Okay, for all you impatient people out there, I have been working on the next chapter to this story, I've just been suffering writers block and am trying desperately to overcome it and get this next chapter out.
Also, I feel the need to explain to D-chan and Final-Fan some things in my story. First off, though, I would like to thank you for being polite in your criticism of my second chapter. I know it needs a fix up, but it's an old story I wrote two years or more back and I couldn't really see what I could do to fix it up. If anyone reading this would like to take on that job, then be my guest. Just email me first.
The purpose of Ryoga being evil was originally going to be entered in the second chapter, but as I said it's an old story I dug up on the hard drive. I didn't see how to put it in that chapter so I posted what I had of it and decided to try my luck in starting a new chapter. Also, Akane is not really evil. Just kind of caught between light and dark. The real enemy was also going to reveal herself in Chapter two, but it didn't work out. There's no real reason to have switched to Gundam Wing, except that I had wanted to do a crossover and I figured that it would be cool for them to have to face a trial on their enemy's turf.
To Final-Fan specifically: I do not disapprove of the thinking in terms of good and evil now, nor did I ever, but I do not actually believe in good and evil. I didn't when I wrote this story either, but I figured that it would make my point clearer to other people since many think in such divisions. I just clear that up.
For any who know about Gundam Wing and think that their enemy is Treize or OZ or one of those factions, I would like to tell you that that is an incorrect assumption.
Alright, that's enough of my sounding like an utter stiff. ^_^ Check up in about a week or two and I should have the third chapter up. I go on spring break next week so I'll have a lot of free time. Also, when I do have chapter three done, I'll be putting it in place of this thing.
Baibai!
Er...yeah, I forgot. My email is april@connexions.net. Gomen.
Also, I feel the need to explain to D-chan and Final-Fan some things in my story. First off, though, I would like to thank you for being polite in your criticism of my second chapter. I know it needs a fix up, but it's an old story I wrote two years or more back and I couldn't really see what I could do to fix it up. If anyone reading this would like to take on that job, then be my guest. Just email me first.
The purpose of Ryoga being evil was originally going to be entered in the second chapter, but as I said it's an old story I dug up on the hard drive. I didn't see how to put it in that chapter so I posted what I had of it and decided to try my luck in starting a new chapter. Also, Akane is not really evil. Just kind of caught between light and dark. The real enemy was also going to reveal herself in Chapter two, but it didn't work out. There's no real reason to have switched to Gundam Wing, except that I had wanted to do a crossover and I figured that it would be cool for them to have to face a trial on their enemy's turf.
To Final-Fan specifically: I do not disapprove of the thinking in terms of good and evil now, nor did I ever, but I do not actually believe in good and evil. I didn't when I wrote this story either, but I figured that it would make my point clearer to other people since many think in such divisions. I just clear that up.
For any who know about Gundam Wing and think that their enemy is Treize or OZ or one of those factions, I would like to tell you that that is an incorrect assumption.
Alright, that's enough of my sounding like an utter stiff. ^_^ Check up in about a week or two and I should have the third chapter up. I go on spring break next week so I'll have a lot of free time. Also, when I do have chapter three done, I'll be putting it in place of this thing.
Baibai!
Er...yeah, I forgot. My email is april@connexions.net. Gomen.