24 is property of fox television and its respective owners. I credit the format used in this fic to S.L. Steven a fellow fan fic author. Any casting made in this fic was at the discreation of the author. This fic is a constant work in progress.



Note: The time may not be accurate to a point. But this is fiction.



Revolving





Summary: On the day of the final world series. San Francisco Police Inspector Bill Turner has to prevent disaster not only for himself but the president of the United States and thousands of innocent people.





Fade to the twenty-four classic opening with the clicks and circular "24" digital logo



Fade to black screen with gold lettering scrolling across the entire screen. A voice of the our new main character who will come up shortly says while the scroll appears,-"The following takes places between the hours of midnight and 1:00 AM on the day of the final game of the world series...



Fade to another black screen with the same gold letter scrolling, the same voice reads "All events, occur in real time."



Fade to: The Golden Gate Bridge and the San Francisco Skyline at night. On the bottom of the screen is the yellow clock: 12:00:00, 12:00:01, 12:00:02, 12:00:03



-Bar-



We open with a bar. It has no name and in fact only two people in it. One man is nursing a small glass of liquor. The other is the bartender and he's doing some clean up. The man has the look of a business man whose had a hard day.



Bartender-"I'm gonna take care of a couple of things. Don't steal any beer while I'm gone."



Man-Points to an overflowing ashtray "Looks like someone spilled beer in this ashtray." Pretends to grab it and take a drink from it.



Bartender laughs a little and walks over to the back. The man continues to drink.



Cut to a split screen. On the left the same man is drinking. On the right are two men who are about to enter the bar. Both are wearing ski masks and are armed with shotguns.



Robber#1- "You ready?"



Robber 2 nods and they storm the place.



Robber#1-"Down on the floor now!"



With the split screen we can see the perspective from both the robbers and the man's point of view. The man is somewhat taken aback.



Man-"What the?"



Robber#2-"Get on the floor now!"



The man tries to say something but robber #1 hits him with the butt of the shogun. We now return to full view and the clock appears on the bottom. 12:08:23, 12:08:24, 12:08:25



The bartender appears. "What the f-"

Robber#1 fires two blasts killing the bartender. The man appears to be recoiling in horror.



Man-"What do you want?"



Robber#1- "You damn well know that don't you Parson."



The man realizes who the men are. "You aren't going to stop them. It's already been set. You can't stop-."



Robber#2 kills Parson with a shotgun blast. Everything is silent Then the "robbers" prepare to their work.



Cut to clock with tick/boom 12:12:45-12:12:46-12:12:47



-24-



-San Francisco Police Headquarters-



We start with a full shot of the men's room door. We hear some noise and then the door opens revealing our main character. He's wiping his hands on his jacket. He's thin although athletic and he's around 30 years old . . . let's say Ed Norton of Fight Club is playing him. This is Inspector Bill Turner of the San Francisco Police Department



The scene is of a typical police station and Turner walks over to his desk where his partner. An older partner sits across his desk. He's reading the sports page. The banner headline reads "RED-SOX-GIANTS IN GAME 7: No one knows who will come out on top."



Turner's partner is Inspector Alan Polk played by Randy Quaid



Polk-"Can you believe it. Not only do we got a black president but the Sox actually have a chance at winning the series in who knows how long."



Tuner sits down across from Polk and goes over some paperwork



Tuner-"I know will the wonders ever cease." He looks over at the phone. "Any calls?"



Polk-"Nope, been quiet, all the bad guys must be getting ready for the game."



Tuner nods and looks at the clock. He's part of the department's night shift. He's already in hour in it and nothing is happening. The clock appears with 12:19:22, 12:19:23, 12:19:24



Cut to "robbers" who are now leaving the bar. On the body of Parsons they leave a leather wallet and a small piece of paper. They are expecting that the one they want will contact them soon. They leave the bar and get into a late model Chevy. They get in and drive away. Once on the streets. Robber#2 produces a cell phone and hits speed dial.



Voice-"You do it?"



Robber#2-"Yes sir all wrapped up. Just like you asked."



Voice-"Good, now call who we want."



Robber#2 hangs up and then dials another number



Cut to black screen with tick/boom 12:21:51-12:21:52-12:21:53





-24-

We're now in a dark room. A door opens letting in light and a pause before the lights come on. We see someone at the foot of the door. He's got a rugged mid-western looked to him. He's played by Bruce Campbell. He's wearing a sports jacket and jeans. There is something on his mind. He drops his bags on the ground. He's Red Sox Left fielder Ted Bowman.



The phone on his desk rings.



Bowman-"Hello?"



Voice on phone-"Hey baby it's me"



Bowman-"You know it's three in the morning over here."



Voice-"Of course, what are you doing?"



Bowman-"Just getting psyched up for the game. Are you going to watch the game tonight?"



Voice-"You know I would, baby."



Cut to a split screen. One showing Bowman the other a woman on the other end of the line. She's Bowman's wife Andrea.



Bowman-"Anything happen while I was gone?"



Andrea-"Nothing really. The usual stuff in the mail. But I also got a weird message from someone named Adam asking about some sort of late payment. He said he wasn't going to worry because he would meet you in Frisco. Is there something I should know about baby?"



Bowman is shocked he didn't want Andrea involved in this. "It's nothing just some business dealings okay. Just get some sleep, okay. I want you to watch the team finally win a series before the next century."



Andrea-"All right talk to you later. I love you."



Bowman-"Same here" He then makes a kissing sound and hangs up the phone. The screen returns to full view and Bowman moves to the window. He looks out into the night and the skyline. The clock shows: 12:38:34, 12:38:35, 12:38:36



-24-



Cut to a street shot. There are numerous police cars with their lights flashing. An unmarked but very new Ford Crown Victoria pulls up. It's red emergency light flashing along and it highlights the features of Bill Turner. Who along with Polk move to the scene.



We see Turner and Polk walk from their unmarked car. They walk into a bar and we see the same two bodies from earlier. Both men put on latex gloves.



Turner-"Any idea what happened?"



Polk-"Perhaps some guys were going after the til and something bad happened." He looks around. "Damn shame. I think they took the Jack Daniels from here."



Turner leans over and produces an evidence bag. He picks up the leather wallet carefully. As he opens it a small piece of paper falls out. He goes down to pick it up. A close up shows the number along with a message. "Don't talk to anyone about this. Call in five minutes. Turner takes the paper and puts it in his jacket pocket. Looking at what's in the leather wallet we learn that Parson's was a CTU agent!



Turner-"Counter Terrorism Unit?"



Polk-"What's what?"



Turner-"This guy was a badge."



Polk-"Our people?"



Turner-"No some federal agency." He looks at the ID card inside. "Belonged to someone named Gregory Parsons." The photo matches the body.



Polk-"Guess we got to bring in the feds on this."





Turner-"Guess so"



Polk-"Well at least we'll be able to make the game on time."



Turner checks his watch and realizes it's time to make the call. "I got to do something. Could you-"



Polk-"Sure just don't take to long."



Turner put the wallet in an evidence bag and hands it off to a uniform. He removes his latex gloves and goes to an alley near the bar. He looks at the number and intrigued by it. He pulls out his celll phone and begins to dial.



Cut to black screen with clock and tick/boom: 12:54:56-12:54:57-12:54:58



-24-



The car containing the "robbers" pulls up to an undisclosed location. They walk in what looks like a house. The house is empty with the exception of one room. Which has a desk and a man sitting behind it. He's been waiting for the call. He's older and familiar with what he is doing. He's played by Jean Reno. The "robbers" only know him as Leon.



Leon-"I see you've done what I've asked."



Robber#1-"Yes we have. Now if we can have our..."



Leon-"Oh yes" He produces a bag and drops it on his desk. He opens in front of the robbers revealing a large clump of bills. "Just like you requested". He tosses the bag to robber #1. Both men smile and are prepared to thank him. When the phone begins to ring.



Leon-"Go, I need you no longer."



Both "robbers" understand and leave the house. Leon let's the phone ring before answering.

We now have a split screen.



Leon-"Hello?"



Turner-"Yes"



Leon-"Inspector Turner I've been expecting your call."



Cut to black screen with tick/boom clock: 12:59:58-12:59:59-1:00:00

End of hour one