"Eli what was that? You just kissed me." She was confused, she didn't know
what just happened.
They looked at each other unable to say a word. Each was stunned by what just had happened.
"I'm sorry Grace. I have to go." With that he left here there on the steps
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~ Eli just kissed me. Oh My God! Why would he do something like that. I am soo confused.
Grace sat on her desk in her room writing in her journal. She had been like this for 30 minutes. She had so many questions and nobody to answer them. Eli had kissed her. Her own stepbrother loved her. Before their parents had gotten married Grace had a crush on Eli. She dreamt of that moment for so long. He never had given her the time of day. Now it had happened, but in the worst possible time.
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~ I can't believe I just kissed her. Oh My God! Why would I do something like that? I am so confused.
Eli was laying down in his bed. He had never thought of Grace in that way. He had always seen her as just a friend, even a sister. Now, after he had read those letters he saw her as a different Grace. She wasn't just his 17- year-old stepsister. She was a beautiful young lady with insightful thoughts about the world. He wanted to hold her. To be part of her world.
"I can't believe I'm in love with Grace Manning."
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They looked at each other unable to say a word. Each was stunned by what just had happened.
"I'm sorry Grace. I have to go." With that he left here there on the steps
~~~~
~ Eli just kissed me. Oh My God! Why would he do something like that. I am soo confused.
Grace sat on her desk in her room writing in her journal. She had been like this for 30 minutes. She had so many questions and nobody to answer them. Eli had kissed her. Her own stepbrother loved her. Before their parents had gotten married Grace had a crush on Eli. She dreamt of that moment for so long. He never had given her the time of day. Now it had happened, but in the worst possible time.
~~~~
~ I can't believe I just kissed her. Oh My God! Why would I do something like that? I am so confused.
Eli was laying down in his bed. He had never thought of Grace in that way. He had always seen her as just a friend, even a sister. Now, after he had read those letters he saw her as a different Grace. She wasn't just his 17- year-old stepsister. She was a beautiful young lady with insightful thoughts about the world. He wanted to hold her. To be part of her world.
"I can't believe I'm in love with Grace Manning."
I need feedback. Please review my story if you read it. I'll take any type of criticism.
