Ok, chapter two! I have an idea of what is going to happen and so im
writing it! Im not the best writer and im sorry! Im one of those people
that have great story ideas, but don't write good stories, anyways:
"..how was the plane ride?.."
He broke the silence.
"..fine.."
She had been waiting to see this man for ten years and all she could say was fine. She turned and looked out the window of the car, they had been driving for what seemed hours. They seemed to be in the middle of nowhere. Out of range from a payphone, so she couldn't call her papa.
The car pulled over and stopped. Turning to the driver she smiled, "Daddy, why are we stopping?
Tears were running down his eyes. He stared strait forward. Ten years had passed and things were different. There he sat in the car with his daughter he had so longed for. Time had passed and he finally got to see her, and he could tell that she didn't want to be with him.
"...why.."
"Pardon Papa.oh..um sorry Daddy." The word slipped from her mouth. Papa. Saying it in front of him was sickening.
He leaned forward and sat his head on the steering wheel. Tears were flowing more rapidly now. It seemed that his feelings had taken over him.
*** Heero. After Duo had left with their child, Heero's life fell apart. He quit his job and spent most of the time in his room. After a while he was kicked out of his apartment and lived on the streets, until he met up with an old friend: Carlyle.
Carlyle let him stay with her and her two kids: Alex and Josoline, but that didn't change much. Heero still didn't eat. Carlyle and Alex would sometimes have to hold him down and force him to eat. Even doing that wasn't enough. Heero stayed in his room, sitting in the corner with the lights turned off. The blind were always shut and the door was rarely open. He shut himself out from the world. He went crazy. Daily he would take knifes and slice his wrist. Carlyle would find him and take care of him. She would do anything for her friend. Alex, being the only other guy, would have to move him into the bathroom to urinate. He would also have to force him into the shower and watch him, to make sure he didn't drown himself. After Duo left Heero, Heero went crazy. ***
She didn't know how much the word "papa" hurt him.
"Daddy, im sorry..what's wrong?"
He looked up at her. The tears didn't stop, but for the first time in years, he smiled.
"It's amazing how much you look..and act like me."
She was confused. Wasn't he sad just a second ago, but what he said did make since. If her hair was shorter she would look the same. She had long hair, and her bangs spiked out. Her eyes were the same, color and the same look to them. Her attitude. Same. She kept to herself and didn't speak much.
"I don't understand Daddy? What are you talking about?"
He didn't answer. He just smiled and leaned over and kissed her forehead. Then he wrapped his arms around her. Embracing her like he wanted to do for so long.
"nothing.im talking about nothing.nothing at all."
ok, I attempted to write a sad fic? Did I? Tell the truth! Read and Review! Please tell me if it's sad! Im working hard on it!
"..how was the plane ride?.."
He broke the silence.
"..fine.."
She had been waiting to see this man for ten years and all she could say was fine. She turned and looked out the window of the car, they had been driving for what seemed hours. They seemed to be in the middle of nowhere. Out of range from a payphone, so she couldn't call her papa.
The car pulled over and stopped. Turning to the driver she smiled, "Daddy, why are we stopping?
Tears were running down his eyes. He stared strait forward. Ten years had passed and things were different. There he sat in the car with his daughter he had so longed for. Time had passed and he finally got to see her, and he could tell that she didn't want to be with him.
"...why.."
"Pardon Papa.oh..um sorry Daddy." The word slipped from her mouth. Papa. Saying it in front of him was sickening.
He leaned forward and sat his head on the steering wheel. Tears were flowing more rapidly now. It seemed that his feelings had taken over him.
*** Heero. After Duo had left with their child, Heero's life fell apart. He quit his job and spent most of the time in his room. After a while he was kicked out of his apartment and lived on the streets, until he met up with an old friend: Carlyle.
Carlyle let him stay with her and her two kids: Alex and Josoline, but that didn't change much. Heero still didn't eat. Carlyle and Alex would sometimes have to hold him down and force him to eat. Even doing that wasn't enough. Heero stayed in his room, sitting in the corner with the lights turned off. The blind were always shut and the door was rarely open. He shut himself out from the world. He went crazy. Daily he would take knifes and slice his wrist. Carlyle would find him and take care of him. She would do anything for her friend. Alex, being the only other guy, would have to move him into the bathroom to urinate. He would also have to force him into the shower and watch him, to make sure he didn't drown himself. After Duo left Heero, Heero went crazy. ***
She didn't know how much the word "papa" hurt him.
"Daddy, im sorry..what's wrong?"
He looked up at her. The tears didn't stop, but for the first time in years, he smiled.
"It's amazing how much you look..and act like me."
She was confused. Wasn't he sad just a second ago, but what he said did make since. If her hair was shorter she would look the same. She had long hair, and her bangs spiked out. Her eyes were the same, color and the same look to them. Her attitude. Same. She kept to herself and didn't speak much.
"I don't understand Daddy? What are you talking about?"
He didn't answer. He just smiled and leaned over and kissed her forehead. Then he wrapped his arms around her. Embracing her like he wanted to do for so long.
"nothing.im talking about nothing.nothing at all."
ok, I attempted to write a sad fic? Did I? Tell the truth! Read and Review! Please tell me if it's sad! Im working hard on it!
