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Serena blushed as she gazed at Justin. He had caught her before she had fallen. Just like Darien used to do.... She forced the tears back. She couldn't cry infront of him. She managed a smile.
"Hi again." Justin greeted her.
"Hi." Serena said, shyly.
"Well, since you're here and all, would you like to go out to ice cream with me?" Justin asked with an almost bewitching smile.
"Okay, I'd love that." Serena said, cheering up.
Justin offered her his arm, and she took it. Together they walked down the sidewalk, oblivious to the fact that Darien had been watching.
***Darien's thoughts***
Darien had been strolling to school, when he saw Serena. She was unusually early. He sighed, watching her golden hair sway in the wind as she walked to school, a dejected look on her face. His heart had broken in two. Maybe he had jumped to a conclusion about her blaming Rini. And he certainly hadn't meant to strike her. It was the last thing he would have wanted to do. He made up his mind to apologize, and was just about to cross the street when he saw her foot catch in a crack in the sidewalk. She made an attempt to try and correct her balance, but it failed. Just then a guy with blonde hair and green eyes appeared out of nowhere, it seemed, and caught her.
She blushed and struggled to stand up. Did she know this guy? Had she seen him before?
They exchanged conversation (which Darien couldn't hear) and then Serena took his arm and they both walked off together.
He was too late. He had abandoned his Serena, his only love. Not on purpose, but he had been under so much stress lately. He had wanted to run back and comfort her, and tell her that he had been an idiot, but he hadn't. It was all his fault. Now he had lost her to another. The guy had probably found her on the sidewalk crying shortly after Darien had struck her. He had probably comforted her. And then, she had begun to fall for him. It hit Darien like a punch in the chest. Serena had fallen in love with some one else, and it was his fault. He silently cursed himself. He was such a fool. An idiot. How had he let this happen?
He fought back the tears that threatened to stream down his face. But it hurt. Probably not near as much as he had hurt Serena, though. He shook his head and still fighting his biterness, walked the other way.
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Serena was finding Justin more and more attractive. His green eyes seemed to pull her in, like she would get lost in them forever. He look so cute when he smiled. He had a sense of humor, and was nice to boot. Although she did enjoy spending time with him, she still didn't think she could learn to love again.
They were sitting in the ice cream parlor, just finishing up their ice cream. Serena had gotten chocolate chip cookie dough, and Justin had gotten a Chocolate cone dipped in butterscotch topping. The had had a rather delightful conversation. Except for when she had to tell him about what had happened between her and Darien.
"Let's go for a walk in the park." Suggested Justin.
"Ok." Serena said.
They arrived at the park and Justin said he wanted to walk through the pathway in the small forest area. Serena agreed it would be nice.
As they strolled into the forest, Justin stopped.
"Serena..." He said.
Serena looked up at him. He looked so innocent.
"It... It was me. Who called your name." Justin said.
"Huh?" Serena said, not understanding.
"When no one was there. That was me." He said, more sure of himself.
"But how-"
"Never mind that. The important thing is, I think we were destined to be together. Serena, I've fallen in love with you." He said.
Serena stepped back, obviously shocked.
"But it's only been a few days since we met!" She exclaimed.
"On the Moon Kingdom I watched from afar. I knew of everything you did. Your acts of kindness, your personality... But before I could approach you, Queen Beryl attacked..." He said.
Serena gasped.
"What do you think? Do you think there's a chance that you might love me?" He asked, a hopeful look in his eyes.
Serena closed her mouth, which had been ajar. She thought for a minute.
"Justin... I know it took a lot of courage to say that." She said, thoughtfully.
He nodded.
"But my heart still belongs to Darien." She said with confidence.
His look of gentleness turned to a look of anger.
"How can you still love him after all he's done to you!? He hit you Serena! He doesn't deserve you! Come with me Serena! I would never hurt you like he did!" Justin said, his face dead serious.
"I..I can't." Serena stated.
"Well if you can't make the choice on your own, I'll have to make it for you!" He said, his hand grabbing for Serena's wrist.
Strangely enough, a foot came flying out of nowhere and hit him smack dab in the temple (in his head).
"Don't you dare touch her!" Said the voice of Lita.
Serena backed up so that she was with Lita and the other girls, all of whom were looking majorly peeved.
Justin was still holding his head in his hands.
"You might pack quite a punch, but I pack something more powerful!" He said, throwing a ball of energy at Lita.
She ducked and it narrowly skimmed her head. She growled and looked without looking back, commanded rather than asked, "Ready Scouts!?"
"Jupiter Star Power!"
"Mars Star Power!"
"Mercury Star Power!"
"Venus Star Power!"
"Moon Crystal Power!" (AN: I'm not sure if this goes along with the scouts' 'star' power, but I've read so many manga's that I forgot which goes with which!! ^.^')
The sky flashed with bright lights as all five scouts transformed.
Justin threw an energy beam at the scouts, starting with Sailor Jupiter, that he then swung around the half circle of scouts, blasting them all with the energy.
They flew back a couple feet, Jupiter and Mars being slammed into trees, Venus doing a flip (not on purpose) in air and landing roughly on the ground, and Mercury being shoved into Moon, both of them crashing to the ground. They could all barely stand up.
"He's too powerful..." Mercury said, one eye open, one squinted in pain.
"We need help." Venus said.
As if right on cue, Sailor Neptune and Sailor Uranus did a double teamed kick straight into Justin's stomach, followed by Sailor Pluto and Sailor Saturn.
Justin returned the attack with one of his own. He punched Uranus squarely in the jaw, and twisted Neptune's arm around, then flung her mercilessly to the ground.
"Uranus! Neptune!" Sailor Moon cried out.
He then proceeded to elbow Pluto in the stomach. Saturn was running up behind him, her Silence Glaive poised and ready to strike. He saw in coming and grabbed the handle part just below the Glaive and flung it and Saturn over his back.
"NOOO!" Sailor Moon once again cried out in anguish.
He then sent out some electrifying energy which hit all of the scouts besides Sailor Moon.
"Stop! Stop it!!!!!" Moon shouted, tears streaming down her face.
She stood up and began running towards him. Tears blurred her vision as she threw a punch at him. He side stepped it and caught her waist, pulled her back up, and got her in a headlock. He grinned evilly. He had gotten what he had come for.
Just then Tuxedo Mask arrived on the scene. However, it was too late. Justin vanished, Sailor Moon and all.
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How did ya like the battle scene? Good? Needed work? Please review, it's what I thrive on. lol. I'm trying to make this as original as possible, so please don't comment on the plot being 'over used'. With how many Sailor Moon fan fics in the world, it's hard to create a totally different plot that hasn't been used at least once before. Besides, I happen to like the Serena-gets-kidnapped plot. ^.^ lol. Anyway, I wanted to introduce Chibi Chibi earlier in the story to comfort Serena, but she didn't fit the timeline! ^.^ Gotta go, I'll be working on the next chapter. Keep those reviews coming!
~Seien
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Serena blushed as she gazed at Justin. He had caught her before she had fallen. Just like Darien used to do.... She forced the tears back. She couldn't cry infront of him. She managed a smile.
"Hi again." Justin greeted her.
"Hi." Serena said, shyly.
"Well, since you're here and all, would you like to go out to ice cream with me?" Justin asked with an almost bewitching smile.
"Okay, I'd love that." Serena said, cheering up.
Justin offered her his arm, and she took it. Together they walked down the sidewalk, oblivious to the fact that Darien had been watching.
***Darien's thoughts***
Darien had been strolling to school, when he saw Serena. She was unusually early. He sighed, watching her golden hair sway in the wind as she walked to school, a dejected look on her face. His heart had broken in two. Maybe he had jumped to a conclusion about her blaming Rini. And he certainly hadn't meant to strike her. It was the last thing he would have wanted to do. He made up his mind to apologize, and was just about to cross the street when he saw her foot catch in a crack in the sidewalk. She made an attempt to try and correct her balance, but it failed. Just then a guy with blonde hair and green eyes appeared out of nowhere, it seemed, and caught her.
She blushed and struggled to stand up. Did she know this guy? Had she seen him before?
They exchanged conversation (which Darien couldn't hear) and then Serena took his arm and they both walked off together.
He was too late. He had abandoned his Serena, his only love. Not on purpose, but he had been under so much stress lately. He had wanted to run back and comfort her, and tell her that he had been an idiot, but he hadn't. It was all his fault. Now he had lost her to another. The guy had probably found her on the sidewalk crying shortly after Darien had struck her. He had probably comforted her. And then, she had begun to fall for him. It hit Darien like a punch in the chest. Serena had fallen in love with some one else, and it was his fault. He silently cursed himself. He was such a fool. An idiot. How had he let this happen?
He fought back the tears that threatened to stream down his face. But it hurt. Probably not near as much as he had hurt Serena, though. He shook his head and still fighting his biterness, walked the other way.
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Serena was finding Justin more and more attractive. His green eyes seemed to pull her in, like she would get lost in them forever. He look so cute when he smiled. He had a sense of humor, and was nice to boot. Although she did enjoy spending time with him, she still didn't think she could learn to love again.
They were sitting in the ice cream parlor, just finishing up their ice cream. Serena had gotten chocolate chip cookie dough, and Justin had gotten a Chocolate cone dipped in butterscotch topping. The had had a rather delightful conversation. Except for when she had to tell him about what had happened between her and Darien.
"Let's go for a walk in the park." Suggested Justin.
"Ok." Serena said.
They arrived at the park and Justin said he wanted to walk through the pathway in the small forest area. Serena agreed it would be nice.
As they strolled into the forest, Justin stopped.
"Serena..." He said.
Serena looked up at him. He looked so innocent.
"It... It was me. Who called your name." Justin said.
"Huh?" Serena said, not understanding.
"When no one was there. That was me." He said, more sure of himself.
"But how-"
"Never mind that. The important thing is, I think we were destined to be together. Serena, I've fallen in love with you." He said.
Serena stepped back, obviously shocked.
"But it's only been a few days since we met!" She exclaimed.
"On the Moon Kingdom I watched from afar. I knew of everything you did. Your acts of kindness, your personality... But before I could approach you, Queen Beryl attacked..." He said.
Serena gasped.
"What do you think? Do you think there's a chance that you might love me?" He asked, a hopeful look in his eyes.
Serena closed her mouth, which had been ajar. She thought for a minute.
"Justin... I know it took a lot of courage to say that." She said, thoughtfully.
He nodded.
"But my heart still belongs to Darien." She said with confidence.
His look of gentleness turned to a look of anger.
"How can you still love him after all he's done to you!? He hit you Serena! He doesn't deserve you! Come with me Serena! I would never hurt you like he did!" Justin said, his face dead serious.
"I..I can't." Serena stated.
"Well if you can't make the choice on your own, I'll have to make it for you!" He said, his hand grabbing for Serena's wrist.
Strangely enough, a foot came flying out of nowhere and hit him smack dab in the temple (in his head).
"Don't you dare touch her!" Said the voice of Lita.
Serena backed up so that she was with Lita and the other girls, all of whom were looking majorly peeved.
Justin was still holding his head in his hands.
"You might pack quite a punch, but I pack something more powerful!" He said, throwing a ball of energy at Lita.
She ducked and it narrowly skimmed her head. She growled and looked without looking back, commanded rather than asked, "Ready Scouts!?"
"Jupiter Star Power!"
"Mars Star Power!"
"Mercury Star Power!"
"Venus Star Power!"
"Moon Crystal Power!" (AN: I'm not sure if this goes along with the scouts' 'star' power, but I've read so many manga's that I forgot which goes with which!! ^.^')
The sky flashed with bright lights as all five scouts transformed.
Justin threw an energy beam at the scouts, starting with Sailor Jupiter, that he then swung around the half circle of scouts, blasting them all with the energy.
They flew back a couple feet, Jupiter and Mars being slammed into trees, Venus doing a flip (not on purpose) in air and landing roughly on the ground, and Mercury being shoved into Moon, both of them crashing to the ground. They could all barely stand up.
"He's too powerful..." Mercury said, one eye open, one squinted in pain.
"We need help." Venus said.
As if right on cue, Sailor Neptune and Sailor Uranus did a double teamed kick straight into Justin's stomach, followed by Sailor Pluto and Sailor Saturn.
Justin returned the attack with one of his own. He punched Uranus squarely in the jaw, and twisted Neptune's arm around, then flung her mercilessly to the ground.
"Uranus! Neptune!" Sailor Moon cried out.
He then proceeded to elbow Pluto in the stomach. Saturn was running up behind him, her Silence Glaive poised and ready to strike. He saw in coming and grabbed the handle part just below the Glaive and flung it and Saturn over his back.
"NOOO!" Sailor Moon once again cried out in anguish.
He then sent out some electrifying energy which hit all of the scouts besides Sailor Moon.
"Stop! Stop it!!!!!" Moon shouted, tears streaming down her face.
She stood up and began running towards him. Tears blurred her vision as she threw a punch at him. He side stepped it and caught her waist, pulled her back up, and got her in a headlock. He grinned evilly. He had gotten what he had come for.
Just then Tuxedo Mask arrived on the scene. However, it was too late. Justin vanished, Sailor Moon and all.
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How did ya like the battle scene? Good? Needed work? Please review, it's what I thrive on. lol. I'm trying to make this as original as possible, so please don't comment on the plot being 'over used'. With how many Sailor Moon fan fics in the world, it's hard to create a totally different plot that hasn't been used at least once before. Besides, I happen to like the Serena-gets-kidnapped plot. ^.^ lol. Anyway, I wanted to introduce Chibi Chibi earlier in the story to comfort Serena, but she didn't fit the timeline! ^.^ Gotta go, I'll be working on the next chapter. Keep those reviews coming!
~Seien