Liz wipes tear from her eye You like me! You really really like me!
Cat punches her Of course they do, dork!
Liz throws well aimed ki blast at Cat Baka!
Cat jumps back What the hell was that for?
Liz shrugs I felt like it.
Cat nods Oh, I see.
Disclaimer: No, I don't own DBZ or anything. If you sue me, all you could get is this computer and a bar of soap. So please don't, cause I need both for college…
I like the reviews, keep them coming! I'm also going to start checking more carefully for all my editing mistakes, cause I want my story to be perfect, or at least as close as possible…
Hehe, this chapter might sound a little funny, cause all the stuff I'm doing is ballet movements. And I changed the entire story from third person to first person, so some of it just doesn't work, but I was too lazy to fix it. Oh well…
Chapter 5 Ouch
"You are mine now, brat. You'll wish you never found our dimension!" Vegeta snarled.
"I'm ready for anything you throw at me, Veggie-man!" I snarled right back.
"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Vegeta screamed, launching himself at me.
He punched violently at me, but I ducked all of them. He tried to kick me in the head, but I blocked him. Then I spun myself around really fast, jumped coming out of the turn, kicked him twice in the head, rolled to the ground, and kicked his legs out from under him. He caught himself before he hit the ground, but he was clearly surprised. He looked at me. "You are stronger than I thought." I just smiled at him.
I turned on my toes really quickly and jumped, hitting him twice in the stomach. Not waiting an instant, I did a double fan kick and hit him in the head. He retaliated by punching me twice in the face and once in the stomach. I spun backwards and put my hands up to my face. When I took them away, they were covered with blood. For an instant, my eyes opened wide. "I've never…sparred…blood…' Then my eyes hardened. " I guess we'll do this the hard way."
With that, I stood straight up. I put my right foot about one foot lengths behind my left foot so that my toes were in line with my heel. I pushed herself around and spun. Vegeta just stared. What is she doing? He asked himself.
Then as I turned, I began to glow. I grew brighter and brighter. Finally the light exploded and I stood there. Only, it wasn't me anymore. My eyes were purple and seemed to crackle. My hair was pitch-black and elaborately braided on my head. Vegeta was almost overwhelmed buy the power he sensed radiating off of me. Faintly I heard "Oh, you already did it. Well, I guess you couldn't help it." I smiled at Cat's words, my eyes never leaving Vegeta.
Vegeta was surprised, but quickly recovered to his oh-so-familiar Vegeta smirk. "Well, brat, you really are full of surprises. Let's see how you do against a Super-Saiyan!"
Next thing anyone saw was two figures flying high in the sky, one with glowing golden hair and piercing green eyes, the other with raven hair and crackling violet eyes.
Cat and Goku had given it up. Everyone was too engrossed with watching Vegeta and me. "Wow. I didn't know humans could do that, become so powerful." Gohan said. "How did she learn how to fly? Most people find that really difficult."
"I don't know. She never told me she could fly. But she could have done it on her own. Actually, I'm amazed that's she's lasted this long. To say the least, we've never had a chance to fight someone as powerful as a Super- Saiyan." Cat said, mesmerized.
"Well, she's at least as strong as he is now. It's just a battle of wills at this point, unless one suddenly weakens." Piccolo said.
"Hah. Then this is going to take awhile. Liz made a 300 lb. Security guard cry one time, even before we got so powerful. She doesn't give in to much."
Then they all were silent to watch the battle raging overhead.
"Come on, Veg, what're you waiting for?" I taunted.
"You should be quiet, brat. You don't know what you are saying." Vegeta growled. Then he launched himself at me.
It was a mad flurry of kicks, turns, and punches. It was equally matched all the way for a long time. Then, I began to slow down. My energy levels dropped. Vegeta's punches had done their work; I was hurting. I didn't know exactly what was wrong, but I knew there was something wrong. I also knew I had to win or Vegeta would never respect me.
"Hah. Not so cocky anymore, are we. No. I can feel your power level dropping. You have potential, but you will never be able to defeat me." Vegeta sneered.
I had one secret left that I hadn't wanted to give away yet. But I had to win. I gathered all my strength. I took a deep breath and then coughed up blood. I wiped it away, deciding to worry about it later. I raised my arms, barely strong enough and croaked "Three Ring Attack." Out of my palms shot three golden power rings that flew to Vegeta: one at his knees, pinning his legs together, one at his waist, pinning his arms to his side, and one around his neck, bracing his head.
"The more you struggle, the deeper the rings will cut. The deeper they cut, the more blood you lose. And only I can remove the rings." I gasped.
"Brat! Once I get out of these, you will pay!" Vegeta yelled as he began to struggle violently. Within seconds he was bleeding profusely. He looked up briefly, absolutely shocked, lost consciousness, and began to fall. I reached out and said "Off". The rings disappeared. I waited until Vegeta hit the ground to be to lower herself. I lost control a few feet and fell to the ground, my normal blonde self again. I collapsed to my knees. Vegeta lay a few feet away, still bleeding and still unconscious. As the others came running, I began to cough violently, bringing up more and more blood. My ears and nose were bleeding as well. I continued coughing until the other arrived. They were all obviously shocked that I had beaten Vegeta and horrified at my bloody state.
Cat cried, "Liz, are you ok?" No dummy, I hurt. I thought. But answered, "I've never sparred…like that… I'm bleeding…" I pushed herself into a standing position but presently fell forwards into Goten's arms. I couldn't keep my eyes open. I was fading fast.
"Dad, she' not doing well." I heard Goten say. Then Bulma said "Vegeta lost a lot of blood too. We need to get them to Capsule Corp. soon or we might lose them both. I didn't know exactly what was going on because at that moment everything went black.
I hope you all like my first attempt at writing a fight scene. I tried my best…please review but be nice, cause I'm rather depressed right now…
Cat punches her Of course they do, dork!
Liz throws well aimed ki blast at Cat Baka!
Cat jumps back What the hell was that for?
Liz shrugs I felt like it.
Cat nods Oh, I see.
Disclaimer: No, I don't own DBZ or anything. If you sue me, all you could get is this computer and a bar of soap. So please don't, cause I need both for college…
I like the reviews, keep them coming! I'm also going to start checking more carefully for all my editing mistakes, cause I want my story to be perfect, or at least as close as possible…
Hehe, this chapter might sound a little funny, cause all the stuff I'm doing is ballet movements. And I changed the entire story from third person to first person, so some of it just doesn't work, but I was too lazy to fix it. Oh well…
Chapter 5 Ouch
"You are mine now, brat. You'll wish you never found our dimension!" Vegeta snarled.
"I'm ready for anything you throw at me, Veggie-man!" I snarled right back.
"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Vegeta screamed, launching himself at me.
He punched violently at me, but I ducked all of them. He tried to kick me in the head, but I blocked him. Then I spun myself around really fast, jumped coming out of the turn, kicked him twice in the head, rolled to the ground, and kicked his legs out from under him. He caught himself before he hit the ground, but he was clearly surprised. He looked at me. "You are stronger than I thought." I just smiled at him.
I turned on my toes really quickly and jumped, hitting him twice in the stomach. Not waiting an instant, I did a double fan kick and hit him in the head. He retaliated by punching me twice in the face and once in the stomach. I spun backwards and put my hands up to my face. When I took them away, they were covered with blood. For an instant, my eyes opened wide. "I've never…sparred…blood…' Then my eyes hardened. " I guess we'll do this the hard way."
With that, I stood straight up. I put my right foot about one foot lengths behind my left foot so that my toes were in line with my heel. I pushed herself around and spun. Vegeta just stared. What is she doing? He asked himself.
Then as I turned, I began to glow. I grew brighter and brighter. Finally the light exploded and I stood there. Only, it wasn't me anymore. My eyes were purple and seemed to crackle. My hair was pitch-black and elaborately braided on my head. Vegeta was almost overwhelmed buy the power he sensed radiating off of me. Faintly I heard "Oh, you already did it. Well, I guess you couldn't help it." I smiled at Cat's words, my eyes never leaving Vegeta.
Vegeta was surprised, but quickly recovered to his oh-so-familiar Vegeta smirk. "Well, brat, you really are full of surprises. Let's see how you do against a Super-Saiyan!"
Next thing anyone saw was two figures flying high in the sky, one with glowing golden hair and piercing green eyes, the other with raven hair and crackling violet eyes.
Cat and Goku had given it up. Everyone was too engrossed with watching Vegeta and me. "Wow. I didn't know humans could do that, become so powerful." Gohan said. "How did she learn how to fly? Most people find that really difficult."
"I don't know. She never told me she could fly. But she could have done it on her own. Actually, I'm amazed that's she's lasted this long. To say the least, we've never had a chance to fight someone as powerful as a Super- Saiyan." Cat said, mesmerized.
"Well, she's at least as strong as he is now. It's just a battle of wills at this point, unless one suddenly weakens." Piccolo said.
"Hah. Then this is going to take awhile. Liz made a 300 lb. Security guard cry one time, even before we got so powerful. She doesn't give in to much."
Then they all were silent to watch the battle raging overhead.
"Come on, Veg, what're you waiting for?" I taunted.
"You should be quiet, brat. You don't know what you are saying." Vegeta growled. Then he launched himself at me.
It was a mad flurry of kicks, turns, and punches. It was equally matched all the way for a long time. Then, I began to slow down. My energy levels dropped. Vegeta's punches had done their work; I was hurting. I didn't know exactly what was wrong, but I knew there was something wrong. I also knew I had to win or Vegeta would never respect me.
"Hah. Not so cocky anymore, are we. No. I can feel your power level dropping. You have potential, but you will never be able to defeat me." Vegeta sneered.
I had one secret left that I hadn't wanted to give away yet. But I had to win. I gathered all my strength. I took a deep breath and then coughed up blood. I wiped it away, deciding to worry about it later. I raised my arms, barely strong enough and croaked "Three Ring Attack." Out of my palms shot three golden power rings that flew to Vegeta: one at his knees, pinning his legs together, one at his waist, pinning his arms to his side, and one around his neck, bracing his head.
"The more you struggle, the deeper the rings will cut. The deeper they cut, the more blood you lose. And only I can remove the rings." I gasped.
"Brat! Once I get out of these, you will pay!" Vegeta yelled as he began to struggle violently. Within seconds he was bleeding profusely. He looked up briefly, absolutely shocked, lost consciousness, and began to fall. I reached out and said "Off". The rings disappeared. I waited until Vegeta hit the ground to be to lower herself. I lost control a few feet and fell to the ground, my normal blonde self again. I collapsed to my knees. Vegeta lay a few feet away, still bleeding and still unconscious. As the others came running, I began to cough violently, bringing up more and more blood. My ears and nose were bleeding as well. I continued coughing until the other arrived. They were all obviously shocked that I had beaten Vegeta and horrified at my bloody state.
Cat cried, "Liz, are you ok?" No dummy, I hurt. I thought. But answered, "I've never sparred…like that… I'm bleeding…" I pushed herself into a standing position but presently fell forwards into Goten's arms. I couldn't keep my eyes open. I was fading fast.
"Dad, she' not doing well." I heard Goten say. Then Bulma said "Vegeta lost a lot of blood too. We need to get them to Capsule Corp. soon or we might lose them both. I didn't know exactly what was going on because at that moment everything went black.
I hope you all like my first attempt at writing a fight scene. I tried my best…please review but be nice, cause I'm rather depressed right now…
