The Rage of Tetsu
Tetsu held his hand over his slightly crooked mouth. The steams had been draining his energy, the only downside in taking a cleansing steam bath, *preferably along with a beautiful lady*. Although it was considered highly inappropriate, Jeane (?? Goddamn, I can't for the love of god remember her name) had always been sitting at the men's side. Some rumors said that Jeane and Alex were the same human being. It was odd, people thought, that when Alex was around Jeane had been called away from the shop or she wasn't simply there. According to Tetsu, it was nonsense. A girl that beautiful couldn't be a man…could she? The thought made Tetsu shiver. He considered her to be the prettiest girl in the whole lot, and he was actually quite taken with her. If she turned out to be a he…Why, Tetsu would have to sit down and rethink his whole lifestyle. "Such thoughts will give me nightmares." He mumbled and shook his head, the gray hair on his head not moving an inch, due to the 'sticky' effect water had on hair. When he was just about to climb out of the water, he heard voices from outside. Not knowing what he should do, Tetsu just sat there. When the door opened to the bath, he couldn't see who these two shadows in the steam were. If he hadn't heard the voices or the creaky door, Tetsu wouldn't even have realized that there were people in here with him. Of course, the steam had given him an advantage. If he could barely see them, there was no way they could see him since the steam was heavier near the brazier and he could find out what was going on. The shadows tore their own clothes off and they were soon naked. Soon after they stepped down into the tub, cuddling. The woman giggled softly. Tetsu would have recognized that laughter among a thousand. It belonged to Jeane, the woman of his dreams, the rose among tulips, his guiding star on the sky, the perfect steam. And she was here with another man! The anger he felt inside his body, the rage. It was beyond words. She has NO RIGHT! Neither of the love makers saw him coming before he was upon them and Tetsu's right-hook had knocked the man out cold. Turning in the air, the unconscious lover came with his face down. Jeane's terrified scream was ear piercing. Tetsu grabbed Jeane's throat with his bulky hands. "I will not let you betray me. You have no right!" Tetsu's red, irritated eyes shone with rage and madness. During this small period of time that had occurred –In which Tetsu had found out about Jeane's "betrayal"- Tetsu had lost himself. The gentle Tetsu was forever lost in the clouds of his mind. Now, a more ferocious, lunatic Tetsu reined his middle-aged body. A man who would not think twice about killing, manipulating or deceiving; a man who would not let anyone stand in his way.
Jeane made a final noise before her eyes stared at nothing with a glassy look and her body became lifeless, lying in Tetsu's arms. He dropped her into the water without giving it a second thought. Instead, he lifted Jeane's lover from the water, his intent was to make sure of the lover's death.
Indeed the body was lifeless but it wasn't this fact that made Tetsu almost drop the body. Jeane's lover was in fact not a he, but a she. Raura?! He was quite taken by this information and for a second, the old Tetsu appeared at the surface on his mind, barely breaking through the shield the current Tetsu had "put up", because of the fact that Jeane might have been able to be persuaded into a ménage á Trois. This change for the better only lasted for a second before the merciless Tetsu shoved this rebellion inside him down again.
Tetsu left after putting his clothes on without looking back once, smiling…
~Author's note: I'm not really sure if I even want to write more or just leave it at this, since if I wrote more I'd probably make it worse, or something. Capeech? (How in the name of god do you spell that frickin' word?!) I want reviews, first of all, critizism; ways to make my writing better or changes, and second, if you want me to continue or just leave it at this: give me reasons for both. And if you have better suggestions for the title please give me them, I'm not very fond of the title… Hope you enjoyed this short fic (can't see why you should but…) and live long and prosper. _/\_/\/\_ (heh)
Tetsu held his hand over his slightly crooked mouth. The steams had been draining his energy, the only downside in taking a cleansing steam bath, *preferably along with a beautiful lady*. Although it was considered highly inappropriate, Jeane (?? Goddamn, I can't for the love of god remember her name) had always been sitting at the men's side. Some rumors said that Jeane and Alex were the same human being. It was odd, people thought, that when Alex was around Jeane had been called away from the shop or she wasn't simply there. According to Tetsu, it was nonsense. A girl that beautiful couldn't be a man…could she? The thought made Tetsu shiver. He considered her to be the prettiest girl in the whole lot, and he was actually quite taken with her. If she turned out to be a he…Why, Tetsu would have to sit down and rethink his whole lifestyle. "Such thoughts will give me nightmares." He mumbled and shook his head, the gray hair on his head not moving an inch, due to the 'sticky' effect water had on hair. When he was just about to climb out of the water, he heard voices from outside. Not knowing what he should do, Tetsu just sat there. When the door opened to the bath, he couldn't see who these two shadows in the steam were. If he hadn't heard the voices or the creaky door, Tetsu wouldn't even have realized that there were people in here with him. Of course, the steam had given him an advantage. If he could barely see them, there was no way they could see him since the steam was heavier near the brazier and he could find out what was going on. The shadows tore their own clothes off and they were soon naked. Soon after they stepped down into the tub, cuddling. The woman giggled softly. Tetsu would have recognized that laughter among a thousand. It belonged to Jeane, the woman of his dreams, the rose among tulips, his guiding star on the sky, the perfect steam. And she was here with another man! The anger he felt inside his body, the rage. It was beyond words. She has NO RIGHT! Neither of the love makers saw him coming before he was upon them and Tetsu's right-hook had knocked the man out cold. Turning in the air, the unconscious lover came with his face down. Jeane's terrified scream was ear piercing. Tetsu grabbed Jeane's throat with his bulky hands. "I will not let you betray me. You have no right!" Tetsu's red, irritated eyes shone with rage and madness. During this small period of time that had occurred –In which Tetsu had found out about Jeane's "betrayal"- Tetsu had lost himself. The gentle Tetsu was forever lost in the clouds of his mind. Now, a more ferocious, lunatic Tetsu reined his middle-aged body. A man who would not think twice about killing, manipulating or deceiving; a man who would not let anyone stand in his way.
Jeane made a final noise before her eyes stared at nothing with a glassy look and her body became lifeless, lying in Tetsu's arms. He dropped her into the water without giving it a second thought. Instead, he lifted Jeane's lover from the water, his intent was to make sure of the lover's death.
Indeed the body was lifeless but it wasn't this fact that made Tetsu almost drop the body. Jeane's lover was in fact not a he, but a she. Raura?! He was quite taken by this information and for a second, the old Tetsu appeared at the surface on his mind, barely breaking through the shield the current Tetsu had "put up", because of the fact that Jeane might have been able to be persuaded into a ménage á Trois. This change for the better only lasted for a second before the merciless Tetsu shoved this rebellion inside him down again.
Tetsu left after putting his clothes on without looking back once, smiling…
~Author's note: I'm not really sure if I even want to write more or just leave it at this, since if I wrote more I'd probably make it worse, or something. Capeech? (How in the name of god do you spell that frickin' word?!) I want reviews, first of all, critizism; ways to make my writing better or changes, and second, if you want me to continue or just leave it at this: give me reasons for both. And if you have better suggestions for the title please give me them, I'm not very fond of the title… Hope you enjoyed this short fic (can't see why you should but…) and live long and prosper. _/\_/\/\_ (heh)
