I am about to go to Hogwarts.
'Dear, how do you get onto the train?' Asked her mother,
It then struck Lily that she had no idea how to get onto the train. 'Um, I dunno,' Replied Lily. She was starting to feel a bit panicky. Then something caught her eye. A boy next to her (he looked about fifteen/sixteen) had just run through a solid metal barrier. She blinked. This is NOT normal. Then it dawned on her- He's a wizard! Oh, so that's how you get onto the train!
She bid her family farewell and after lots of hugs and kisses- and tears from her dad- she ran through the barrier- and stopped dead in her tracks. In front of her stood a bright red steam train. It whistled loudly just as Lily jumped onto it and started moving. Phew! That was close! Lily made her way through the train until at last she found an empty compartment at the very back.
Lily got her book which she was reading at the moment, titled 'Lord of The Rings,' but had not yet read two sentences before someone barged in, a boy with dark brown hair and brown eyes. Lily was so busy studying him that she didn't notice the other boy that entered behind him.
'Hi,' Lily smiled.
The first boy gave her a Cheshire grin, 'Hi,' he extended his right hand, 'I'm Sirius.'
The second boy, who Lily still had not noticed, cleared his throat loudly. Lily jumped up and Sirius continued, 'Oh yeah, this is James.'
Lily smiled as her and James shook hands and were acquainted. He had chocolate-brown hair with bright, warm brown eyes that you couldn't help sinking into. He had an identical grin to Sirius'.
Soon they were all chatting happily. Lily discovered that James and Sirius were both prank masters, really fun and had known each other for all their lives as their parents were friends. James and Sirius discovered that Lily was gorgeous. All too soon the journey was over and they were getting off the train. The wind was sharp and whipped everything hard, causing the journey across the lake to be, urm... interesting. When at last they managed to get across to the other side a very young teacher called Professor McGonagall led them into the entrance hall to dry off. Soon they would enter the Great Hall, she had told them, and meet their fellow students, after being sorted into houses. James and Sirius had informed Lily of all the houses and their histories on the train journey. If it had not been for the fact that James and Sirius were practically destined to be in Griffindor, Lily would have probably wanted to be in Ravenclaw, but since she got on so well with James and Sirius, she desperately wanted to be in Griffindor.
Soon they were in the hall and the hat was brought in on a stool. after it's song and lots of applause, the sorting began. McGonagall read names off a scroll of parchment and that person sat on the stool and placed the hat on their head.
After 'Andrews , Ashley' (GRIFFINDOR!) it was Sirius' turn. He grinned at James and winked at Lily before practically running to the stool and jamming the hat onto his head. The Sorting Hat barely touched his hair before bellowing 'GRIFFINDOR!' Sirius' grin became even larger (if that is possible) and she took his place next to Ashley. The sorting went on until it came to 'Evans. Lily!' Lily crossed her fingers and smiled at James before sitting on the stool and placing the hat gingerly on her head. 'Hmmmmm...' said a little voice in her ear, 'yes, lots of potential I see, Ravenclaw?' Lily thought 'Griffindor, Griffindor, Please Griffindor,' but couldn't have been more surprised when the hat answered back, 'Griffindor? Yes... Maybe... Ah... As I thought, Your whole future is already planned. I cannot alter it. Yes. It has to be... GRIFFINDOR!' Lily was so happy that she nearly forgot to take the hat off. She sat down in between Sirius and Ashley, a grin plastered on her face. Sirius patted her on the back and Ashley introduced herself. She was also muggle born, and they began a discussion about 'The Beatles'. The rest of the sorting flew by and pretty soon James was next to Sirius asking him 'What are they talking about?' gesturing at Lily and Ashley.
Sirius looked doubtful and answered 'Bugs.'
Lily and Ashley laughed before explaining who 'The Beatles' were.
The feast was delicious, but went by far too quickly, and soon Lily and Ashley were lying down in their new beds in their dorm, chatting happily with Rose, Nicky and Miranda, the other Griffindor girls. After a bit Lily drifted off to sleep. This time she did not, thankfully, dream of Bawling Babies and Green Light. She dreamt of a certain pair of bright brown eyes, ones which you just couldn't help sinking into.
AN- Well, I know that was rushed and not very good, but I wanted to get that bit done so that I could carry on with the rest, which should be interesting!!!!!
Important: I need every one to review and tell me whether in this fic Lily and James should first hate each other then fall in Lurve, or whether they should just be in Lurve, or first be friends then fall in Lurve.
Roo xx
*_*
Oh and by the way I need a beta reader, I was thinking maybe Kali Hana Katemii. Hermione will also be one but I want two!! I have no Idea what a beta reader means it just sounds good, I need someone who will criticize my work!!!
Sweet Star- Oh wow thank you so much!
fluffy junior- Thank-you, so am I !!!
Time Twins- My work, good? What ARE you taking!? Thanx though!
Kali Hana Katemii- Well at first I thought so but everyone else has her dreaming later and this is my fic, and if its her future, why should she not know it earlier?
Hermione- Hey gal! Thanx for reviewin. WASSUP?
To make it easier for you the normal story is in * black * Lily's thoughts are in * Blue * and her diary entries are in * Red *.
Disclaimer- I own Rose, Nicky, Miranda, Ashley and a couple others- the rest are J.K.'s and who she sees fit to own them. As you probably know, 'The Lord Of The Rings' is J.R.R. Tolkien's and 'The Beatles' belong to George, Ringo, John and Paul.
Lily took a deep breath in and sighed slowly. This is it. This is it. I am about to go to Hogwarts.
'Dear, how do you get onto the train?' Asked her mother,
It then struck Lily that she had no idea how to get onto the train. 'Um, I dunno,' Replied Lily. She was starting to feel a bit panicky. Then something caught her eye. A boy next to her (he looked about fifteen/sixteen) had just run through a solid metal barrier. She blinked. This is NOT normal. Then it dawned on her- He's a wizard! Oh, so that's how you get onto the train!
She bid her family farewell and after lots of hugs and kisses- and tears from her dad- she ran through the barrier- and stopped dead in her tracks. In front of her stood a bright red steam train. It whistled loudly just as Lily jumped onto it and started moving. Phew! That was close! Lily made her way through the train until at last she found an empty compartment at the very back.
Lily got her book which she was reading at the moment, titled 'Lord of The Rings,' but had not yet read two sentences before someone barged in, a boy with dark brown hair and brown eyes. Lily was so busy studying him that she didn't notice the other boy that entered behind him.
'Hi,' Lily smiled.
The first boy gave her a Cheshire grin, 'Hi,' he extended his right hand, 'I'm Sirius.'
The second boy, who Lily still had not noticed, cleared his throat loudly. Lily jumped up and Sirius continued, 'Oh yeah, this is James.'
Lily smiled as her and James shook hands and were acquainted. He had chocolate-brown hair with bright, warm brown eyes that you couldn't help sinking into. He had an identical grin to Sirius'.
Soon they were all chatting happily. Lily discovered that James and Sirius were both prank masters, really fun and had known each other for all their lives as their parents were friends. James and Sirius discovered that Lily was gorgeous. All too soon the journey was over and they were getting off the train. The wind was sharp and whipped everything hard, causing the journey across the lake to be, urm... interesting. When at last they managed to get across to the other side a very young teacher called Professor McGonagall led them into the entrance hall to dry off. Soon they would enter the Great Hall, she had told them, and meet their fellow students, after being sorted into houses. James and Sirius had informed Lily of all the houses and their histories on the train journey. If it had not been for the fact that James and Sirius were practically destined to be in Griffindor, Lily would have probably wanted to be in Ravenclaw, but since she got on so well with James and Sirius, she desperately wanted to be in Griffindor.
Soon they were in the hall and the hat was brought in on a stool. after it's song and lots of applause, the sorting began. McGonagall read names off a scroll of parchment and that person sat on the stool and placed the hat on their head.
After 'Andrews , Ashley' (GRIFFINDOR!) it was Sirius' turn. He grinned at James and winked at Lily before practically running to the stool and jamming the hat onto his head. The Sorting Hat barely touched his hair before bellowing 'GRIFFINDOR!' Sirius' grin became even larger (if that is possible) and she took his place next to Ashley. The sorting went on until it came to 'Evans. Lily!' Lily crossed her fingers and smiled at James before sitting on the stool and placing the hat gingerly on her head. 'Hmmmmm...' said a little voice in her ear, 'yes, lots of potential I see, Ravenclaw?' Lily thought 'Griffindor, Griffindor, Please Griffindor,' but couldn't have been more surprised when the hat answered back, 'Griffindor? Yes... Maybe... Ah... As I thought, Your whole future is already planned. I cannot alter it. Yes. It has to be... GRIFFINDOR!' Lily was so happy that she nearly forgot to take the hat off. She sat down in between Sirius and Ashley, a grin plastered on her face. Sirius patted her on the back and Ashley introduced herself. She was also muggle born, and they began a discussion about 'The Beatles'. The rest of the sorting flew by and pretty soon James was next to Sirius asking him 'What are they talking about?' gesturing at Lily and Ashley.
Sirius looked doubtful and answered 'Bugs.'
Lily and Ashley laughed before explaining who 'The Beatles' were.
The feast was delicious, but went by far too quickly, and soon Lily and Ashley were lying down in their new beds in their dorm, chatting happily with Rose, Nicky and Miranda, the other Griffindor girls. After a bit Lily drifted off to sleep. This time she did not, thankfully, dream of Bawling Babies and Green Light. She dreamt of a certain pair of bright brown eyes, ones which you just couldn't help sinking into.
AN- Well, I know that was rushed and not very good, but I wanted to get that bit done so that I could carry on with the rest, which should be interesting!!!!!
Important: I need every one to review and tell me whether in this fic Lily and James should first hate each other then fall in Lurve, or whether they should just be in Lurve, or first be friends then fall in Lurve.
Roo xx
*_*
Oh and by the way I need a beta reader, I was thinking maybe Kali Hana Katemii. Hermione will also be one but I want two!! I have no Idea what a beta reader means it just sounds good, I need someone who will criticize my work!!!