Here is chapter number five…I hope everyone is enjoying this as much as I
am…
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Pretty When You Cry
By Unaspirality
We get inside, and go to the kitchen. We face each other on the barstools, our knees touching.
"What's up Yohji?"
"You remember our first night?"
"Yeah…"
"I went on a date with a beautiful woman, and for some strange reason, she shot me down."
"Yeah…"
"Well, it was because I couldn't offer her a real relationship. It just wouldn't work. It wouldn't work with anyone that I can't be completely open with.
So I came over here, all depressed cause I was turned down. I bitched and complained about women these days, and about how all they want is commitment. None of them just want a good lay. You let me whine, and then we just talked. We talked about commitment, and how it is over rated, and people should just be able to have one night stands, and then get on with their lives."
"Yeah…"
"Ken, I came over that night for more than a good listener."
"What do you mean?"
"What I'm trying to say…is that I had a thing for you…and I just knew that there was no chance in hell that you felt the same way. So I came over to seduce you…get a one-night stand, a good lay. I hoped that by doing so, that my need for you would be gone.
But it wasn't.
Before we had sex that night, we agreed that it would only be a thing that we did when we couldn't get it elsewhere. We agreed that we didn't have feelings for one and other, and that it would only be sex. However, after we had sex, I fell in love with you. I wanted nothing more that to move in, and be with you forever.
We agreed that we would see other people, and only have sex with each other when we were desperate. But I didn't. I haven't had sex with any other person since our first night.
I thought you would catch on, beings that I came to you every night that we didn't have a mission. I worked with you, I killed with you, but that wasn't enough for me.
Last week I decided that I was going to lay it all on the line for you. So I asked you to come clubbing with me.
I had it all planned out. I would pick you up, and the night would be perfect. A night on the town for the two of us, I loved the idea. The night would go exactly how it has gone tonight, except I would take you to my house, and get you all hot and bothered. Then I would tell you that I love you, and you would say it back. Then for the first time ever, we would make love. Not have sex, but make love."
"Yohji…"
"But you ruined it, Ken. You had to go and say it before I could. You caught me off guard. You ruined it all. My perfect plan was massacred, and I'm mad at you."
"You love me?"
"Yes I do, but now I'm mad at you."
"You sure weren't acting like it earlier tonight."
"That was before. This is now."
"Well what about the song? Pretty When You Cry? I mean it's basically about this guy who has sex with a virgin just because he can, then she falls in love with him, and now he's feeling guilty. So is that it? You had sex with me, and now you're feeling guilty cause I fell in love with you?"
"That's not what the song is about Ken!"
"Then what does it mean, Yohji?"
"It's about this guy who is in love with a girl that he has no right to be in love with. He has sex with her, and comes to realize her feelings for him. But since it's wrong for them to be together, he has to let her go."
"So then this date has turned into goodbye, the end. Is that what you're saying? It's wrong, so it's over?"
"I…don't know."
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so…that ends this chapter…how is it? Is it sad enough for everyone?
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Pretty When You Cry
By Unaspirality
We get inside, and go to the kitchen. We face each other on the barstools, our knees touching.
"What's up Yohji?"
"You remember our first night?"
"Yeah…"
"I went on a date with a beautiful woman, and for some strange reason, she shot me down."
"Yeah…"
"Well, it was because I couldn't offer her a real relationship. It just wouldn't work. It wouldn't work with anyone that I can't be completely open with.
So I came over here, all depressed cause I was turned down. I bitched and complained about women these days, and about how all they want is commitment. None of them just want a good lay. You let me whine, and then we just talked. We talked about commitment, and how it is over rated, and people should just be able to have one night stands, and then get on with their lives."
"Yeah…"
"Ken, I came over that night for more than a good listener."
"What do you mean?"
"What I'm trying to say…is that I had a thing for you…and I just knew that there was no chance in hell that you felt the same way. So I came over to seduce you…get a one-night stand, a good lay. I hoped that by doing so, that my need for you would be gone.
But it wasn't.
Before we had sex that night, we agreed that it would only be a thing that we did when we couldn't get it elsewhere. We agreed that we didn't have feelings for one and other, and that it would only be sex. However, after we had sex, I fell in love with you. I wanted nothing more that to move in, and be with you forever.
We agreed that we would see other people, and only have sex with each other when we were desperate. But I didn't. I haven't had sex with any other person since our first night.
I thought you would catch on, beings that I came to you every night that we didn't have a mission. I worked with you, I killed with you, but that wasn't enough for me.
Last week I decided that I was going to lay it all on the line for you. So I asked you to come clubbing with me.
I had it all planned out. I would pick you up, and the night would be perfect. A night on the town for the two of us, I loved the idea. The night would go exactly how it has gone tonight, except I would take you to my house, and get you all hot and bothered. Then I would tell you that I love you, and you would say it back. Then for the first time ever, we would make love. Not have sex, but make love."
"Yohji…"
"But you ruined it, Ken. You had to go and say it before I could. You caught me off guard. You ruined it all. My perfect plan was massacred, and I'm mad at you."
"You love me?"
"Yes I do, but now I'm mad at you."
"You sure weren't acting like it earlier tonight."
"That was before. This is now."
"Well what about the song? Pretty When You Cry? I mean it's basically about this guy who has sex with a virgin just because he can, then she falls in love with him, and now he's feeling guilty. So is that it? You had sex with me, and now you're feeling guilty cause I fell in love with you?"
"That's not what the song is about Ken!"
"Then what does it mean, Yohji?"
"It's about this guy who is in love with a girl that he has no right to be in love with. He has sex with her, and comes to realize her feelings for him. But since it's wrong for them to be together, he has to let her go."
"So then this date has turned into goodbye, the end. Is that what you're saying? It's wrong, so it's over?"
"I…don't know."
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so…that ends this chapter…how is it? Is it sad enough for everyone?
