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Summary: Liz is the most powerful girl in her school, but only two people like her... One day Max Evans, Isabel Evans, and Michael Guerin come to town. Could these three be the key to Liz's unknown past?
Rating: PG; some language
Disclaimer: I wish I owned them, but I don't. I am writing this purely to please the annoying voices in my head. Don't sue.
Author's Note: This is, finally, the last chapter. But be warned, this is super FLUFFY.
Author's Note #2: Sorry about the delay. It wasn't due to the lack of replies, it was due to me surprising myself by not wanting to post the last chapter. I didn't want this fun to end.
The large room was overfilled with the entire town's occupants. At five after five, everyone was nervously waiting to hear what Liz Parker wanted.
"Thank you all for coming," Liz began, standing behind a podium. placed in front of the huge group. "This shouldn't take too long."
For the third time n two days, Liz shut her eyes and started the task of changing memories. After what seemed like forever, Liz opened her eyes to a world of pain. Her head was pounding; she wasn't sure how much more of this she could take.
Liz saw the mayor stand next to her and felt his hands steady her swaying. Then her world went black.
Max almost had a heart attack when he saw Liz faint backwards into their mayor's hands. Within seconds he was up and beside Liz.
After a few seconds Liz slowly opened one of her eyes.
"Liz? Liz! Are you okay?" Maria asked frantically from Max's other side.
"My head. It won't stop spinning," Liz whispered.
Max's heart broke to hear her sound so weak. "Come on," Max whispered in Liz's ear before almost dragging her outside.
"Lizzie! Baby?" Mrs. Parker screamed from behind Max.
Max heard Michael and Alex convince Mr. and Mrs. Parker to go back inside and let them take care of it. Max, however, was too busy carrying Liz outside to really notice.
When Liz was leaning against a car with everyone piled around her, Isabel finally asked the question everyone was wondering. "What happened?"
Liz looked at Isabel. "Well, I guess it just took more out of me than I expected," Liz answered, clearly hoping it would be enough. It wasn't.
"What the hell does that mean!" Michael exclaimed, "You don't just faint and get off that easy."
"Michael's right you need to talk to us," Max almost begged.
"Listen guys, its no big deal. I just got a little dizzy. Can't we please just drop it? It worked, so I won't have to be doing it again, anyway," Liz reminded them.
Alex sighed and shook his head, "But you're sure you're okay?"
"Totally sure. Totally, totally sure," Liz insisted.
"Let's just get you back to you're parents before they freak out and then home," Max said with a resigned sigh.
"Good plan," Liz agreed leaning slightly on his arm to keep her balance.
The two walked back to the building together in silence. Half way there, Max turned to her.
"I just wanted to tell you that what you did id one of he bravest things I've ever seen. To risk so much exposure, to have asked or it before, and now to know you would get hurt but still do it. Wow. Just wanted to, uh, let you know. And now I did. So I'll just stop talking," Max finished awarkwardly.
Liz's face broke out into the most beautiful grin Max had ever seen. "Thanks. That really means a lot to me, Max."
Without warning, Liz leaned forward and gave Max a quick peak on the lips. Both froze for a few seconds before moving closer for a much longer kiss.
"What do you think is taking Max so long?" Isabel complained.
"I don't know but I'm getting kinda bored just waiting here," Alex supplied.
"We don't really have to wait here. I mean, they never told us to stay and waste a perfectly good night. And with everyone inside, I both the park would have to be empty," Isabel hinted to Alex.
Alex picked up on the clue. "Yeah, you wanna go. I mean, with me. Don't feel like you have to say yes, because you don't but…"
Isabel's laughter cut him off. She looped her elbow through him off. "I thought you'd never ask!"
"Hey! What about us?" Maria screamed. "What are we supposed to do?"
"Don't wait up!" Isabel shouted over her shoulder.
"Well, isn't that nice," Michael said sarcastically. "What are we supposed to do while they're all gone?"
"I don't know. I don't care. Anything as long as we don't have to stand around waiting here anymore," Maria replied.
"You ever broke into The Crashdown before?" Michael asked suddenly.
Maria's head shot up. "No, I work there, remember?" she reminded him.
"So? I'm hungry. The Crashdown has food and Mr. and Mrs. Parker aren't there. Which also means they can't catch us."
"If I get caught I'll be fired in five seconds," Maria said skeptically.
"Not my problem," Michael answered with a shrug before head off towards the restaurant.
Maria bit the bottom of tired to hide a smile. "You're going the wrong way!" she shouted running up to him, ready for anything.
=(Amanda(=
There you go guys. I had a lot of fun posting this here; you guys have been great. I am going to write an author's note thanking people by name soon and post it. So make sure you come back if you sent feedback. And don't forget to tell me what you guys thought!
Summary: Liz is the most powerful girl in her school, but only two people like her... One day Max Evans, Isabel Evans, and Michael Guerin come to town. Could these three be the key to Liz's unknown past?
Rating: PG; some language
Disclaimer: I wish I owned them, but I don't. I am writing this purely to please the annoying voices in my head. Don't sue.
Author's Note: This is, finally, the last chapter. But be warned, this is super FLUFFY.
Author's Note #2: Sorry about the delay. It wasn't due to the lack of replies, it was due to me surprising myself by not wanting to post the last chapter. I didn't want this fun to end.
The large room was overfilled with the entire town's occupants. At five after five, everyone was nervously waiting to hear what Liz Parker wanted.
"Thank you all for coming," Liz began, standing behind a podium. placed in front of the huge group. "This shouldn't take too long."
For the third time n two days, Liz shut her eyes and started the task of changing memories. After what seemed like forever, Liz opened her eyes to a world of pain. Her head was pounding; she wasn't sure how much more of this she could take.
Liz saw the mayor stand next to her and felt his hands steady her swaying. Then her world went black.
Max almost had a heart attack when he saw Liz faint backwards into their mayor's hands. Within seconds he was up and beside Liz.
After a few seconds Liz slowly opened one of her eyes.
"Liz? Liz! Are you okay?" Maria asked frantically from Max's other side.
"My head. It won't stop spinning," Liz whispered.
Max's heart broke to hear her sound so weak. "Come on," Max whispered in Liz's ear before almost dragging her outside.
"Lizzie! Baby?" Mrs. Parker screamed from behind Max.
Max heard Michael and Alex convince Mr. and Mrs. Parker to go back inside and let them take care of it. Max, however, was too busy carrying Liz outside to really notice.
When Liz was leaning against a car with everyone piled around her, Isabel finally asked the question everyone was wondering. "What happened?"
Liz looked at Isabel. "Well, I guess it just took more out of me than I expected," Liz answered, clearly hoping it would be enough. It wasn't.
"What the hell does that mean!" Michael exclaimed, "You don't just faint and get off that easy."
"Michael's right you need to talk to us," Max almost begged.
"Listen guys, its no big deal. I just got a little dizzy. Can't we please just drop it? It worked, so I won't have to be doing it again, anyway," Liz reminded them.
Alex sighed and shook his head, "But you're sure you're okay?"
"Totally sure. Totally, totally sure," Liz insisted.
"Let's just get you back to you're parents before they freak out and then home," Max said with a resigned sigh.
"Good plan," Liz agreed leaning slightly on his arm to keep her balance.
The two walked back to the building together in silence. Half way there, Max turned to her.
"I just wanted to tell you that what you did id one of he bravest things I've ever seen. To risk so much exposure, to have asked or it before, and now to know you would get hurt but still do it. Wow. Just wanted to, uh, let you know. And now I did. So I'll just stop talking," Max finished awarkwardly.
Liz's face broke out into the most beautiful grin Max had ever seen. "Thanks. That really means a lot to me, Max."
Without warning, Liz leaned forward and gave Max a quick peak on the lips. Both froze for a few seconds before moving closer for a much longer kiss.
"What do you think is taking Max so long?" Isabel complained.
"I don't know but I'm getting kinda bored just waiting here," Alex supplied.
"We don't really have to wait here. I mean, they never told us to stay and waste a perfectly good night. And with everyone inside, I both the park would have to be empty," Isabel hinted to Alex.
Alex picked up on the clue. "Yeah, you wanna go. I mean, with me. Don't feel like you have to say yes, because you don't but…"
Isabel's laughter cut him off. She looped her elbow through him off. "I thought you'd never ask!"
"Hey! What about us?" Maria screamed. "What are we supposed to do?"
"Don't wait up!" Isabel shouted over her shoulder.
"Well, isn't that nice," Michael said sarcastically. "What are we supposed to do while they're all gone?"
"I don't know. I don't care. Anything as long as we don't have to stand around waiting here anymore," Maria replied.
"You ever broke into The Crashdown before?" Michael asked suddenly.
Maria's head shot up. "No, I work there, remember?" she reminded him.
"So? I'm hungry. The Crashdown has food and Mr. and Mrs. Parker aren't there. Which also means they can't catch us."
"If I get caught I'll be fired in five seconds," Maria said skeptically.
"Not my problem," Michael answered with a shrug before head off towards the restaurant.
Maria bit the bottom of tired to hide a smile. "You're going the wrong way!" she shouted running up to him, ready for anything.
=(Amanda(=
There you go guys. I had a lot of fun posting this here; you guys have been great. I am going to write an author's note thanking people by name soon and post it. So make sure you come back if you sent feedback. And don't forget to tell me what you guys thought!