Hidden from View
I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! Sry 'bout that, my parents grounded me from the computer. I'll probably stay up all night trying to finish this and maybe I'll get another chapter up. ^-^ Thank you to the three people who reviewed!
Disclaimer: Go look at the first chapter. Its there, I promise.
Chapter one
A small redhead wove her way around in the Cloud City's spaceport. Her lean wiry body was the perfect size to walk around the starport. Her long red hair flowed behind her as she whisked around a corner.
"Excuse me?" she asked the next door guard she saw. "Can you tell me where platform 2179 is?" The guard pointed her down a side corridor where fewer people were walking though.
"Thank you." She said in her high melodic voice. And moved quickly though the door. Oh dear, I'm late. I hope the Jedi knights will still be there. She thought quickening her pace. She was just about to run when, as she wasn't paying attention, ran into something solid.
Obi-wan walked off the ship into a small corridor and looked around. Qui-gon came up behind him.
"I think they were supposed to have someone waiting to take us around the city." Said Qui-gon, also looking around the corridor.
"Maybe they're waiting at the end of this hallway." Said Obi-wan starting to walk down the hallway.
"I guess you maybe right." Replied Qui-gon starting to stride a few feet behind his padawan. That was when Obi-wan suddenly ran into something. When Qui-gon finally looked down he saw Obi-wan tangled up in some sort of rope and a girl who looked about eight. The girl wasn't looking too pleased, until she saw Qui-gon.
"Oh!" she said looking straight up at Qui-gon. " You must be the Jedi knights I was sent here for."
"Master, will you please help us untangle ourselves." Came Obi-wan's dry voice.
"That would be nice." Muttered the girl looked a little less than pleased. After a few minutes of struggling they were able to get both people free. The young girl wound up the rope and stuck it neatly into her knapsack.
"I'm very sorry about what happened. I was running late and thought the platform was at the end of the hallway." Said the girl wistfully.
"You're the person who we were supposed to meet?" asked Obi-wan skeptically as he got hit on the head by Qui-gon.
"Thank you for coming, but aren't you a little young? And what is your name?" asked Qui-gon politely.
"My name is Nebaroshe'me' Faia Starseeker. And I'm 6 years old." Replied the young redhead smiling.
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Ooooooooooo. Next chapters gonna be about Qui-gon and obi-wan's reaction to what Nebi just said.
FYI: Faia means fire in Japanese
From the last chapter Baka or Bakas mean idiot in Japanese.
I've got post-exam writes block so if you have any ideas please write them in your review or email them to me at: princess_of_star_wars@yahoo.com.
I need names for other orphans and if you want me to use any of your characters please send me a bio on them. Please include personalities.
Thanks,
~*Nebaroshe*~
