A/N: Hey hey hey! You guys, I am so sorry that I didn't get to update last
night, and this one is up so late tonight. Please forgive me! Me sorry! See
yesterday, I didn't get to see "The Rookie" again because my mom was busy.
**sobs** But that's okay, because I came up with a plan to see "The Rookie"
as many times as I want! LOL! See what I am going to do is like clean all
around the house and do everything and get money from my mom for it. Then,
whenever "The Rookie" starts playing at the 2 dollar theater in the mall
that I live close too, I'll go see it there as many times as I want with
all the money I saved! Cause this theater plays like older movies. See they
would have like the newer movies in regular movie theaters, and then at the
2 dollar place, they would show the ones that were released not too long
before. You know what I mean? I AM SUCH A GENIUS!!!! LOL! HAHA! Anyway, so
that's why I didn't get to post another one yesterday. And then today, well
I wasn't feeling like my usual self, cause I am really tried. I have been
having lots of problems sleeping and what not and I'm just wearing myself
out you know? Anyway, but I'm feeling a little better now, so I wanted to
get this chapter up for you guys. And I wanted to tell you guys, that if
you click on my pen name (RacerChic12880) that goes to my profile, you guys
can find out some more info about me, incase any of you wanna know stuff
about me (which I doubt you do cause I'm so boring! LOL)! THERE IS A
IMPORTANT MESSAGE IN THE AUTHORS NOTE BELOW SO READ IT!!! LOL! So now about
this chapter… Ah yes, last time, Melaine's mom was abusing her and she ran
to the Toretto's house…Vince opened the door… Blah, blah, blah! LOL! Well
here is the chapter… Enjoy guys! And BTW (by the way) I hope y'all enjoyed
your weekend! Here's the chapter…..
Melaine felt like she was going to collapse right there as Vince opened the door. She still had trouble seeing past all the tears, but was able to see Jesse, who looked horrified of what stood before him. Jesse and Vince put each one of Melaine's arms on their shoulders and slowly walked her in the door. Melaine couldn't take it anymore. The pain was too great. She looked in Jesse's direction opening her mouth to tell him something, but just as she did everything went black, and she fell on the floor.
"Oh my God!" Mia said franticly.
"You guys, we really need to get her to a doctor." Brian said helping Jesse and Vince get her back up onto her feet.
"Look how much blood is coming from her stomach." Leon noticed.
"That has to be a pretty bad cut there for all that blood to be coming out." Dom said pulling her shirt, which was covered in blood, up a little bit, but that was enough to see the cut, which was bleeding uncontrollably. "We need to get her to a hospital right now. We'll put her in the back of my car. I'll drive, Jesse you stay with here in case she wakes up, and Mia you can ride passenger with me. Everyone else you can either stay here, or drive separately and meet us at the hospital." Dom said quickly taking charge.
"We'll meet you at the hospital." Brian, Vince, Letty, and Leon said all together.
"Okay lets go guys." Dom said helping Jesse get Melaine out the door, and into the back of his car.
** AT THE HOSPITAL **
"Did they tell you anything yet?" Leon asked Dom after getting everyone coffee.
"No. Nothing… Thanks man." Dom said taking the cup of coffee.
"We have been here for two hours, and they still haven't told us anything! What if something happened? What if she is…" Mia said jumping to conclusions, while pacing back and forth.
"Mia, sit down. You're making me nervous." Jesse said quietly, also thinking of all the things that could be happening to her right now. If she is sleeping, in surgery, , alive, and what if she wasn't even with them anymore. What if she had died? She couldn't die though. Jesse needed to tell her what he was going to that night before they left the house, but now it was too late. She could be in there dead already… And he didn't even get to tell her that he loved her. Before jumping to anymore conclusions, a nurse walked out.
"Mia, and Dom Toretto?" The nurse called.
"That's us." Mia said running up to the nurse, with everyone following right behind her.
"You're here for a Melaine Johnson correct?" The nurse asked Mia and Dom.
"Yes that's right. How is she?" Mia asked wanting to see her right away.
"I'm sorry but the name "Melaine Johnson" was not found in any of our records. Is that a different name that she goes by?" The nurse asked Mia and Dom.
"Yeah it is. You will probably find something under "Melaine Toretto"." Dom said to the nurse.
"Okay, thank you. Excuse me for a moment." The nurse said walking away.
"How damn stupid would you be if you didn't change the last name of someone that you kidnapped?" Leon said referring to Mr. and Mrs. Johnson.
"See, whenever you get a name change you have to go to court. While your there, the judge will ask you why you want your name changed, and if they think that it is a good enough reason, then they will let you change it. They probably didn't because too many questions would be asked. Like if it wasn't their daughter, because she obviously didn't have the same last name and she was only 4 years old, they would want to know who were the other parents before you, and stuff like that. And if they adopted her, then they would have triple the questions asked." Brian said knowing what he was talking about, for he was an ex cop, and he knew the way the systems like that worked.
"Oh, well when you put it like that…" Leon began, but was then cut off by the nurse who walked back into the room.
"Yes, we found a "Melaine Toretto" You and Mia here are the brother and sister correct?" The nurse asked Dom.
"That's right. No how is she?" Dom asked wanted to know the condition of his little sister.
"I'm afraid not so well. She suffered a huge amount of blood loss from the wound on her stomach, and the other cuts she had around her body. She is very, badly bruised, and is unconscious at the moment." The nurse told them with a very sad, and hurt look on her face from the news that she had just delivered to them.
"Can we see her?" Mia asked quietly.
"Yes, but as I said, she is unconscious at the moment." The nurse told Mia.
"Thank you." Mia whispered as the nurse led Mia, Dom, Jesse, and the others to the hospital room that Melaine was in.
"Only one at a time please, and if you need anything just yell for me. My name is Nurse Morgan." The nurse told them.
"Thank you." Dom whispered, as Nurse Morgan walked away.
"So who's going in first?" Brian asked even though he knew that Dom, Mia, and Jesse, would probably be the first one's to see her.
"Here, it will go, Dom, Mia, Jesse, Brian, Vince, Leon, and then I'll go last. Is that okay with everyone?" Letty asked the group.
"Yeah." Brian replied.
"Sure." Mia said taking a seat next to the wall.
"That's fine." Jesse said taking the seat next to Mia. Vince, and Leon shook their heads in agreement, and Dom then slowly opened the hospital room door, and made his way in, shutting the door behind him.
A/N: What is Dom going to do? Is Jesse going to tell Melaine how he feels? Will Melaine ever wake up? Find out in the next chapter!!!! LOL!! heehee! I'm a evil evil little chica! LOL! Okay, now the important message… I don't think that I am going to be able to get another chapter up till the day after tomorrow (April 10, 2002) cause tomorrow I'm going to see "The Rookie with my friend Andrea!!!! YAY!!! WHOOHOO!!! I GET TO SEE MY FAVORITE SCENE!!!! YAY!!!!! LOL!! I'm going to freak when I see it, and Andrea's going to look at me like "Britani, what the heck are you doing?!" LOL! And then, I have to work on my history project for school… So, I repeat… THERE WILL BE NO CHAPTER 13 TOMORROW!!! IT WILL BE POSTED ON APRIL 10, 2002 (that's a Wednesday)!!! Okay? Well I hope you liked this one, and I'll get the next one on Wednesday! OH YEAH!! And another thing!!!! Our class is going on a field trip this Thursday and it's a 2 hour trip there and back, so I'm going to write more chapters to this story the whole way there and back so I'll have a lot done for y'all okay? Well I gotta go… I need to take a shower, then before I go to sleep write some more chapters to this story cause I bought a new 5 subject notebook today to put them in! LOL! Anyway… I'll talk to you guys on Wednesday… BUT IF IM LUCKY I'LL POST A QUICK CHAPTER TOMORROW… JUST A QUICK ONE SINCE I LOVE YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!!! LOL!!! I guess you'll just have to check back tomorrow night to see if I posted one huh? LOL! I'm so evil! But I love ya guys! LOL! Nighty nitght guys!
Melaine felt like she was going to collapse right there as Vince opened the door. She still had trouble seeing past all the tears, but was able to see Jesse, who looked horrified of what stood before him. Jesse and Vince put each one of Melaine's arms on their shoulders and slowly walked her in the door. Melaine couldn't take it anymore. The pain was too great. She looked in Jesse's direction opening her mouth to tell him something, but just as she did everything went black, and she fell on the floor.
"Oh my God!" Mia said franticly.
"You guys, we really need to get her to a doctor." Brian said helping Jesse and Vince get her back up onto her feet.
"Look how much blood is coming from her stomach." Leon noticed.
"That has to be a pretty bad cut there for all that blood to be coming out." Dom said pulling her shirt, which was covered in blood, up a little bit, but that was enough to see the cut, which was bleeding uncontrollably. "We need to get her to a hospital right now. We'll put her in the back of my car. I'll drive, Jesse you stay with here in case she wakes up, and Mia you can ride passenger with me. Everyone else you can either stay here, or drive separately and meet us at the hospital." Dom said quickly taking charge.
"We'll meet you at the hospital." Brian, Vince, Letty, and Leon said all together.
"Okay lets go guys." Dom said helping Jesse get Melaine out the door, and into the back of his car.
** AT THE HOSPITAL **
"Did they tell you anything yet?" Leon asked Dom after getting everyone coffee.
"No. Nothing… Thanks man." Dom said taking the cup of coffee.
"We have been here for two hours, and they still haven't told us anything! What if something happened? What if she is…" Mia said jumping to conclusions, while pacing back and forth.
"Mia, sit down. You're making me nervous." Jesse said quietly, also thinking of all the things that could be happening to her right now. If she is sleeping, in surgery, , alive, and what if she wasn't even with them anymore. What if she had died? She couldn't die though. Jesse needed to tell her what he was going to that night before they left the house, but now it was too late. She could be in there dead already… And he didn't even get to tell her that he loved her. Before jumping to anymore conclusions, a nurse walked out.
"Mia, and Dom Toretto?" The nurse called.
"That's us." Mia said running up to the nurse, with everyone following right behind her.
"You're here for a Melaine Johnson correct?" The nurse asked Mia and Dom.
"Yes that's right. How is she?" Mia asked wanting to see her right away.
"I'm sorry but the name "Melaine Johnson" was not found in any of our records. Is that a different name that she goes by?" The nurse asked Mia and Dom.
"Yeah it is. You will probably find something under "Melaine Toretto"." Dom said to the nurse.
"Okay, thank you. Excuse me for a moment." The nurse said walking away.
"How damn stupid would you be if you didn't change the last name of someone that you kidnapped?" Leon said referring to Mr. and Mrs. Johnson.
"See, whenever you get a name change you have to go to court. While your there, the judge will ask you why you want your name changed, and if they think that it is a good enough reason, then they will let you change it. They probably didn't because too many questions would be asked. Like if it wasn't their daughter, because she obviously didn't have the same last name and she was only 4 years old, they would want to know who were the other parents before you, and stuff like that. And if they adopted her, then they would have triple the questions asked." Brian said knowing what he was talking about, for he was an ex cop, and he knew the way the systems like that worked.
"Oh, well when you put it like that…" Leon began, but was then cut off by the nurse who walked back into the room.
"Yes, we found a "Melaine Toretto" You and Mia here are the brother and sister correct?" The nurse asked Dom.
"That's right. No how is she?" Dom asked wanted to know the condition of his little sister.
"I'm afraid not so well. She suffered a huge amount of blood loss from the wound on her stomach, and the other cuts she had around her body. She is very, badly bruised, and is unconscious at the moment." The nurse told them with a very sad, and hurt look on her face from the news that she had just delivered to them.
"Can we see her?" Mia asked quietly.
"Yes, but as I said, she is unconscious at the moment." The nurse told Mia.
"Thank you." Mia whispered as the nurse led Mia, Dom, Jesse, and the others to the hospital room that Melaine was in.
"Only one at a time please, and if you need anything just yell for me. My name is Nurse Morgan." The nurse told them.
"Thank you." Dom whispered, as Nurse Morgan walked away.
"So who's going in first?" Brian asked even though he knew that Dom, Mia, and Jesse, would probably be the first one's to see her.
"Here, it will go, Dom, Mia, Jesse, Brian, Vince, Leon, and then I'll go last. Is that okay with everyone?" Letty asked the group.
"Yeah." Brian replied.
"Sure." Mia said taking a seat next to the wall.
"That's fine." Jesse said taking the seat next to Mia. Vince, and Leon shook their heads in agreement, and Dom then slowly opened the hospital room door, and made his way in, shutting the door behind him.
A/N: What is Dom going to do? Is Jesse going to tell Melaine how he feels? Will Melaine ever wake up? Find out in the next chapter!!!! LOL!! heehee! I'm a evil evil little chica! LOL! Okay, now the important message… I don't think that I am going to be able to get another chapter up till the day after tomorrow (April 10, 2002) cause tomorrow I'm going to see "The Rookie with my friend Andrea!!!! YAY!!! WHOOHOO!!! I GET TO SEE MY FAVORITE SCENE!!!! YAY!!!!! LOL!! I'm going to freak when I see it, and Andrea's going to look at me like "Britani, what the heck are you doing?!" LOL! And then, I have to work on my history project for school… So, I repeat… THERE WILL BE NO CHAPTER 13 TOMORROW!!! IT WILL BE POSTED ON APRIL 10, 2002 (that's a Wednesday)!!! Okay? Well I hope you liked this one, and I'll get the next one on Wednesday! OH YEAH!! And another thing!!!! Our class is going on a field trip this Thursday and it's a 2 hour trip there and back, so I'm going to write more chapters to this story the whole way there and back so I'll have a lot done for y'all okay? Well I gotta go… I need to take a shower, then before I go to sleep write some more chapters to this story cause I bought a new 5 subject notebook today to put them in! LOL! Anyway… I'll talk to you guys on Wednesday… BUT IF IM LUCKY I'LL POST A QUICK CHAPTER TOMORROW… JUST A QUICK ONE SINCE I LOVE YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!!! LOL!!! I guess you'll just have to check back tomorrow night to see if I posted one huh? LOL! I'm so evil! But I love ya guys! LOL! Nighty nitght guys!
