WHEN YOUNG ONES FALL IN LOVE

*This story also includes e/t and the crane children.

Luis and Sheridan are both 15 yrs old, Ethan and Theresa are 13, while

Paloma, is 11, Antonio 14, Daisy 12, Hope 14, and will 13.. are also

included*

CHAP 1.

On one beautiful sunny Sunday afternoon outside within the

beautifully decorated garden of the Crane estate there stands Katherine

Barrett Crane , Alistair Crane , Julian and Ivy Crane along with their

best friends and business Partners Pilar and martin Lopez-Fitzgerald overlooking

their children Ethan, Theresa, Luis, Sheridan, Antonio, Paloma, Daisy, Hope,

Will .

You will see as Antonio and Will ran around the garden the girls

danced in their beautiful dresses and as the boys admired them as they danced.

While Luis and Sheridan sat on a picnic blanket talking quietly and

listening intently to each other with admiration and gazing

into each others eyes.

Pilar , Katherine and Ivy sat down at the Picture perfect table

laid out beside them.

they turned and looked towards their Eldest children Luis and Sheridan

and Ethan and Theresa.

" Aren't they just perfect together?" Katherine asked Ivy and

Pilar .

Pilar smiled and Ivy looked from the kids toward Katherine.

" I so have to agree , just one look and its so

obvious they are destined to be together." Pilar agreed.

Ivy nodded in agreement.

" It seems everyone agrees that they are perfect together its so like

fate or destiny that has brought them together and surprise, surprise the

men tend to agree." Ivy commented and laughed.

Pilar Sighed happily and smiled as she sipped her cup of

herbal tea.

" Can you believe us? we have already started and planning our oldest

children's weddings and they are not old enough yet to get married"

she said then she laughed.

Katherine and Ivy winked at Pilar all knowing that it is only a matter

of time before they realize that what the kids, well they are

practically teenagers are feeling is love and come that day

it will be a true blessing and one heck of a day a cause for

celebration.

CHAPTER 2

Meanwhile on the picnic blanket Sheridan Crane was teaching Luis her tricks of blackjack and how it is played.

She so wanted to impress him with her talents beacuse she thought that if she did he would like her and she was hoping he was ask her out cause she so liked him but she didn't want to be the first one to move the move.

After much admiration and starring into her crystal clear blue eyes, Luis wanted so much to ask her out but just havent had the nerve yet to do it, it just wasnt the right time for one it had to be special and two they werent even alone.

" Sherry ive got a special place i would like to show you" Luis whispered sexily to her.

Sheridan smiled and agreed hoping this would be his chance to ask her out.

Luis stood up and held his hand out to her.

Sheridan took his hand and she stood up and they left the area hand in hand , Sheridan was so excited about this place he was taking her and still she had no idea where or what the place could be but couldnt wait to find out.

Every moment spent with him was just as special as she loved spending time with him, he was fun, kind,loving, sweet, they had so much in common they talked about everything from places they traveled and wanted to travel, books they read, shows they've seen, movies, wildlife everything and not to mention how incredible sexy and cute he was those were some of the reasons why she liked him so much.

Luis walked her through the woods up and down rund and through like a maze when he finally stopped.

" Okay, Now - close your eyes and no peeking cause if you do i wont show you my surprise okay?"

Sherry smiled excited about finally being alone with him and wanted so much to see what thing he has planned for her this time as they have had so many adventures over the many years they have known each other and she loved everything and anything they did together.

" Okay i promise i wont look" She nodded and closed her eyes still has a huge grin on her face.

Luis smiled as he looked at her gorgeous smiling face that shown up from him.

He checked around the bend to see if anyone was around and was glad it was deserted, he wanted to be alone and totallly alone without any interruptions because for the last few weeks he has tried to start asking her out but either he chickened out or somone like their friends, or family have interrupted him but he was determined NOT to let it happen again.

Luis then came back and saw that she wasnt peeking he took her hand and started to lead her around the bend.

" Okay still have them closed til i say okay i will be your guide, its just a little more longer then you can open"

Sheridan nodded once more and she held on tight and she completly trusted him and let him guide her around the bushy bend.

Once they were around the bend they came to a huge secluded isolated area with is surrounded by a hot tub and a swimming pool.

Luis couldnt believe this was part of the crane estate he guessed sme people used it for dates they wnated to be kept private and was so glad it was still here , it is just perfect.

" Okay , now you can open your eyes" he announced.

Sheridan opened her eyes and she couldnt believe her eyes, it was just a dream flowers everywhere that surrounded the area, a bubbling hot tub in the corner and a huge swimming pool at their leisure.

She was so in love. with the um.area of course.

" Oh Luis.. this is perfect. i just love it. you are a truely a romantic.

I so love you...um.. i mean i love how you brang me here of course" She barely muttered the words out she was practically choking on what she nearly said.

She blushed when Luis looked at her with his deep brown ice melting eyes that could make you fall at your feet.

CHAPTER 3

Luis smiled as he led Sheridan over to the hot tub but all of a sudden Sheridan stopped dead in her tracks.

Luis was confused to why she had stopped.

" Sherry, whats the matter? why did you stop?"

Sheridan was embarrased to say this but knew she had to or they would have a problem.

" um. Luis I dont have anything to change into" She said quietly.

Luis laughed.

" Its okay I found like a shed that has bathing suits so dont worry i wasnt going to suggest you go in naked"

Even though he invisioned the thought but knew that was not the way to go if he wanted to get to the point of ever asking her out.

Sheridan blushed and started to walk toward the shed.

Once inside she was surrounded by what seemed to be hundreds of different shapes, sizes, colors of spectacular bathing suits there was one piece, and 2 piece bikini's and she wasnt sure which one would be perfect for Luis to see her in she wanted to look good .

After much searching and loking through every suit she finally found it, the one.

" Its perfect"

she told herself and went to go put it on.

Luis was waiting patiently beside the Tub while waiting for Sheridan.

He had stripped down to his trunks that he wore and since he left home he had this surprise planned for her, so he had especially wore them.

Pilar had helped him buy them the previous week and he was just waiting for the right moment and when they had been invited to the Cranes for lunch he thought it was fate that this happened so for the past few days he snuck here and began to plan this bit by bit.

The flowers he carefully planted so that they looked perfect not one out of place, Filled up the Tub this morning and making sure everything was perfect for when he asks her out, he wanted it to be a special occasion and certainly without any interruptions.

A few minutes later he saw the door to the shed open and just the amazing , incredible view came upon him.

Out comes Sheridan in a lavender silk low cut bikini.

Luis's eyes dart from every inch of her gorgeous body, he has NEVER seen this much of her body, it clearly shows her smooth curves and he certainly wasn't compaining.

He looks starting from her perfect tainted toes , revealing how incredible her sexiness she has a perfect tanned body from those trips to hawaii but certainly not then had she worn something like this that shows everything every touch, look.

Oh how much he wanted to touch her smooth skin ro run his fingertips along her stomach and up her arms.

He then looks from her long model legs past her stomach and looking up he couldnt help but notice how much she has grown in the last few months she certainly was not a young girl anymore not that he thought she was to begin with its just that she is more grown up in more ways than one and he wasn't talking about her attitude.

he stepped toward her eyes now focused on her red soft lips wanting to be touch he needed her, wanted her so badly.

He knew had always liked her but now its different its as if he cant go on without her in his life it would just be too unbareable.

Why did she have to be standing there like a angel he knew he wouldnt be able to control himself any longer .

" Sheridan??..um.. you look completely beautiful, incredible there are no words to describe how i feel" he was standing inches awar from her.

Sheridan gave him a sulty look.

She knew then at that moment that she was utterly , so in love with him she knew that before she guesses but never wanted to admit what she was feeling was love but now there was no doubt and how he was reacting to her she hoped he was feeling what she does.

So she decides to find out if she was right.

She walk to him presses her smooth hands along his chest .

" hmm.. let me think ..this how you feel"

She presses her whole length body into his takes his mouth into her and being to kiss him hot and slowly.

She begins to slowly open her mouth ready to open that desire she has been holding back.

Her upper lip begins to lick his lower one then go begs for entrance she then feels him opening and their lips part and dance as like they are one .

She then feels his breath inside hers she then slips her tongue inside his moth and begins to magge his with her as she continues kissing him.

This was like nothing either of them have experienced before, she they have kissed other people but absolutely not like this Sheridan doesnt even know where all this emotion came from she never thought she would act this way but then on the other hand she gets out of control every time Luis is 2 inches within her reach he makes her go weak at the knees, she sometimes doesnt know what to say when he looks at her the way he does.

After ten minutes of tense soul seaching passionate kissing , out of breath they finally parted .

" WOW!! you are.. truely a goddess." Luis breathed out the words , his mind blank of what words he could describe the intense amazing feelings he now felt he never expected this is what it would feel like to kiss her.

Sheridan sighed happily panting so much you would think she had just run 5 miles.

" I know totally what you mean ive never felt like this, now that was what i was so dying to tell you "

Less than a minute later they couldn't stop themselves Sheridan quickly stepped back toward her and began to kiss him again she then layed down onn the fround and brang him with her with him laying on top on her and they still never left each others mouths like its their only way of oxygen is to have each others kisses.



Meanwhile in the background their song was playing.

Love At First Sight



Thought that I was going crazy

Just having one those days yeah

Didn't know what to do

Then there was you

And everything went from wrong to right

And the stars came out and filled up the sky

The music you were playing really blew my mind

It was love at first sight

'cause baby when I heard you

For the first time I knew

We were meant to be as one

Was tired of running out of luck

Thinking 'bout giving up yeah

Didn't know what to do

Then there was you

And everything went from wrong to right

And the stars came out and filled up the sky

The music you were playing really blew my mind

It was love at first sight

'cause baby when I heard you

For the first time

I knew we were meant to be as one

And everything went from wrong to right

And the stars came out and filled up the sky

The music you were playing really blew my mind

It was love at first sight

-KYLIE MINOGUE-