How do you add humor to a story where Trunks and Pan die??? Lets see if I did it the right way.....please review
Disc. - I don't own DB/Z/GT
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Goten looked down at Bra. The young girl had cried herself to sleep in his arms. Her hair was matted all around her face and her dress was now an unattractive shade of brownish-red. The tears that ran rivers down her cheeks left trails that glittered in the moonlight. He felt so bad for her. Losing her brother and her best friend in one night was tough.
But it was like the same for him. Trunks was his best friend for as long as he could remember and Pan was practically a sister to him. Goten wished the families weren't so close. He would have broken down a while ago, back at the hospital, but he wanted to be strong for Bra. She needed someone there to comfort her, and he figured he would be the best choice for the job.
"No....Trunks...Pan...." Bra murmered in her sleep, shifting somewhat. *She's reliving the whole thing in her dream I bet. Poor girl.* Goten pulled her closer to him. His thoughts began to wonder to that ghost that had helped Bra. He was positive it was Trunks, who else had lavender hair? Capsule Corp. began to rise in the horizion.
"Hang on Bra, you are almost home." Goten whispered to her.
--Somewhere--
"Aww look at that...My ass he doesn't love her" one mysterious figure shouted out. The other two stumbled over her to see what she was looking at.
"Naa...he's just being nice that's all....I hope" the second one said. The first rolled her eyes, growling a bit. She grabbed his tail and squeezed. The first one winced and fell to his knees.
"I'll bet that they don't confess their true love and that Goten doesn't make Bra his mate tonite." the 3rd figure cried out, gazing at the crystal as Goten helped Bra to her bed. He had gotten her into some comfy clothes and was borrowing some of Vegeta's sweatpants.
"How much do you wanna bet??" The first figure asked him. The girl figure sat in thought for a moment. Then she smirked a familiar smirk.
"Well......."
--Back to C.C. in Bra's room--
"Why didn't you just borrow some of Trunks' clothes?" Bra asked, tearing at the sound of her beloved brother's name. She curled up into a ball under her covers.
"It felt kinda weird, ya know." He said walking to the window, getting ready to fly home. He thought it would be best to go check on his parents. Goku would be fine, just a little pissed, but ChiChi....oh boy that was gonna be a living hell.
Bra sat up as best she could, but her body and her spirit had been broken down into practically nothing, so she had little strength left in her. She reached out and grabbed Goten's arm with all the energy she could get.
"Goten, please don't leave me...please, stay with me. I feel so, lonely, and scared and cold. Please don't go." Bra pleaded. Goten turned around and faced the girl. She was in nothing but a black, skimpy nightdress, shivering. Goten wrapped his arms around her and led her back to the bed. Bra held onto his neck for some support. Goten lifted her up gently and carried her. He knew the condition she was in, and it was likely she could pass out at any minute.
"I'll stay as long as you need me to." he said, eyes burning into her tear-filled crystals. Goten grabbed a blanket and wrapped it around them. Bra looked up and him. He was the only thing she had left in her world now. Trunks was gone, Pan was gone. Goten was all that was left for her to love.
--Back somewhere--
"Yes Yes Yes I told you they would!! Damn I am good." the female figure announced. The first male figure approached her from behind and playfully kissed her neck. The girl wrapped her tail around his leg.
"Silly, they haven't said anything yet. And hopefully they won't. I can't believe we agreed to be your servant and vice versa if they do or don't." The figure said aloud. He pinched the girl's butt, earning an annoyed squeal from her.
"Oh you are soo gonna get it mister!!" She screamed and began chasing and throwing blasts at the male character. Every now and then she got a good hit and he would scream.
"Will you two knock it off?? Bra and Goten are talking and I can't understand a word they are saying with all the racket you are making!!!" the 3rd character shouted. The first two characters ran over and watched the crystal ball.
--Back at Bra's Room--
"I just can't believe he left me, Goten" Bra cried into Goten's chest. He rocked her back and forth, trying his best to comfort her. "And now my mom probably hates me. Who could love a murderer??" she sobbed.
"Bra I love you know matter who or what you are. I have always loved you, and I always will." Goten assured her. She looked up at him with those big, blue eyes that he loved so much. Goten wanted to take all her pain away, to hear her laugh again. He knew it would be a long time before she ever laughed.
"Goten, I love you so much," Bra murmered, cuddling into him. Goten tilted her chin so she was looking up at him. She smiled as he kissed with all the bottled up passion he had. Bra returned the kiss gladly, loving every minute she had with Goten. She wrapped her arms around his neck and curled up closer to the warmth that both their bodies and their growing love for each other was producing.
Goten broke the kiss and looked at Bra. "Your mine forever now, Princess" he said before sinking his teeth into her neck, marking her as his mate for life. She gave a squeal of pain, but understood the sincerity of the action.
"You are a brave one, my knight in shining armor, claiming a princess like that. " Bra said, repeating the action. Finally they had marked each other, and now their true love was visible.
--Back on king Ki's new Planet--
"Oh yea eat that boys. Looks like I gots me two slaves for how long again?? Oh yea thats right. 1 whole century!!!" Pan exclaimed. Trunks and King Ki dropped their heads.
"She is usually right about these things anyway," Trunks murmered, looking at the crystal where he saw his little sister and his best friend expressing their love. He sighed, glad that in all the mishap and saddness, there was still a little joy.
"Hey Underwear Boy, your master has a task for you!!" Pan shouted to Trunks, who shuddered. *Master??, damn she's getting kinky.* Trunks thought.
"I heard that!!!!" she screamed.
"Does this "task" involve whipped cream, handcuffs and a whip??" he asked, wrapping his arms around her waist. Pan smirked and snaked her arms down to Trunk's tail and began stroking it. Trunks purred like a kitten.
"You ask too many questions. Just shut up and kiss me." Pan said as she and Trunks locked in a firey, passionate kiss. Sooner or later King Ki was kicked out of his house and Pan could be heard moaning all around the northern quadrant.
"Now that's what I call a banging ending!" King Ki said to himself, right before bursting into a fit of laughter.
"NOT FUNNY KING KI!!!!!!" Pan and Trunks shouted.
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Umm.....end....
LOL
L-C
Disc. - I don't own DB/Z/GT
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Goten looked down at Bra. The young girl had cried herself to sleep in his arms. Her hair was matted all around her face and her dress was now an unattractive shade of brownish-red. The tears that ran rivers down her cheeks left trails that glittered in the moonlight. He felt so bad for her. Losing her brother and her best friend in one night was tough.
But it was like the same for him. Trunks was his best friend for as long as he could remember and Pan was practically a sister to him. Goten wished the families weren't so close. He would have broken down a while ago, back at the hospital, but he wanted to be strong for Bra. She needed someone there to comfort her, and he figured he would be the best choice for the job.
"No....Trunks...Pan...." Bra murmered in her sleep, shifting somewhat. *She's reliving the whole thing in her dream I bet. Poor girl.* Goten pulled her closer to him. His thoughts began to wonder to that ghost that had helped Bra. He was positive it was Trunks, who else had lavender hair? Capsule Corp. began to rise in the horizion.
"Hang on Bra, you are almost home." Goten whispered to her.
--Somewhere--
"Aww look at that...My ass he doesn't love her" one mysterious figure shouted out. The other two stumbled over her to see what she was looking at.
"Naa...he's just being nice that's all....I hope" the second one said. The first rolled her eyes, growling a bit. She grabbed his tail and squeezed. The first one winced and fell to his knees.
"I'll bet that they don't confess their true love and that Goten doesn't make Bra his mate tonite." the 3rd figure cried out, gazing at the crystal as Goten helped Bra to her bed. He had gotten her into some comfy clothes and was borrowing some of Vegeta's sweatpants.
"How much do you wanna bet??" The first figure asked him. The girl figure sat in thought for a moment. Then she smirked a familiar smirk.
"Well......."
--Back to C.C. in Bra's room--
"Why didn't you just borrow some of Trunks' clothes?" Bra asked, tearing at the sound of her beloved brother's name. She curled up into a ball under her covers.
"It felt kinda weird, ya know." He said walking to the window, getting ready to fly home. He thought it would be best to go check on his parents. Goku would be fine, just a little pissed, but ChiChi....oh boy that was gonna be a living hell.
Bra sat up as best she could, but her body and her spirit had been broken down into practically nothing, so she had little strength left in her. She reached out and grabbed Goten's arm with all the energy she could get.
"Goten, please don't leave me...please, stay with me. I feel so, lonely, and scared and cold. Please don't go." Bra pleaded. Goten turned around and faced the girl. She was in nothing but a black, skimpy nightdress, shivering. Goten wrapped his arms around her and led her back to the bed. Bra held onto his neck for some support. Goten lifted her up gently and carried her. He knew the condition she was in, and it was likely she could pass out at any minute.
"I'll stay as long as you need me to." he said, eyes burning into her tear-filled crystals. Goten grabbed a blanket and wrapped it around them. Bra looked up and him. He was the only thing she had left in her world now. Trunks was gone, Pan was gone. Goten was all that was left for her to love.
--Back somewhere--
"Yes Yes Yes I told you they would!! Damn I am good." the female figure announced. The first male figure approached her from behind and playfully kissed her neck. The girl wrapped her tail around his leg.
"Silly, they haven't said anything yet. And hopefully they won't. I can't believe we agreed to be your servant and vice versa if they do or don't." The figure said aloud. He pinched the girl's butt, earning an annoyed squeal from her.
"Oh you are soo gonna get it mister!!" She screamed and began chasing and throwing blasts at the male character. Every now and then she got a good hit and he would scream.
"Will you two knock it off?? Bra and Goten are talking and I can't understand a word they are saying with all the racket you are making!!!" the 3rd character shouted. The first two characters ran over and watched the crystal ball.
--Back at Bra's Room--
"I just can't believe he left me, Goten" Bra cried into Goten's chest. He rocked her back and forth, trying his best to comfort her. "And now my mom probably hates me. Who could love a murderer??" she sobbed.
"Bra I love you know matter who or what you are. I have always loved you, and I always will." Goten assured her. She looked up at him with those big, blue eyes that he loved so much. Goten wanted to take all her pain away, to hear her laugh again. He knew it would be a long time before she ever laughed.
"Goten, I love you so much," Bra murmered, cuddling into him. Goten tilted her chin so she was looking up at him. She smiled as he kissed with all the bottled up passion he had. Bra returned the kiss gladly, loving every minute she had with Goten. She wrapped her arms around his neck and curled up closer to the warmth that both their bodies and their growing love for each other was producing.
Goten broke the kiss and looked at Bra. "Your mine forever now, Princess" he said before sinking his teeth into her neck, marking her as his mate for life. She gave a squeal of pain, but understood the sincerity of the action.
"You are a brave one, my knight in shining armor, claiming a princess like that. " Bra said, repeating the action. Finally they had marked each other, and now their true love was visible.
--Back on king Ki's new Planet--
"Oh yea eat that boys. Looks like I gots me two slaves for how long again?? Oh yea thats right. 1 whole century!!!" Pan exclaimed. Trunks and King Ki dropped their heads.
"She is usually right about these things anyway," Trunks murmered, looking at the crystal where he saw his little sister and his best friend expressing their love. He sighed, glad that in all the mishap and saddness, there was still a little joy.
"Hey Underwear Boy, your master has a task for you!!" Pan shouted to Trunks, who shuddered. *Master??, damn she's getting kinky.* Trunks thought.
"I heard that!!!!" she screamed.
"Does this "task" involve whipped cream, handcuffs and a whip??" he asked, wrapping his arms around her waist. Pan smirked and snaked her arms down to Trunk's tail and began stroking it. Trunks purred like a kitten.
"You ask too many questions. Just shut up and kiss me." Pan said as she and Trunks locked in a firey, passionate kiss. Sooner or later King Ki was kicked out of his house and Pan could be heard moaning all around the northern quadrant.
"Now that's what I call a banging ending!" King Ki said to himself, right before bursting into a fit of laughter.
"NOT FUNNY KING KI!!!!!!" Pan and Trunks shouted.
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Umm.....end....
LOL
L-C
