Hey everyone. This is the official last part of Koushirou's Search! It involves comments from you readers and them being commented on. If you guys reviewed or anything and it wasn't commented on, I just missed it and I am very sorry about that. I did address as many as possible, though, unless more than one review said the same exact thing, pretty much, and I just commented on the first one I saw. Well, I'll stop rambling on about this and let you read. Besides, there's another Author's Note at the end of this.
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Part 30: Comments & Responses...

Tentomon: Hello everyone!

Other Digis: Hi!!

Gomamon: We are here to answer and comment on some of the reviews left by you readers.

Hawkmon: Bingo!

Tailmon: In other words, this is just a feeble attempt to get us Digimon, other than Tentomon's brief part, in here somehow.

Hawkmon: Bingo!

Piyomon: Quit it with the "bingos." You don't sound right saying bingo!

Hawkmon: Bingo!

Tailmon: -_-

Gabumon: Is he drunk again? -_-

Palmon: Do you have to ask?

Patamon: I take that as a yes then...

Wormmon: Oh yeah...

Hawkmon: Bingo! (Laughs drunkinly)

Tentmon: Hawkmon, if we give you something to drink, will you stop saying bingo and help us out?

Hawkmon: (Gives victory sign) Arigabingo!

V-mon: Oh-kay...

Tailmon: Okay Hawkmon! Don't tick me off today! We have an obligation to fufill to these readers! Now stop goofing off and help us out!

The drunk bird dances around, which causes everyone to sweatdrop, minus Tailmon who was starting to get those anger nerves on her forehead.

Tailmon: Okay, that does it! (Trying to claw at Hawkmon) Get over here! I'll sober you up!

Agumon, Gabumon, and V-mon held Tailmon back.

Gabumon: He'll sober up eventually. Let Patamon and Armadimon take care of it.

Patamon: Yeah, we'll help him out.

Armadimon: You can bet on that!

The two take Hawkmon out to try and get him sober.

Palmon: Hey, did Koushirou ever move out?

Tentomon: Yep, Koushirou-han moved out just like he said he would.

V-mon: But what school did he end up going to?

Tentomon: Odaiba High of course.

Wormmon: So he ended up going to public school after all.

Tentomon: He didn't want to move too far away from the Izumis, even though he was accepted into all three Private High Schools he applied for. He still felt that it was his duty as a big brother to help take care of Miki-han.

Piyomon: Okay, but---

Tailmon: (Interrupting) Okay, okay, let's just get this started! Leave some questions for the actual readers!

Tentomon: Yes, let us. (Clears throat) The first review comes from a reader named, (looks at card), Smegit. The comment of Smegit-han is a three-parter...

The made-up characters in this fic really stood out, they actually had personalities, amazing!

V-mon: RP's response to that is a big, "thank you!" RP really enjoys making up characters and stuff like that. She really appreciates the fact that her made up characters were noticed.
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I liked how you use Japanese words to give this fic atmosphere.

Tailmon: RP likes to be informative which is why she uses Japanese phrases and names sometimes. She believes that since the show is based on something "Japanese" that she should try to get it more "Japanese" like. She knows that there is no way she could be all "perfect," but she still likes to share the little bit of Japanese info she has with everyone else--like the differences dealing with the school years and the holidays. Thanks for noticing.

Agumon: She is also trying to learn how to read the language in general, which is why she uses a bit of Japanese in her fics and she is probably getting a bit better with it. Maybe! ^^

Gabumon: (Mutters with a sweat drop) Probably not...
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I also like the small bond of trust between Mimi and Koushirou.

Palmon: Something else RP was aiming for. Strengthing the bond between Koushirou and my Mimi which is why for this fic, she is showing off Mimi's more serious side than her usual playful one. She's always disliked the way some people portrays the two when it came to their interacting with one another.

Wormmon: Such as?

Palmon: Well, she always hated the fact that people would have Koushirou do nothing but sit in front of his computer and not notice anyone else and look at hentai the entire time or fics where Mimi is portrayed as stupid or incredibly airheaded or overly self centered and Koushirou insulting her intelligence. That defeats the purpose of her character having the Crest of Purity, pretty much, if Mimi acts self centered and spoiled. Sure she was a bit spoiled in the 1st season, but she matured during that and lived up to the true meaning of what her crest stood for and helped me to evolve to Lilimon. ^_^

Tentomon: Also, that would be out of character for Koushirou-han as well, to insult anyone. For the original, just like with Iori-han, he is very polite and would never insult or belittle anyone; regardless of his being a bit more knowledgeable than the others. Every once in a while he may make sarcastic remarks, but that's about it.

Gabumon: RP has never liked Out Of Character (OOC) fics much unless the fic is a humor or comedy fic and everyone is portrayed OOC, not just a certain few.
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Gomamon: Let's see, the next one here is from...(looks at card)...Guardianmon in reference to all that happened in part 11.

Gabumon: The adoption stuff, right?

V-mon: Yep.

I'm impressed with on how you handled details (and came up with them).

Tentomon: Thanks from her to you! Believe it or not, RP-han came up with all of that from off the top of her head. Names and everything, but she had to do a bit of info gathering for the stuff on the biological mother of Koushirou-han.

Hawkmon: Yeah!! Misayoshi Miki has a name meaning behind it. Misayoshi means "beautiful and intelligent." With the way RP spells it, here's what each character would mean...

Everyone looks over at Hawkmon in surprise who is now wearing a Professor's cap.

Piyomon: What are you doing here?

Hawkmon: I'm fine guys! I have sobered up.

Tentomon: What did you two do to him?

Armadimon: We just gave him a glass of water.

Patamon: I know it's weird, but after the drink of water he went back to normal.

Tentomon: That is weird...

Hawkmon: Hey! I am trying to explain some stuff here!

Everyone shut up and let Hawkmon go back to explaining.

Hawkmon: Now as I was saying, this is what the name means...

He takes his pointer and points it towards a blank board, but stops.

Patamon: Why did you stop?

Wormmon: Aren't you going to write the characters on the board first?

Hawkmon: (Blushes nervously) I forgot what characters she used to spell out her name. ^^;

Everyone facefaulted.

Hawkmon: Gomen. ^^;

Palmon: Get out of here!! Next comment please!
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Piyomon: Okay, okay, here goes...

Do I detect daikari? I sure hope so ^_^

V-mon: (Dreamy look) A match made in heaven!

Patamon: No it's not! My Takeru with Hikari is a match made in heaven because they both have partners that can evolve to angels.

V-mon: Oh no! The lamest excuse to put Takeru and Hikari together! The bad angel excuse that Rabid Takari Fans (RTFs) give!!

Patamon: But it's true...

V-mon: No way! I think Daisuke would be very happy with Hikari and that would make me and Tailmon be together forever...

Tailmon: -_-

V-mon: Don't you agree, Tailmon?

Tailmon: I refuse to answer such a ridiculous question.

Patamon: See, Tailmon and me should be together forever, isn't that right, Tailmon!

Tailmon: (Resists the urge to slash Patamon)

Patamon: See, she is speechless and likes me better!

V-mon: Um, why is there fire surrounding her?

Patamon: And her eyes are kind of firery red too...

Tentomon: I think we better step back...

Hawkmon: She's about to blow!

All of the Digimon backed up except for Patamon who was still trying to figure out what was wrong.

Patamon: Um, Tailmon?

Tailmon: (Screams and explodes)

Piyomon: (After the smoke clears) Is everyone okay?

Tailmon: (Smiles) I never felt better. I finally released all of that stress that had been building up inside of me.

Armadimon: Patamon!!

Hawkmon: (Giggling) Roast pig!

Patamon: (Coughs up smoke) I...am...not...a...pig...

Gabumon: Back to the comment for anyone else who is wondering, RP is a fan of Daikari but she is also a fan of Takari. The thing is, she feels that Daikari is more fun to write about because of Daisuke and Hikari's contrasting personalities, which she pretty much hinted at back in part 12 with the party.

Wormmon: She was hinting at Daikari for that part so Guardianmon "hoped" right. ^_^
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Tentomon: Here is another comment based on the real parents of Koushirou-han...

I liked the ideas you used about Koushirou's biological parents, especially the qualities that he inherited from them.

Agumon: That was no easy task coming up with the features, so RP decided to have Koushirou resemble his biological mother moreso than his father to keep her "mysterious," sort of like how RP sees Koushirou in general anyway, "mysterious."

Tentomon: Another reason why RP-han decided to make Misayoshi-han, "mysterious" was because of the lack of information revealed about her in the show in general. All they said was that, "she died," pretty much. At least with the father of Koushirou-han, they mentioned him being a professor of Mathematics at Odaiba University.
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V-mon: Ooh, here's the next comment...

Also I am thankful that for once Daisuke has been portrayed in a positive light instead of the usual ignorant bumbling character in other fics.

V-mon: RP hates it when Daisuke is portrayed that way too. He really isn't all that dumb like some people make him out to be, even though she felt that he was a tad bit OOC for the party.

Patamon: Yeah, no one thinks he's dumb or stupid or anything close to that for the original version of the show, but for the English version, the majority of everyone seemed to bash him for some reason.

Tentomon: Even Koushirou-han and Iori-han did! That shows how messed up it is if they were insulting Daisuke-han!

Wormmon: Poor guy...

Tailmon: One thing RP likes to do is to keep everyone portrayed the way they would be if this were an original episode. She knows a bit about the original and how the characters act around Daisuke and with him. No one really bashes or insults him, Takeru included. The two don't hate each other and are pretty good friends, actually. Takeru hangs over at the Motomiya home quite a bit. Daisuke is hyper, playful, and energetic no matter which version you watch and does say goofy things at times, but no one thinks he's an idiot because of it.

Gabumon: RP seems to like the Motomiya siblings in general. She hated the way the fans of the actual show were with Jun and how everyone just assumed that Yamato hated Jun. RP obviously doesn't think this way because of how he acted towards her when they first met one another. Yamato just hated the "fan treatment" that Jun gave him, not her in general.

Palmon: She thinks that both Jun and Daisuke are good characters and plans on writing a fic about the brother/sister bond between the two of them. It's on her list of things to write about, which has gotten pretty long...

Wormmon: No kidding! I know she plans on writing a real Koushirou x Mimi (Koumi) someday...

Gomamon: Then there's her Jou x Mimi (Joumi) fic she's still working on...

Armadimon: And that fic she's still working on dealing with my Iori working for the Digimon Kaizer...

Agumon: Any Taichi stories in mind?

Palmon: Nope, but she did have an OOC comedy Tamers fic in mind starring that kid Jenrya...

Armadimon: Cool! (Thinks for a moment) Who's Jenrya?

Palmon: The boy with the Terriermon from Digimon Tamers!

Armadimon: What's he like?

Tentomon: A bit like Iori-han when you get right down to it. He's a pacifist too, but for different reasons. Iori-han was a pacifist and hated killing because of his father being killed. As for the stuff with Jenrya-han, let's have his Digimon partner answer that...

Terriermon: Hi! ^_^

All: Hi Terriermon.

Terriermon: I heard what you said about this Iori character. Jen is a little like that, but he did something personally that made him such a pacifist. Jen hates any kind of violence in general because of himself. He used his martial arts on a bully, but overdid it and really hurt the person.

Armadimon: Aww. That's sad.

Terriermon: Moumantai! ^_^ After that, he didn't want to fight for any reason anymore, which included him not wanting me to fight, but he learned that we all have to fight sometimes.

Tentomon: Okay, thank you Terriermon for your description of your human partner.

Terriermon: No problem. ^_^

Tentomon: Now, let's continue on...
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Hawkmon: Here's the next comment...

Also I like your long stories, you make them very detailed with tons of action and of course humor!

Tentomon: Of course you are referring to me for the humour...

Gomamon: (Sighs) How can they be referring to you if you haven't been in this fic much!

Tentomon: Oh yeah, good point. ^^

Gomamon: (Sighs at Tentomon/continues on) Thanks a lot. RP seems to always end up writing long stories, even with 'nonfics' that she's never posted anyplace because she likes to get into detail so much. (Smiles) At least now we know that RP isn't running anyone off with the length of this fic.
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Piyomon: Here's the next comment...

I think you characters are definitly IC, except maybe that "Night of the Living Piedmon" one.

Tentomon: Don't remind me of that nightmare I had to live through...

Patamon: You? I was the one who had a human partner that was violent!

Gabumon: Well, my partner was suicidal!

Tentomon: Mine was a mental case! Doesn't that count for something!!

Armadimon: Calm down everyone. Night of the Living Piedmon was purposely a Comedy OOC fic, but she is glad that she attempted doing what she was aiming for, for this fic...keeping everyone IC! Thanks for the opinion. ^_^
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Hawkmon: This is one of RP's favorites for comments...

I loved your made-up characters they seemed so… REAL! Especially the 'Keisuke' and 'Anje' characters, they really stood out.

V-mon: Hey, you know what's ironic about that?

Wormmon: No, what niisan?

V-mon: The part with Keisuke and Anje was one of RP's favorite parts to write.

Wormmon: Cool!

V-mon: Thanks a lot. She had fun making up both Anje and Keisuke. Anje's character was based on an old teacher RP used to have for her old Honors Algebra II class.

Wormmon: She keeps saying that her teacher had "Permenant PMS," whatever that means.

V-mon: I don't feel like explaining it to you so go ask the "oh wise one."

Tentomon: Somebody rang?

V-mon: Yeah, explain to Wormmon what RP means by "Permenant PMS" while I finish commenting on Anje and Keisuke for the readers.

Tentomon: (Sweatdropped) Um...okay...

V-mon: Anyway, RP's old teacher would snap at you if you get a right answer and really seemed to hate kids, so she just used that old teacher. The only difference between the Anje character and her teacher is how mean each one was. Anje was worse.

Armadimon: Originally, Anje was going to be nice, but RP changed her mind and wanted some more conflict and an excuse to have Koushirou get mad, which isn't very often with him unless his computer is being harmed in some way.

V-mon: As for Keisuke, he was a Japanese male version of herself, minus the sibling stuff. She's an only child, but everything Keisuke wanted to do is exactly what she wishes to do for a part of her life someday. ^_^
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Not many writers can give made-up characters so much personality and emotion, and the way you did it proves that you are extremely talented...Oh, and in response to your question "do you think that the characters in this fic are too out of character?" Nope, they seem pretty much IN character, besides, this story is so engrossing that I wouldn't notice if anyone was OOC.

Piyomon: RP says, "Doumo Arigatou Gozaimasu!" ^_^

Palmon: Yeah, she works very hard to keep them IC. ^_^

Tailmon: I suppose all of her hard work is paying off...

Patamon: (Snickering) What hard work...
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Finally! Izzy gets in trouble! *evil grin* Amusing scene with the guard. LOL I think I know where the inspiration for that came from. ^_~

Tentomon: RP says to you, "Naturally. lol"
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Oh and I forgot to review chapter 19 when it came out. I must say that it was a fave for me. I love angst! ^_^ And the angst in that chapter was so well done.

V-mon: Another "ironic" situation! Chapter 19 was also a favorite part by RP to write. She loves putting Miyako in romantic situations, but in an angst filled way.

Hawkmon: She likes writing about my Miyako-san. ^_^

Wormmon: She seems to like angst related situations including Miyako in general.

Agumon: Pretty weird if you ask me...

Hawkmon: Yeah, it is...
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Betamon: Okay, here's the next comment... (Gets a bunch of stares) What?

Tentomon: And you are here because?

Betamon: Aww, c'mon, can't I hang around for a while? I have not had the chance to do anything for this entire fic!

Tentomon: Probably because you and Michael aren't in it!

Betamon: So? I'm in here for the sequel, I hope, so why can't I do it now? Besides, RP likes Michael and me.

Tentomon: (Sighs) Go ahead...

Uh oh, Izzy will probably be grounded til 30 after this....and definitly won't be able to talk w/ any of his friends for a while! My sister loves the grand theft auto game too ^_^.

Betamon: Izzy being grounded until he is 30 is way too illogical...

Tentomon: I agree!

Betamon: It should be 40! :-p

Tentomon: (Facefaults)

Betamon: (Laughs and continues) Cool about your sister and the game. It is a fun game. Michael plays all of the time. One of RP's favorite things to do is just finding new ways to get the cops to chase her or trying out stunts with different vehicles. The steeper the ramp, the more fun it is.

Gomamon: Sounds like fun.

Betamon: She also likes to find new ways to crash too.

Gomamon: On purpose?

Betamon: Not exactly. ^^;

Gomamon: -_-

Betamon: She's just a rotten player. ^^
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I loved your made-up characters especially the guard who seemed like a cross between Inspector Gadget and that other inspector from the Pink Panther movies. I couldn't stop laughing at his actions.

All Digimon minus Tentomon: (Laughing at Koushirou and the guard)

Tentomon: That was not funny! My Koushirou-han could have been hurt!

Other Digimon: (Still laughing)

Tentomon: Hey!!

Agumon: C'mon, Tentomon, you have to admit that the entire situation was hilarious! (Holds stomach from laughing so much)

Tentomon: No, it was not! (Cross tone) Anyway, shouldn't we be commenting on the comment?

Everyone is laughing too much to answer.

Tentomon: (Sighs) Okay, I'll comment then! (Reads comment) The thought of Inspector Gadget nor Inspector Kleauseau (sp?), came to mind when writing that, but when you mentioned it, RP laughed herself and realized that that goofy kid could be a mix of the two. She didn't even realize it.

V-mon: (Stopped laughing temporarily) So who did she get the idea for the character from?

Tentomon: That nerdy kid you always see on the Simpsons with the zit problem and a congested nose whose voice cracks constantly and seems to work everywhere.

The blue Digi face-faulted.

V-mon: I like the Inspector Gadget/Inspector Kleauseau (sp?) mix better...
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I have to say that you handled the argument scene between Koushirou and his parents brilliantly. Mr. And Mrs. Izumi were portrayed excellently, considering the situation. I also loved the scene with all the neighbours gossiping on the telephone to each other. ^_^

Piyomon: Yay!! Someone thought that the argument with them was well done!!

Palmon: RP just hypothetically asked around for help with that.

Tailmon: Yeah, like real parents.

Hawkmon: She would just go, "Hey, what if you had a child who was brought home by the cops," and "he's never been in trouble before," blah, blah, blah. (Takes a drink from out of a tall glass and giggles a bit)

Tailmon: And what kind of responses did she get?

Hawkmon: Serious grounding time and/or smacked for doing something stupid that would result in them being brought home by the cops, regardless of pregnancy of the mother.

Piyomon: That is pretty strict. ^^

Palmon: Hmm, so what about those gossiping neighbors?

Hawkmon: Just popped into her head to use. No backstory with them, sort of.

Piyomon: Sort of?

Hawkmon: Usa, Mako, and Mina. Just think, what has RP liked ever since she first saw it almost eight years ago?

Tailmon: Oh! Usagi, Makoto, and Minako!

Piyomon: Sailor Moon references!

Palmon: Moon, Jupiter, and Venus! Those three would be the most gossipy of the group!

Hawkmon: (Does a victory pose like Miyako) BINGO!! (Giggles hysterically as he drinks from his tall glass again)

Piyomon/Palmon/Tailmon: He's drunk again... -_-

Both Patamon and Armadimon run in while Hawkmon is currently dancing around acting like a fighter pilot.

Patamon: Don't worry, we'll take care of him!

Armadimon: Yeah, getting him undrunk is our job now according to Gomamon and Tentomon.

Patamon: I have the hose ready.

Armadimon: Roger, Patamon!

The small, armadillo looking Digimon turned on the water while Patamon aimed the hose.

Patamon: Have a drink of this, Hawkmon! It's lots of alcohol!

Hawkmon: Bingo Bingo Bingo Bingo!! (Laughs hysterically)

The hawk like Digi drank all of the water and passed out. He then stood right back up.

Hawkmon: What's going on?

Armadimon: Nothing, now. We fixed you up. ^_^

Patamon: Well, it looks like our work here is done.

Armadimon gave Patamon a high five. Palmon, Tailmon, and Piyomon thought they were all crazy.

Hawkmon: Let's get to the next comment!
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That was mean!!! I wanna know where Koushirou is!

Patamon: That's because RP is evil and annoying and needs to be locked away!

Tailmon: What did we tell you about saying bad things about RP? She'll always find a way to get you back!

Patamon: The story is over! She can't get me in any way!!

Hawkmon: I wouldn't be so sure...

The scene changes to that of a football field.

Football announcer: Kazuki Shigure here along with my partner, Mai Aiki!

Aiki: Thanks Shigure. This is a game between the Cinncinati Begnals and the Denver Broncos! We are now down to the last few minutes of the final quarter!

Shigure: The score is still 28 to nothing. I wish things would liven up around here. Onesided games are quite boring.

Aiki: (Nods her head) Yes, they are.

Shigure: But what would you expect fromt he Bengals with such a Quarterback?

Aiki: Good point, but maybe they'll score.

Shigure: (Scoffs) Yeah, when pigs fly.

Aiki: Maybe their Quarterback'll actually pass the ball after the snap.

The game goes on and surprisingly, the Bengals score.

Aiki: The score is now 28-28!

Shigure: A lucky break since the Broncos were feeling sorry for them! They let them score! Shall I replay the last few plays of the game?

Aiki: No! Anything but that! I had enough of the Broncos purposely missing the opportunity to keep the Bengals from scoring. ^^

Shigure: I still don't think they're going to win with only 45 seconds left in the game! Overtime maybe, but no win.

Aiki: There goes the snap!
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Tailmon and Hawkmon are now on the field.

Hawkmon: How did we end up here?

Tailmon: I don't know. What are those humans doing?

A bunch of players run past them.

Hawkmon: Football American Style. (Looks around) I wonder where Patamon is...
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Shigure: And he doesn't pass, no surprise, and and...wait! The football is turning into a...a...(confused tone)...pig with wings?!? I thought I'd never live to see the day where pigs actually fly!

Aiki: Could that be a sign of their actually winning?

Shigure: (Shakes his head) I doubt it...

Aiki: The quarterback passes to...himself?

Shigure: If they score, they'll break the tie and win the game!

Aiki: He's running...running...and running some more!

Shigure: Could it be another touch down?

Aiki: He passes to the linebacker...why, I have no idea seeing as how that particular linebacker is about 20 yards behind him!

Shigure: 20 seconds left!

Aiki: The linebacker is now running towards their goal, but is intercepted by some of the Bronco players, but passes the ball just in time!

Shigure: It doesn't look good for the Bengals folks, but then again, do you all expect them to win anyway?

Audience: NO!!

Shigure: The ball is passed back to the Bengals' Quaterback! He is heading down the field with the pig-looking football!

Patamon: HELP!!! GET ME OUT OF HERE!!!

Aiki: 10 seconds to spare!

The Quarterback kept running towards his goal with all of the Bronco Denver players on his tail.

Both Announcers: 5...4...3...2..1! (Surprised tone) Touchdown? The Bengals win?

The Quarterback tripped, fell, and was tackled right on the goal line, which caused him to win the game. He then got up and spiked Patamon after he made their touchdown. Tailmon and Hawkmon ran over to Patamon as everyone was cheering for the winning team...shockingly.

Hawkmon: (Snickers a bit) RP strikes again...

Tailmon: Are you okay, Patamon?

Patamon: (Twitches)

Hawkmon: I think we need a paramedic...

Tentomon, Armadimon, and Gomamon come in and put Patamon on a stretcher to fix him up.

Gomamon: He'll be fixed up in no time using fic magic.

Armadimon: Maybe we should try water like we did with Hawkmon. ^_^

Hawkmon: (Shakes his head) We warned him...
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Gabumon: Hmm, this is an actual comment that deserves a sophisticated answer, good thing I am here to answer it.

Palmon: What do you mean!! Only Tentomon would say something as selfish as that! Are you saying that none of us are sophisticated enough to answer and respond to these comments!

Gabumon: (Smiling) Yes...

Palmon: Oh that's it!! (Tries to hurt Gabumon) Get over here, dog!! (Being held back by Tailmon) Hey!

Tailmon: Violence is never the answer for you, Palmon. It doesn't suit your nice, caring personality...

Palmon stops trying to strangle Gabumon with her vines.

Palmon: You're right, it doesn't suit me to lose my temper. I'm too loving.

Tailmon: (Nodding) It may not suit you, but, (takes out her claws), it suits me!!! (Tries to go after Gabumon, but was dragged off by V-mon and Agumon)

Gabumon: (Sweatdrops from Tailmon's outburst)

one question though, what is white day? i'm assuming it's a japanese holiday, but i've never heard of it (not that i have a huge resource of japanese culture in my head or anything...)

Hawkmon: (To Gabumon for Tailmon's outburst) Glad she isn't mad at me. I'll take this one, Gabumon. White Day is like the mirror of St. Valentine's Day in Japan. In Japan, on Valentine's, the girls give boys chocolates and presents to whomever they admire, or their male friends, etc. White Day is the opposite where the boys give gifts or chocolates to the girls. As you already know, Valentine's is February 14, White Day is exactly a month later, March 14.

Gabumon: White Day is also known as "Marshmallow Day." That's what the day was originally called, but it was changed to White Day later since that was the color of Marshmallows. The thing to do on the day was to give marshmallow candies to the girls who gave boys chocolates on Valentine's, but that's changed and other things are given, not just marshmallow candies.

Tentomon: There are two main candies that are given out on both White Day and Valentine's; Honmei Chocolates and Giri Chocolates. Giri Chocolates are known as "Obligation Chocolates" and are given to those you feel obligated to give them to...

Piyomon: Like your friends, classmates, or coworkers.

Tentomon: Honmei Chocolates are known as "Sweetheart Chocolates" and are given to romantic interests...

Piyomon: Like lovers, spouses, boyfriends, girlfriends, those you have crushes on...

Gabumon: Honmei Chocolates are more than likely homemade to show that person that you are very special to them. Homemade things are much more meaningful in Japanese culture and shows that you really care about the person you made it for since they went through the trouble to do it. You can buy chocolate mixes in the store to make it, sort of like how one can buy a cake mix to bake a cake.

Palmon: So more than likely, if a guy received something homemade from a girl, it could mean that they are highly interested in that guy romantically.

Hawkmon: Bingo!!

Everyone: (Sweatdrops) Not again with the bingos!!
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The way you brought Ken into the fic was smartly done and the scene with his chess game was quite touching!

Wormmon: (Blows nose) My poor Ken-chan!! Having to have gone through such a sad ordeal. It was touching to me too...

Patamon: What sad ordeal?

Wormmon: Losing his brother!

Patamon: Oh, that. Well yes, that is sad.

Wormmon: Wait, what are you doing here? I thought you were spiked, kicked, and thrown.

Patamon: Fic magic. I'm all better again and I will never say anything bad about RP ever again, (under his breath), for a while anyway...

Wormmon: Oh, well in reference to the comment, arigatou!

Patamon: RP is fan of Chess, a rotten player, but a fan of it and she could see Ken as a Chess player.

Wormmon: That's not all, she just wanted Ken-chan in here!

Patamon: That too! Thanks a lot for the comment! ^_^
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V-mon: We're getting up to the real interesting comments now!

Tailmon: The Mishirou stuff?

Hawkmon: Bingo!!

Tailmon: That does it!! If you say Bingo one more time, I promise you that I will get you later when no one else is around to hold me back!!

The bird sweatdropped and nodded.

Tailmon: Do you understand?

Hawkmon: (Sly smirk) Perfecto!

Tailmon: (Facefaults)

Palmon: Now the next few comments are going to be on the stuff dealing with the Cherry Blossom Festival...

Tentomon: Let's look over them, shall we...

Nooo!!! This is suppose to be a koumi!! All well mimto is ok.

Palmon: That's what we thought.

Tentomon: It seemed like the most logical thing to do...

Hawkmon: But maybe it was a bit too cliched? You think?

The other Digimon shrugged.

Piyomon: Who knows, but it was rather surprising that it didn't end up a romance story between Koushirou and Mimi with the way it was going.

Palmon: As for the Mimato stuff, RP surprised herself with that one. She's not too big a fan of Mimato.

Gabumon: She doesn't hate it, but she doesn't like it either.

Palmon: She does like it angsty and onesided, which is pretty much what she did. She likes it when Yamato has the crush on Mimi and her just liking him as a friend.

Tentomon: She likes other pairings including Mimi-han and Yamato-han much better, though.
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Tailmon: Let's see, the next comment is...

I'm glad u didn't hurt daisuke in the takari part, that's the main thing I hate about takari usually but they're all right if they don't bash daisuke.

Patamon: (Sticks tongue out at V-mon) Haha!! See, RP put my Takeru with Hikari and not Daisuke!

V-mon: (Hmmphing) Who cares!

Patamon: Now me and Tailmon are the perfect partners.

V-mon: (Muttering) Yeah right!

Tailmon: (Ignores the both of them) The idea that RP was trying to get across in reference to Daisuke's character, was that he had grown up quite a bit and even though he may still like Hikari, he wouldn't get in the way of her own happiness like he would if he were probably his early Adventure 02 self when it came to Takeru in general.

V-mon: I'm still surprised that she didn't put my Daisuke with her!

Tailmon: I'm actually surprised too. RP likes alternate couplings including Takeru and Hikari much better than those two actually being together.

V-mon: Like Daisuke x Hikari!!

Tailmon: (Sighs) Yes, like Daisuke x Hikari...
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Hawkmon: Here is the next comment...

This has to be one of the bst koumi's I have ever read.

Palmon: It's one of the best ones I have had the honor to be in too!

Tentomon: But it didn't turn out to be a Koumi...

Palmon: It doesn't matter! It is still a Koumi, only not in the romantic sense.

Hawkmon: Explain that one.

Palmon: It is more so a Koushirou x Mimi friendship fic, which RP also really likes. She just loves when they interact.

Hawkmon: But was that the plan from the beginning? Having it a friendship fic between Koushirou-san and Mimi-san?

Palmon: At the very beginning it was intended to be just a typical story about Koushirou looking for information for his biological family with the help of my Mimi and the two being good friends. As it went on, though, RP's liking of that particular pairing started to show, so she decided to have the two get together, especially after the stuff dealing with Mimi's encounter with that stupid man.

Tentomon: So why didn't she?

Palmon: Because of what Hawkmon said earlier. It would have been too cliched and predictable and after hearing the song, Never End, it reminded her of the two, but in a way where they want to be with each other, but fate not allowing it.

Tentomon/Hawkmon: Oh...
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Gomamon: Time for the next comment!

Good stuff! Good, good stuff! My favourite parts have to be: the conversation that takes place between Miyako and Jou while Koushirou is going crazy and the flashback where Kimiko gets adopted thanks to Izzy, both parts where very well written and highly enjoyable.

Gomamon: My poor Jou, having to put up with Miyako.

Hawkmon: What's that supposed to mean!?!

Gomamon: She was making him crazy with the stuff she was saying.

Hawkmon: My beautiful Miyako-san was only stating facts about human nature that she suspiciously knows a lot about.

Gomamon: But Jou couldn't take it!

Hawkmon: It is not her fault that your human partner is so wimpy when it comes to human nature.

Gomamon: That's not it! It's the fact that it came from Miyako who is younger than him!

Hawkmon: Excuses, excuses...

Gomamon: Hey!!

Hawkmon: Nya, nya, nya!

Tailmon: (Shakes her head) While those two argue, I'll take this one. She always liked the idea of Jou freaking out when it came to the discussing of the "Birds & the Bees." She always wondered how he would react in that particular situation and now you have it.

Tentomon: As for my Koushirou-han freaking out, RP-han just has this sick and twisted mind to put him in situations to make him seem crazy.

Gabumon: Only because he's the quiet one and we all know how the quiet ones snap.

Armadimon: Just like Iori in her other fic.

Agumon: Or that Takato child from Digimon Tamers.

Tentomon: And you all don't see a problem with that? -_-

Gomamon: (Smirking) Nope, because she only does that to Koushirou.

Hawkmon: (Trying not to laugh) Yeah, Koushirou-san is the only character RP uses to make crazy enough to be actually committed.

Tentomon: (Muttering) Don't remind me... -_-

Tailmon: (Ignores the others) Thank you for the comment dealing with Miyako and Jou. She had a lot of fun writing it.

Palmon: As for Kimiko, from RP's reading an e-mail that was sent to her by one of the readers and going back over your reviews, she remembered that she was planning on getting her back into the fic somehow.

Piyomon: RP has one terrible memory. There's one part for this fic she actually forgot to use in reference to when Mimi and Koushirou actually started the assignment. She remembered it about four or five parts later.

V-mon: So for that, RP really thanks you all for reminding her.
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Ah, nice one! I loved it! You really captured the characters in a great way, especially Miyako and Jyou, their scenes were the best. You should really consider doing a short comedy fic featuring those two seeing how well you can handle them.

Hawkmon: Wow! A story staring my Miyako-san would be wonderful!

Gomamon: Poor Jou! Miyako'll make him crazier than Koushirou!

Tentomon: Sounds good to me!

Gomamon: It wasn't meant to be that way!

Tentomon: It would be nice to give my Koushirou-han a break.

Gomamon: Would not!

Tentomon: Would to!

Gomamon: Would not!

Tentomon: I say it will!

All of the other Digimon sweatdropped as Gomamon and Tentomon argued and also ignored them.

V-mon: What does RP think about that?

Armadimon: She likes the idea and glad that it was suggested.

Gabumon: I sense that RP will do that now that it has been brought up.

Armadimon: Of course!

Wormmon: I hope it doesn't end up scary like that fic she did about Koushirou and the aliens.

Gabumon/Tentomon/Patamon: Don't remind us!!

V-mon: (Sweatdropped) Um, yeah. Anyway, thanks for the suggestion. The thought hadn't even entered RP's mind to write a fic dealing with those two.

Agumon: Humor, of course.

V-mon: What else would she use?

Tentomon: Beware, Hawkmon. Because of that review, RP-han is now brainstorming for ideas to make a comedy fic dealing with Miyako-han and Jou-han.

Hawkmon: I can handle that!

Wormmon: RP also says thank you for the compliment. She didn't think she had done that good a job with those two. ^_^
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The interaction between Mimi and Koushirou was also nicely done, especially their hidden feelings for one another.

Palmon: Yay! Koumi, Koumi, Koumi!

Tentomon: Palmon, it didn't happen, remember?

Palmon: Who cares! It's still cute!

Piyomon: I still don't understand why RP didn't put the two together. Cliche or not, it's mutual between the two. They both liked each other.

Hawkmon: Because it is a cliche, that's why! It's too predictable to have the two get together!

Piyomon: Who cares! This is love!

Hawkmon: Um, yeah, love.

Piyomon: What's with you? Don't you believe in love, Hawkmon?

Hawkmon: Sure, but what good is it if the person doesn't notice, like my Miyako-san! She never notices since she is always after Koushirou-san!

Everyone gave the hawk like Digi a look.

Tailmon: (Sweatdropped) Oh-kay...

Palmon: Getting off that topic, let us get back to the comment. I liked the interaction between them too! ^_^

Tentomon: You would...

Palmon: And what's wrong with that?

Tentomon: Nothing, I'm just saying that you would.

Palmon: You didn't have to say it like that, though!

Tentomon: Like what?

Palmon: Like that!

Gabumon: I would strongly suggest ignoring those two, like the rest of us are doing. Anyway, that's exactly what RP was trying to do. Get in some good interaction between both Mimi and Koushirou and hint tremendously that the two really liked each other in more than a friendship way. Something to make it even more angsty.

Gomamon: What is with her and the angst...

Gabumon: She did it that way to keep their feelings hidden.

Gomamon: If you say so...

Gabumon: Either way, RP really appreciates your pointing that out. ^_^
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Other parts I enjoyed, the scene with Koushirou's new sibling. It was a very touching moment when Koushirou named his new sister after his biological mother, although I had a feeling that he would've named the baby after his mom.

Tailmon: That does seem logical. Why didn't RP have Koushirou name his new sister Yoshie instead of Miki?

Tentomon: That is quite simple, my felined friend.

Tailmon: Um, yeah, whatever. Anyway, why didn't she have him name her Yoshie?

Tentomon: RP-han just wanted to find a way to get some kind of a connection between Koushirou-han and his biological mother. His naming his new sister Miki-han was all RP-han could come up with. Besides, that was originally what she had in mind, having her named after his adoptive mother.

Armadimon: And why did she decide against it?

Patamon: Because it would have been too obvious to use. She likes to surprise the readers I guess.

Tentomon: That scene brought tears to my eyes! At times like this, I wish I had a Digimommy.

Agumon: Oh Tentomon, that line is so season 1.

Tentomon: But it's true! It was a touching scene.

Gabumon: Just what RP was going for and by the looks of the review, she succeeded!
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I'm also kind of sad that this marvellous story is over but glad that you're considering on doing a sequel. Well, thanks again for keeping me updated on it's progress and good luck with the sequel!

Tentomon: I'm sad this fic is over too.

Patamon: Why is that?

Tentomon: Because this is the only fic my Koushirou-han has been in without him acting like some kind of a mental case.

Hawkmon: What about his outburst with the doctor?

Tentomon: That doesn't count! That was a normal crazy.

Tailmon: A normal crazy? I never knew there was such a thing.

Tentomon: Well, there isn't, but it is now since I made up just this second. ^^;

Tailmon: -_-

Palmon: RP's response to that is, "You are very welcome."

Armadimon: And thanks for the luck for the sequel from her to you too. She could use it!

V-mon: Yeah, especially since it probably lacks us Digimon.

Patamon: Oh, don't worry. We'll find a way for her to get us into that fic!

Wormmon: Definitely! I didn't get to hang around my Ken-chan at all for this fic!

Piyomon: We will scheme and plot later, but first we have to finish up the reviews.

Palmon: Hey, we have finished all of them.

Gomamon: I hope we didn't miss any.

Hawkmon: I'm sure we didn't, and if we did, it was an accident.

Tentomon: Well, since we are done answering and responding to the reviews, we might as well end this.

All Digimon: Hai!

V-mon: We would like to thank all you readers out there who read this fic.

Patamon: You guys were very brave to do such a thing!

Hawkmon: What's that supposed to mean?

Patamon: Look at how long this story is, I'm surprised everyone didn't run off.

Wormmon: It'll take more than that to scare readers off. Now, we have to plan and scheme so we can weasel our way into the sequel! I want to see my Ken-chan!

All of the Digimon nodded in agreement as they all started to plot for the sequel...

THE END

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I know that could have been better, but my mind went blank. ^^; But, I do appreciate you all taking the time to read this fic. I hope you all enjoyed it. I know I enjoyed writing it for you. But I still loved the reviews even more! ^_^

Oh, let me say this now, I have nothing against football and stuff. I don't know much about football, actually. I know the game, but that's about it. When it comes to the different teams and who's a good team, etc., I'm clueless. So, just so you'll know, I have nothing against the Bengals or whatever. To be honest, I actually got the idea to use that skit thanks to DavidAP and our talking about the Simpsons, as usual. lol Thanks again, Davy-kun. ^_^

Let's see, what else can I torture you all with? lol Oh yeah, it is true. I am writing a sequel to this fic. I'm going to put the first part of it up just so you'd get an idea as to what it's going to be about and what's going to be in it, etc. It is going to be a future fic and the story, itself, is going to revolve around Mimi's son, pretty much, and his trying to adapt to the ways of Odaiba. There's more information about the actual fic in the Author's Note there if any of you are interested. It gives a better description than what I did here and don't judge it by the first part with all of the goofy Digimon stuff, judge it by the second part where the story officially begins.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=863087

The one thing I need from you readers, though, are ideas as to which characters you would like to see again for the sequel that appeared in this fic. You know, the miscellaneous characters that appeared in this fic, like Mimi's friends, the boy they met at Odaiba University, Shuu, etc.

Well, thanks again for reading and I hope you read the sequel to this fic and I am always open for ideas, so don't forget to leave them. ^_^