Back.This is Chapter 5. I recieved two reviews talking about the way I wrote the story.The paragraphs and such. I couldn't change it on the other chapters becaus of my evil friend(i don't want to go into it). So i'll try to make it better in this chapter.
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Chapter 5
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"Accio Firebolt!"
In an instant,Harry's Firebolt came flying to him.He mounted his broom and took off in Draco's direction.Draco saw Harry coming and a rush of relief came through him.Unfortunatley,Drago had seen Harry too.He looked down at Draco,still smiling evily and raised on foot.At first Draco wasn't sure what Drago was doing,but then his eyes went wide.Drago stamped down on Draco's hand causing the young slytherin to let go of his broom. Harry gasped,seeing this and flew at full speed toward Draco.He steadied himself on his broom and caught Draco(without much ease)and then carefully landed on the ground.
"Are you okay?" Harry asked,looking worriedly at Draco.
"Yes." Draco reponded,not looking at Harry.
Draco dusted himself off then looked at Drago,who was now landing.He ran over to Draco but stopped a few inches away.His smile which had been evil not to long ago,was now a sad one. Drago's eyes were just as sad as his smile.
"Cousin Draco...I'm ever so sorry. I didn't mean to-" Drago was cut off by Draco punching him hard in the face. He stumbled backward and fell to the ground.He held the spot where Draco had punched him with his left hand and looked up at his cousin who was looking down upon him,a look of hatred in his stormy grey eyes.
"You...you...YOU NUTCASE!" Draco shrieked, "Just WHO do you think you are?! You try to kill me for..for... I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW MANY TIMES and THEN you say 'Cousin Draco...I'm ever so sorry. I didn't mean to.'"
Draco breathed heavily,still looking down upon his cousin.Then he let out a frustrated scream and stomped back to the castle. But not before yelling out a 'Stay out of my life you Son of a bitch' at the top of his lungs.
Draco watched his cousin go and stood.A small sad smile still on his face,he glanced at Harry,smiling lightly. Harry just gave him a look of disgust and went after Draco. Drago looked down at his feet,still smiling softly. Then,very slowly,he began to giggle. The giggle turned into a chuckle and the chuckle turned into a complete laugh.He fell to the ground,laughing like a crazy person.
After about 3 minutes of laughing he sat up straight,wiping tears from his eyes,then stood and dusted himself off. His perky smile had returned as he looked at teh castle,his eyes glinting mischieviously. He began walking toward the castle,a single thought in his head, 'Poor Cousin Draco....'
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Okay...that sucked. I didn't even make it long enough...Oh well.... I hope the way I wrote it made things easier. Anyway...
*gets an announcer like voice* What is Drago up to? Will Draco and Harry *ever* admit that they like one another? Find out! On...CHAPTER 6!
Bye bye now!
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Chapter 5
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"Accio Firebolt!"
In an instant,Harry's Firebolt came flying to him.He mounted his broom and took off in Draco's direction.Draco saw Harry coming and a rush of relief came through him.Unfortunatley,Drago had seen Harry too.He looked down at Draco,still smiling evily and raised on foot.At first Draco wasn't sure what Drago was doing,but then his eyes went wide.Drago stamped down on Draco's hand causing the young slytherin to let go of his broom. Harry gasped,seeing this and flew at full speed toward Draco.He steadied himself on his broom and caught Draco(without much ease)and then carefully landed on the ground.
"Are you okay?" Harry asked,looking worriedly at Draco.
"Yes." Draco reponded,not looking at Harry.
Draco dusted himself off then looked at Drago,who was now landing.He ran over to Draco but stopped a few inches away.His smile which had been evil not to long ago,was now a sad one. Drago's eyes were just as sad as his smile.
"Cousin Draco...I'm ever so sorry. I didn't mean to-" Drago was cut off by Draco punching him hard in the face. He stumbled backward and fell to the ground.He held the spot where Draco had punched him with his left hand and looked up at his cousin who was looking down upon him,a look of hatred in his stormy grey eyes.
"You...you...YOU NUTCASE!" Draco shrieked, "Just WHO do you think you are?! You try to kill me for..for... I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW MANY TIMES and THEN you say 'Cousin Draco...I'm ever so sorry. I didn't mean to.'"
Draco breathed heavily,still looking down upon his cousin.Then he let out a frustrated scream and stomped back to the castle. But not before yelling out a 'Stay out of my life you Son of a bitch' at the top of his lungs.
Draco watched his cousin go and stood.A small sad smile still on his face,he glanced at Harry,smiling lightly. Harry just gave him a look of disgust and went after Draco. Drago looked down at his feet,still smiling softly. Then,very slowly,he began to giggle. The giggle turned into a chuckle and the chuckle turned into a complete laugh.He fell to the ground,laughing like a crazy person.
After about 3 minutes of laughing he sat up straight,wiping tears from his eyes,then stood and dusted himself off. His perky smile had returned as he looked at teh castle,his eyes glinting mischieviously. He began walking toward the castle,a single thought in his head, 'Poor Cousin Draco....'
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Okay...that sucked. I didn't even make it long enough...Oh well.... I hope the way I wrote it made things easier. Anyway...
*gets an announcer like voice* What is Drago up to? Will Draco and Harry *ever* admit that they like one another? Find out! On...CHAPTER 6!
Bye bye now!