Ok, I know my story does not have a lot of detail, but u get the point right? I'll try mi best to write them longer.
-midnight_blue
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" Kaoru-dono! Kaoru-dono! Are you okay?" Kaoru's eyes flickered. " She coming around!" Yahiko shouted. Tatsuji stood there, rooted to the ground in shock. " Did....did you sae Kaoru?" "What did you think he said?" Sano retorted and ran to Kaoru's side. "She...is my imouto?" Then he heard Kaoru say," Kenshin, I remember, it was horrible. Nee-san dropped into the water. Father jumped in to get him, but the current was too strong....too strong......" Tatsuji ran to her," It's okay. I'm not dead....I'm here." Kaoru looked at him. " Matte! How do we know you are telling the truth?" Sano looked at him suspiciously.
Tatsuji looked at him and back at Kaoru. " I understand. Here, this pendant," he takes out a pendant in the shape of a dragon," This pendant was given to me by father when I was born, as my name means dragon. (A.n. Tatsu means dragon). Kaoru, you have one too right? If I remember, yours is a flower, as your name means fragrant." Kaoru gasped. She took out a pendant in a shape of a flower. " It is very easy to know if Kaoru has a pendant, in a shape of a flower." Sano eyed him suspiciously. Tatsuji smiled and raised his sleeve, until a scar was seen. " Remember this? That time a few bullies were bullying you. They wanted your doll, but you refused to give it to them as Mother gave it to you. Then, one of them used a knife to threatened you, and I pushed you away, and got slashed in the arm instead of you." Kaoru looked at him wide-eyed," Nee-san? Really?"
Tatsuji nodded his head. Kaoru stared at him. " I think we had better leave them alone." And Kenshin started to leave the room, followed by the rest. " Are you sure that Tatsuji guy is really her brother?" Sano asked. Kenshin merely nodded his head. Suddenly, Kaoru's door opened. " So fast?" Kenshin turned around. " No! In my excitement I forgot to buy finish the groceries! Nee-san, want to come?" Tatsuji rose up and nodded his head. " As your bodyguard, I guess I have to come to." Sano followed them out of the dojo. Megumi and Kenshin looked at each other.
" Bodyguard?" "Oro...."
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So how was it? I know it is very short, but so are the other chapters!Do you think I made Kaoru a bit too trusting? But she's like that isn't she? Keep those review coming! Thank you!
-midnight_blue
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" Kaoru-dono! Kaoru-dono! Are you okay?" Kaoru's eyes flickered. " She coming around!" Yahiko shouted. Tatsuji stood there, rooted to the ground in shock. " Did....did you sae Kaoru?" "What did you think he said?" Sano retorted and ran to Kaoru's side. "She...is my imouto?" Then he heard Kaoru say," Kenshin, I remember, it was horrible. Nee-san dropped into the water. Father jumped in to get him, but the current was too strong....too strong......" Tatsuji ran to her," It's okay. I'm not dead....I'm here." Kaoru looked at him. " Matte! How do we know you are telling the truth?" Sano looked at him suspiciously.
Tatsuji looked at him and back at Kaoru. " I understand. Here, this pendant," he takes out a pendant in the shape of a dragon," This pendant was given to me by father when I was born, as my name means dragon. (A.n. Tatsu means dragon). Kaoru, you have one too right? If I remember, yours is a flower, as your name means fragrant." Kaoru gasped. She took out a pendant in a shape of a flower. " It is very easy to know if Kaoru has a pendant, in a shape of a flower." Sano eyed him suspiciously. Tatsuji smiled and raised his sleeve, until a scar was seen. " Remember this? That time a few bullies were bullying you. They wanted your doll, but you refused to give it to them as Mother gave it to you. Then, one of them used a knife to threatened you, and I pushed you away, and got slashed in the arm instead of you." Kaoru looked at him wide-eyed," Nee-san? Really?"
Tatsuji nodded his head. Kaoru stared at him. " I think we had better leave them alone." And Kenshin started to leave the room, followed by the rest. " Are you sure that Tatsuji guy is really her brother?" Sano asked. Kenshin merely nodded his head. Suddenly, Kaoru's door opened. " So fast?" Kenshin turned around. " No! In my excitement I forgot to buy finish the groceries! Nee-san, want to come?" Tatsuji rose up and nodded his head. " As your bodyguard, I guess I have to come to." Sano followed them out of the dojo. Megumi and Kenshin looked at each other.
" Bodyguard?" "Oro...."
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So how was it? I know it is very short, but so are the other chapters!Do you think I made Kaoru a bit too trusting? But she's like that isn't she? Keep those review coming! Thank you!
