My dear dancingqueen, never underestimate the mind of a crazy inept person such as myself. But I will tell you that where there's a will there's a way. Do not loose hope. I meant to make that chappie a bit longer but I was unable to do so because of the time consumed in it. Here goes the next part and do hold steady, although half the fun in writing is to kill the characters it shouldn't be done in such way you are right without careful planning.

Ok, and please anyone who is reading this chappie please review. It's great that all my friends are reviewing but when I'm writing it only for them it is kind of annoying, especially because they won't tell me if it's really sucky until I finish the whole stinking piece. If you are out there REVIEW even if you've reviewed before, I would like to know if I'm only writing it for them or if I'm writing it for at least one more person who has read the last 10 chapters or so. Here goes what I wrote a while ago but haven't typed up yet.

This is one little detail that I was forgetful to put in last chapter:

THEY ALL DIED.

But we will rewind to once again to our lovely Ariel who has just been pierced by an arrow and made into a lovely pincushion. No, pincushion's already been taken and used way too often. She looked like a Christmas tree with a very strange ornament protruding from the trunk. (please don't look too deeply into this, if you can't tell I'm not quite myself today)

"No!" cried Gimli, "don't leave me. You are too strong to do so! Do not give up! It's a mere scratch, you don't need that arm anyway, or that leg!" when another arrow whizzed by and struck her in the calf.

"I am not immortal Gimli and I fear I must leave thee. Do not despair" she said as he looked at her despairingly, "you'll die too eventually."

He knelt down beside her as she took in her last few breaths and gasped. Her body twisted and went limp and her heaving became all the more slower and steadier. Gimli took her hand and held it in his trying to cut out all the noise; the noise of the drums, the attack that had encircled them, and the dying Ariel taking her last few breaths in his arms.

Her eyelids closed and she was still, her hand went limp in his and he bent down and kissed her forehead. It was too much for him, tears streamed down his cheeks. He held her in his arms for a brief period, feeling the cold rush from her body as more life slipped from the girl. His heart had gone with her and now it was forever hidden in the great realm where perhaps they would meet again. He felt empty and the life seemed to drain away from his ruddy features as well while he held Ariel in the embrace. He took ax in hand and stood by her maimed body, still bleeding. Indeed, he was stained with her blood as well. Gimli defended the now deceased Ariel, hewing orcs left and right.

He stood breathing heavily as more orcs advanced and still he stood over her, longing to hear her voice once more, longing for her to wake from this mysterious disappearance while so very near. He wanted to touch her once more, just to make sure that she was still not there but in reality he didn't want to know. He wanted only to wait by her side till she awoke.

He bent down and pressed his lips to hers while arrows did not cease and someone called to him. The voice was distant and foreign but he heard it yet chose to ignore it all the same.

"Come Gimli! We must run before we are all are lost forever in the mines. Come now! Do not tarry in such vial place. Come!"

"I will not do as you command. I am bound by love and with that shall come death as well. Do what you must without me but I will not leave."

With that the orcs encircled them and none could escape. They had missed their chance and now the weight of the foe was crushing into them and beating them. They couldn't breath in the reeking stench. There was no trick, no trap door that they could go through to evade them. They were doomed one and all.

So, people. If no one reviews I'm gonna leave it at that but if you review I'll make a sequel or something. Do tell me what you think and not just numbers, dancingqueen and madame blueberry. Although I love to here from them they are forced to review anyway because they are my friends. I want to here what others think please. Should I make a sequel? Originally I was making this piece to actually get somewhere but since no one knew has reviewed the last few chapters I assume no one but my friends are reading it.

Once again, sequel? No sequel? Do review and tell or this will be the end.