Oh yeah, I added a lot more onto chapter 3, if you haven't read it yet…you
really should…or you may be lost. Sorry it took so long to get up!! But
here it is! Enjoy!
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Pretty When You Cry
By Unaspirality
We went to the first club, and it was a typical club, long line, flashing lights, a huge bouncer. I just knew that our chances of getting into this place were very slim.
The minute we got out of the car, the bouncer spotted us, and waved Yohji over. Yohji talked to him for a few minutes, and then the bouncer moved aside. Yohji grabbed my hand, and off we went, into the club.
Yohji held my hand as we made our way through all of the dancing people. We worked our way to the back of the club, where all of those round tables are. He never let go of my hand, not even when we sat down. In fact, he grabbed my other hand when we sat on our stools. We were holding hands across the table. As he looked into my eyes, I realized that I've never been so in love with someone, my whole life. He's so beautiful, and he makes me so happy just to be here with him.
He breaks our gaze, and lets go of one of my hands. He raises his free arm into the air; he's flagging down a waitress.
A small blonde girl comes over. "Yohji! It's been a long time." She says as she throws her arms around my lover. She holds him tight, and pats his back.
"I know, too long." Yohji replies as he breaks her grip. "This is a friend of mine, Ken. Ken, this is Ashili."
She's wearing quite a revealing outfit. But I guess I should have expected that. I hate the way she keeps touching his shoulder like that. It's so obvious that he slept with her. She's pissing me off! Go away bitch! Hey, it actually worked. But…what about my drink? "Yohji…I didn't get to order anything."
"I ordered for you. You seemed to be preoccupied at the moment, with your death glare and all." He grabs my other hand. "It's okay Ken, I'm here with you, not her."
"Sorry Yohji. What did you get me?"
"Two shots of Tequila for Yohji, and a shot of Sex on the Beach, for Ken." Ashili set the drinks on the table, and Yohji handed her a ten.
"Thanks Ash, keep the change."
Yohji did one of his shots, then looked at me.
"Sex on the Beach, Yohji?"
"You should try new things. Try it, you'll like. I promise."
I hesitantly do the shot. It kinda burns going down, but it's pretty good. Yohji always knows what I'll like. He never even has to ask.
He throws back his other shot, then leads me to the dance floor. The music here is different from what I'm use to, but I like it. The dancing is quite a bit different too. However, Yohji is a great dancer, and I catch on quickly.
It doesn't take long for people to realize that two guys are dancing together, and they form a circle around us, pointing and whispering. I have to admit, I'm feeling a little silly, and embarrassed, but Yohji acts like he doesn't even see them. He's so great. After about 10 songs, Yohji leads me back to our table.
After we get a chance to normalize our breathing, Yohji hops up and pulls me into his arms. "Ready for the next club?"
I nod, and off we go to the next club. The same sorts of things happen. There is a huge friendly bouncer, an incredibly attractive woman, a new drink, and lots of dancing. The same thing happens at about four other clubs, then Yohji says we should call it a night at 4 am.
We pull up to my house and get out of the car. We're still laughing about the look on everyone's face when we starting grinding on the dance floor. You should have seen them! It was hilarious!
We laugh the whole way to my porch. Then we stop and stare into each other's eyes. I can feel that we are gradually getting closer, and then he wraps one arm loosely around my waist, and draws me nearer. Soon our bodies are touching, and he's leaning towards me. I can feel my body reacting before his lips even touch mine. I wrap my arms around his neck, then his other arm flings around me. He kisses me, and everything seems to stand still. My heart catches in my chest. I love him so much.
Yohji pulls away from me, and I ask, "Do you wanna come inside?"
"Yes Ken, I do." He takes my hand, "Because, we need to talk."
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I am really liking this story!! What do you think??
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Pretty When You Cry
By Unaspirality
We went to the first club, and it was a typical club, long line, flashing lights, a huge bouncer. I just knew that our chances of getting into this place were very slim.
The minute we got out of the car, the bouncer spotted us, and waved Yohji over. Yohji talked to him for a few minutes, and then the bouncer moved aside. Yohji grabbed my hand, and off we went, into the club.
Yohji held my hand as we made our way through all of the dancing people. We worked our way to the back of the club, where all of those round tables are. He never let go of my hand, not even when we sat down. In fact, he grabbed my other hand when we sat on our stools. We were holding hands across the table. As he looked into my eyes, I realized that I've never been so in love with someone, my whole life. He's so beautiful, and he makes me so happy just to be here with him.
He breaks our gaze, and lets go of one of my hands. He raises his free arm into the air; he's flagging down a waitress.
A small blonde girl comes over. "Yohji! It's been a long time." She says as she throws her arms around my lover. She holds him tight, and pats his back.
"I know, too long." Yohji replies as he breaks her grip. "This is a friend of mine, Ken. Ken, this is Ashili."
She's wearing quite a revealing outfit. But I guess I should have expected that. I hate the way she keeps touching his shoulder like that. It's so obvious that he slept with her. She's pissing me off! Go away bitch! Hey, it actually worked. But…what about my drink? "Yohji…I didn't get to order anything."
"I ordered for you. You seemed to be preoccupied at the moment, with your death glare and all." He grabs my other hand. "It's okay Ken, I'm here with you, not her."
"Sorry Yohji. What did you get me?"
"Two shots of Tequila for Yohji, and a shot of Sex on the Beach, for Ken." Ashili set the drinks on the table, and Yohji handed her a ten.
"Thanks Ash, keep the change."
Yohji did one of his shots, then looked at me.
"Sex on the Beach, Yohji?"
"You should try new things. Try it, you'll like. I promise."
I hesitantly do the shot. It kinda burns going down, but it's pretty good. Yohji always knows what I'll like. He never even has to ask.
He throws back his other shot, then leads me to the dance floor. The music here is different from what I'm use to, but I like it. The dancing is quite a bit different too. However, Yohji is a great dancer, and I catch on quickly.
It doesn't take long for people to realize that two guys are dancing together, and they form a circle around us, pointing and whispering. I have to admit, I'm feeling a little silly, and embarrassed, but Yohji acts like he doesn't even see them. He's so great. After about 10 songs, Yohji leads me back to our table.
After we get a chance to normalize our breathing, Yohji hops up and pulls me into his arms. "Ready for the next club?"
I nod, and off we go to the next club. The same sorts of things happen. There is a huge friendly bouncer, an incredibly attractive woman, a new drink, and lots of dancing. The same thing happens at about four other clubs, then Yohji says we should call it a night at 4 am.
We pull up to my house and get out of the car. We're still laughing about the look on everyone's face when we starting grinding on the dance floor. You should have seen them! It was hilarious!
We laugh the whole way to my porch. Then we stop and stare into each other's eyes. I can feel that we are gradually getting closer, and then he wraps one arm loosely around my waist, and draws me nearer. Soon our bodies are touching, and he's leaning towards me. I can feel my body reacting before his lips even touch mine. I wrap my arms around his neck, then his other arm flings around me. He kisses me, and everything seems to stand still. My heart catches in my chest. I love him so much.
Yohji pulls away from me, and I ask, "Do you wanna come inside?"
"Yes Ken, I do." He takes my hand, "Because, we need to talk."
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I am really liking this story!! What do you think??
