Off by far
Chapter 4
Harry was in his dormatary still doing his potions homework. Snape had made him wrote a 6 foot essay on the usefullness of being invisible. Snape had noticed he wasn't paying attention.
When He was 2 inches from finishing, Harry ran out of ink. Darn! He was looking all over for his spare ink bottle but couldn't find it, then he remembered that he had put down the ink bottle out side the common room to pick upo his Care of Magical Creature book that had dropped. He forgot to pick up the bottle afterwards. (The book.)
Harry got up and climbed out of the common room. When he pushed open the picture, on the ground, he saw a girl. She was out cold.
Harry npicked her up and brought her into his dormatary. He placed her in a chair near the fire. Harry looked at her and fell in love, like he was with Draco.
Harry slowly brought the mystirious girl aroud. When the girl opened her eyes, Harry saw the resembalence between her and Draco. She had the same dazzling smile, the same color hair and the same beautiful silver eyes.
As he was loking into her eyes, she tilted her head to the side and Harry kissed her quite innicentaly.
He stopped and took a step back, "I'm sorry.":
This girl looked looked into his biggreen eyes and mearly said, "I don't mind." And then she pulled Harry down into a very passionite kiss.
Before long, Harry's shirt lay on the floor as they continued their passion. Then the girl took off her shirt. Draco, at the moment, forgot he apeared as a girl. Harry, for a moment, stared at the girl, then continued their kissing.
Slowly pieces of clothing lay forgotten on the floor, until two restless teenagers were on the pull out bed having sex
(Sorry, I don't do grafic stuff.)
Then Draco herard Harry say something. "I love you Draco." Harry didn't notice he said it, but Draco heard it.
Later that night, Harry had fallen asleep on top of Draco Malfoy, his arm around him.
Draco lay awake, enjoying the moment, remembering how much it hurt, what Harry did, but Draco still didn't mind the pain, he was with Harry, and now he knew that Harry loved him too. The real him.
At about 6:00 the next mornig, Draco found himself or herself as the case may be, still laying on the pull out bed with Harry on top of him, naked.
Draco had to get back to his own dormatary and wait for the potion to wear off. He slowly moved Harry off of him, he woke up as Draco did this.
When Draco saw that Harry was awake he, or she said, "I mist leave." She stood up and got dressed.
Right before she left the dormatary, she looked at Harry and said, " Harry, Draco loves you too." And with that she left.
~EclypsCC1~
Ok, I just looked over all my old storys and I saw this one, so I finished the story and am now going to finish posting it.
I never knew my writing could get so much better in a year, but it did, because pesonally I think the writing in this story is horrible. But that is just my opinion. I'll try to put up another chapter every 2 days
Also if you want to read a story of mine that is much better, although it had not slash, or at least I don't think it will, but has a great plot and a few new, mary-sue-less, characters. It is called Destined to Be: The Court of Twelve, and I already put a lot of it up
Please review I V
Harry was in his dormatary still doing his potions homework. Snape had made him wrote a 6 foot essay on the usefullness of being invisible. Snape had noticed he wasn't paying attention.
When He was 2 inches from finishing, Harry ran out of ink. Darn! He was looking all over for his spare ink bottle but couldn't find it, then he remembered that he had put down the ink bottle out side the common room to pick upo his Care of Magical Creature book that had dropped. He forgot to pick up the bottle afterwards. (The book.)
Harry got up and climbed out of the common room. When he pushed open the picture, on the ground, he saw a girl. She was out cold.
Harry npicked her up and brought her into his dormatary. He placed her in a chair near the fire. Harry looked at her and fell in love, like he was with Draco.
Harry slowly brought the mystirious girl aroud. When the girl opened her eyes, Harry saw the resembalence between her and Draco. She had the same dazzling smile, the same color hair and the same beautiful silver eyes.
As he was loking into her eyes, she tilted her head to the side and Harry kissed her quite innicentaly.
He stopped and took a step back, "I'm sorry.":
This girl looked looked into his biggreen eyes and mearly said, "I don't mind." And then she pulled Harry down into a very passionite kiss.
Before long, Harry's shirt lay on the floor as they continued their passion. Then the girl took off her shirt. Draco, at the moment, forgot he apeared as a girl. Harry, for a moment, stared at the girl, then continued their kissing.
Slowly pieces of clothing lay forgotten on the floor, until two restless teenagers were on the pull out bed having sex
(Sorry, I don't do grafic stuff.)
Then Draco herard Harry say something. "I love you Draco." Harry didn't notice he said it, but Draco heard it.
Later that night, Harry had fallen asleep on top of Draco Malfoy, his arm around him.
Draco lay awake, enjoying the moment, remembering how much it hurt, what Harry did, but Draco still didn't mind the pain, he was with Harry, and now he knew that Harry loved him too. The real him.
At about 6:00 the next mornig, Draco found himself or herself as the case may be, still laying on the pull out bed with Harry on top of him, naked.
Draco had to get back to his own dormatary and wait for the potion to wear off. He slowly moved Harry off of him, he woke up as Draco did this.
When Draco saw that Harry was awake he, or she said, "I mist leave." She stood up and got dressed.
Right before she left the dormatary, she looked at Harry and said, " Harry, Draco loves you too." And with that she left.
~EclypsCC1~
Ok, I just looked over all my old storys and I saw this one, so I finished the story and am now going to finish posting it.
I never knew my writing could get so much better in a year, but it did, because pesonally I think the writing in this story is horrible. But that is just my opinion. I'll try to put up another chapter every 2 days
Also if you want to read a story of mine that is much better, although it had not slash, or at least I don't think it will, but has a great plot and a few new, mary-sue-less, characters. It is called Destined to Be: The Court of Twelve, and I already put a lot of it up
Please review I V
