Hello again everyone! I sure hope you liked the first chapter. I kind of
put it up in so I couldn't quite get my original characters introduced
properly. And I neglected to explain a few things! And *sniffle* THERE WAS
NO HIEAD! Or Yamagi or Roose! But all that's about to change. I have a
chance to redeem myself! MWHAHAHAHA Chapter 2 shall now begin!!!!
__________________________(Kasumi's POV)_____________________________
As if yesterday's problems with all of Kizna's clocks being off by one hour hadn't been drama for my lovely little teenage life, Rucy fell and broke his nose this morning. He tripped over Yamagi's empty potato chip bag. And I thought I was the clumsy one. Anyway I complained to Kizna about how I wanted No More Drama in my life (pun on the song) and she just told me to write it all in a diary so I guess I am. Well I already did but anyway you get the picture. So now I'm sitting in this stupid room alone trying to figure out what the heck write about. Oh I know. I'll write about my first day here. Boy that was chaotic. Okay here goes!
My First Day At GOA
Well I guess I can sum up my first day here in one word. Well two words. It was "very interesting" as Clay would say. My plane with the other two repairer's #91 and 93 arrived late. We were the only ones who arrived late. Go figure. Anyways the first thing I did was go get some food even though our instructor Azuma told me not to. I couldn't help myself I WAS STARVING! But back to the subject I made my way to the cafeteria because a guy named Roose showed me the way. He was really nice helping me like that. So I got in line to get my food and I spotted my childhood friend Kizna sitting at a table with some other girls. Naturally, I figured I should go and grace their table with my presence so I turned to head over there. But sadly, I had one of my famous clumsy spells and ended up tripping over a floor tile and ramming into somebody. Ah. Yes I remember this moment, this minute, this second, so clearly that I shall tell it in third person.
As Kasumi looked up from her fall the first thing she noticed was that she'd spilled her precious lunch all over the floor, the second thing she noticed was some sort kid (later revealed as Yamagi) was laughing at her. "Shut up midget!" she growled. That quieted him down as he walked off muttering something about it's a good thing to be short. Anyway the third thing Kasumi noticed was the person she'd crashed into. He was a few years older than me but as he regained his senses and we made eye contact I realized he was the cutest guy she'd ever seen. The green hair, the beautiful eyes, the dashing smile. Well even though Kasumi hadn't quite seen him smile yet, she figured it be dashing. "Um I'm so sorry! It was an accident I swear! Please forgive me! I'm new here and I'm so SORRY!" she apologized. The beautiful creature simply nodded.
"It's alright, I guess. Since you're new and all the name's Garaes what's yours?" he ask as he dusted himself off. Kasumi stared up at him.
"M- my name is Kasumi," she said. Garaes nodded. A boy called over to him and he turned to leave. "Well Kasumi! See you around!"
And that was the end of my first encounter with Garaes Ellid. Afterwards I slowly made my way over to Kizna's table. She was extremely happy to see me and introduced me to all her friends who are now my roommates (yippee) Saki, Ikhny, Wrecka and Tsukasa. Since I was a friend of Kizna's they welcomed me with open arms. I would've stayed to chat with them longer but I needed a lunch since my first one was spilled on the floor. I got up to leave to get a new set of food when this incredible rude, stupid, kid bumped into me. Of course I told the guy to watch where he was going. Well actually I said, "Watch where you're going ya jerk!" So I might've come off a little harsh. But anyway he turned around and glared at me with these amazingly red eyes. My first thought was, "Whoa cool conact lenses!" My second thought was, "Hey he must be albino!" My third thought was, " Wait! He doesn't look took friendly!" Which probably should've been my first observation because I was staring into the face of Hied Gner. After he was done glaring me down with those scarlet eyes of his he circled me and left. The circling part was weird so I decided to joke around with him. You know try and be friendly. But of course I didn't know Hiead very well at the time. The dude was certainly not friendly. Anyway I said, "Kid what's with the circling. What, were you a vulture in another life?" His shoulders tensed and he glared at me again. "Stay out of my way." He growled. And that was the end of my so called humble conversation with Hiead Gner. By this time I noticed that the two girls I traveled with on my plan #91 and 93 whose names where Cloud and Zaporia were nowhere to be found. The intercom kept calling for Repairer #90 to come to Room #506 and after about the tenth time they said that it clicked that #90 was ME!!! I hightailed it up to the room in record time and I found Azuma and one other boy waiting there. The boy had brown hair, black eyes and an annoyed expression on his face. Azuma glared at me when I entered. He told me how late I was and I simply used the lame excuse that I got completely lost. He introduced me to Rucy and we hit it off pretty well. I mean its me and Rucy what can I say. He's the practical one and I'm the slightly deranged one who thinks outside of the box. Now I was going to split to find my friends from my plane ride to GOA Cloud and Zaporia. I figured I'd be rooming with them but I was mistaken. It was then that Azuma told me that Rucy and I were told that we'd be training with the 80's candidates instead of the 90's because Rucy had already been through some training on his colony. Now I pretty surprised. Rucy seemed like a regular guy to me not somebody who'd received some "special training." Azuma then left me and Rucy alone and then I told him that I was slightly telepathic. He told me he already knew and the reason he'd been paired up with me is because none of the other candidate's wanted a psychic repairer. I guess it made sense. Most people don't like me seeing what their thinking. That basically ended my first day except for the shock I got when I found out I was rooming with Kizna and the gang. Man I was one happy camper. And guess what this whole little writing thing I've been doing made me completely forget that I promised to fence with Rucy today! I am never writing in this stupid thing again!!!!
And Kasumi's diary was NEVER written in again.
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So what you think of it. Horrible? Stupid? Mary sue? Worse than the first chapter? Or was it *gasp* actually good? No flames please! :-D
__________________________(Kasumi's POV)_____________________________
As if yesterday's problems with all of Kizna's clocks being off by one hour hadn't been drama for my lovely little teenage life, Rucy fell and broke his nose this morning. He tripped over Yamagi's empty potato chip bag. And I thought I was the clumsy one. Anyway I complained to Kizna about how I wanted No More Drama in my life (pun on the song) and she just told me to write it all in a diary so I guess I am. Well I already did but anyway you get the picture. So now I'm sitting in this stupid room alone trying to figure out what the heck write about. Oh I know. I'll write about my first day here. Boy that was chaotic. Okay here goes!
My First Day At GOA
Well I guess I can sum up my first day here in one word. Well two words. It was "very interesting" as Clay would say. My plane with the other two repairer's #91 and 93 arrived late. We were the only ones who arrived late. Go figure. Anyways the first thing I did was go get some food even though our instructor Azuma told me not to. I couldn't help myself I WAS STARVING! But back to the subject I made my way to the cafeteria because a guy named Roose showed me the way. He was really nice helping me like that. So I got in line to get my food and I spotted my childhood friend Kizna sitting at a table with some other girls. Naturally, I figured I should go and grace their table with my presence so I turned to head over there. But sadly, I had one of my famous clumsy spells and ended up tripping over a floor tile and ramming into somebody. Ah. Yes I remember this moment, this minute, this second, so clearly that I shall tell it in third person.
As Kasumi looked up from her fall the first thing she noticed was that she'd spilled her precious lunch all over the floor, the second thing she noticed was some sort kid (later revealed as Yamagi) was laughing at her. "Shut up midget!" she growled. That quieted him down as he walked off muttering something about it's a good thing to be short. Anyway the third thing Kasumi noticed was the person she'd crashed into. He was a few years older than me but as he regained his senses and we made eye contact I realized he was the cutest guy she'd ever seen. The green hair, the beautiful eyes, the dashing smile. Well even though Kasumi hadn't quite seen him smile yet, she figured it be dashing. "Um I'm so sorry! It was an accident I swear! Please forgive me! I'm new here and I'm so SORRY!" she apologized. The beautiful creature simply nodded.
"It's alright, I guess. Since you're new and all the name's Garaes what's yours?" he ask as he dusted himself off. Kasumi stared up at him.
"M- my name is Kasumi," she said. Garaes nodded. A boy called over to him and he turned to leave. "Well Kasumi! See you around!"
And that was the end of my first encounter with Garaes Ellid. Afterwards I slowly made my way over to Kizna's table. She was extremely happy to see me and introduced me to all her friends who are now my roommates (yippee) Saki, Ikhny, Wrecka and Tsukasa. Since I was a friend of Kizna's they welcomed me with open arms. I would've stayed to chat with them longer but I needed a lunch since my first one was spilled on the floor. I got up to leave to get a new set of food when this incredible rude, stupid, kid bumped into me. Of course I told the guy to watch where he was going. Well actually I said, "Watch where you're going ya jerk!" So I might've come off a little harsh. But anyway he turned around and glared at me with these amazingly red eyes. My first thought was, "Whoa cool conact lenses!" My second thought was, "Hey he must be albino!" My third thought was, " Wait! He doesn't look took friendly!" Which probably should've been my first observation because I was staring into the face of Hied Gner. After he was done glaring me down with those scarlet eyes of his he circled me and left. The circling part was weird so I decided to joke around with him. You know try and be friendly. But of course I didn't know Hiead very well at the time. The dude was certainly not friendly. Anyway I said, "Kid what's with the circling. What, were you a vulture in another life?" His shoulders tensed and he glared at me again. "Stay out of my way." He growled. And that was the end of my so called humble conversation with Hiead Gner. By this time I noticed that the two girls I traveled with on my plan #91 and 93 whose names where Cloud and Zaporia were nowhere to be found. The intercom kept calling for Repairer #90 to come to Room #506 and after about the tenth time they said that it clicked that #90 was ME!!! I hightailed it up to the room in record time and I found Azuma and one other boy waiting there. The boy had brown hair, black eyes and an annoyed expression on his face. Azuma glared at me when I entered. He told me how late I was and I simply used the lame excuse that I got completely lost. He introduced me to Rucy and we hit it off pretty well. I mean its me and Rucy what can I say. He's the practical one and I'm the slightly deranged one who thinks outside of the box. Now I was going to split to find my friends from my plane ride to GOA Cloud and Zaporia. I figured I'd be rooming with them but I was mistaken. It was then that Azuma told me that Rucy and I were told that we'd be training with the 80's candidates instead of the 90's because Rucy had already been through some training on his colony. Now I pretty surprised. Rucy seemed like a regular guy to me not somebody who'd received some "special training." Azuma then left me and Rucy alone and then I told him that I was slightly telepathic. He told me he already knew and the reason he'd been paired up with me is because none of the other candidate's wanted a psychic repairer. I guess it made sense. Most people don't like me seeing what their thinking. That basically ended my first day except for the shock I got when I found out I was rooming with Kizna and the gang. Man I was one happy camper. And guess what this whole little writing thing I've been doing made me completely forget that I promised to fence with Rucy today! I am never writing in this stupid thing again!!!!
And Kasumi's diary was NEVER written in again.
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So what you think of it. Horrible? Stupid? Mary sue? Worse than the first chapter? Or was it *gasp* actually good? No flames please! :-D