Note ,hi and thanx 4 reviewing I will write more one day !!!!!!!111



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Cloud could feel his body against the dam wet and cold floor. he slowly opened his blue glowing mako eyes and using his "strong" arm's to help him self into a sitting position but he found that he was weaker than normal. As he looked up slowly and timidly to find he was sounded pure darkness, he tried to look around but his hand wasn't even visible in front of his own face a feeling of empty ness fill him in side. Cloud closed his eyes as tight as he cloud hoping when he re-opened them, the darkness around would be gone and that it was only a night mare .but that wasn't going to happen when he opened his eyes it was the same darkness ,pure solid darkness . Except for one single beam off light which seemed to be coming from a place far away , cloud rose to his feet and after stopping himself from landing back down on his ass ,he took off running as fast as he could ,putting one foot in front of the other,

It seemed like he had been running for hours, his heart was racing, he had to stop and stand, kinda bent over while he tried to catch his breath ,his head felt light as if it was full of air , once he re-caught his breath he started to run again,but that was a real bad idea ,his hand shot down and grabbed his stomach ,it felt like all his insides were some how pulling together causing one huge pain , a cramp that's all he need he slowed down his pace to a slight jog





Note .. ok so this isn't finished I ran out of ideas ,( I kinda know what happens next but I don't know how to put it .

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