Here is Chapter 2
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Max trailed Jondy by a couple feet as they ran at top speed through the snow. Suddenly, ice over a pond beneath Max gave away. Jondy stopped and went back to pull her out. She laid on the ice and reached out. Max grabbed Jondy's hand, but as she pulled herself up out of the hole, the edge broke away and Max fell back into the freezing water. Jondy looked up worriedly at the sound of snowmobiles, as the spotlight ran through the trees toward them.
"Go on... GO!" Max urged Jondy to leave.
"No. We stick together." Jondy wasn't about to leave Max there.
"Go, Jondy. I'll find you, I promise." Max took a big gulp of breath and disappeared under the ice and Jondy ran back in the direction they were headed in.
Suddenly a hummer pulled up by the pond. Lydecker steps out and is confronted by another man. The man tells Lydecker that they've caught seven kids, two of them are dead. Lydecker told him to get them and it was to mean BIG trouble if one of the chimeras were caught. He watched the man scurry away and lit a cigarette. He re-entered the truck and drove off, but he didn't noticed that where he had been standing Max was under the inches of ice.
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Max had been in Seattle for about 4 months. It had been a year since she broke out of that hellhole. She had been traveling around the western side of the U.S. trying to find a place to stay. Seattle seemed like a good place to crash, she didn't have to worry about finding a place to stay because there were so many abandoned places since the pulse.
She had been in Oregon when the pulse hit. She was napping in a pile of cloth pieces that she had gathered for a "mattress" in an abandoned shack in the outskirts of Salem. Once the pulse came, and everyone was going all whacko, she decided to split. A month later, a skinny girl with deep brown eyes and shoulder length wavy hair walked into Seattle.
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Ok I put three installments on here, now I'll put more if and/or when I get reviews.
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Max trailed Jondy by a couple feet as they ran at top speed through the snow. Suddenly, ice over a pond beneath Max gave away. Jondy stopped and went back to pull her out. She laid on the ice and reached out. Max grabbed Jondy's hand, but as she pulled herself up out of the hole, the edge broke away and Max fell back into the freezing water. Jondy looked up worriedly at the sound of snowmobiles, as the spotlight ran through the trees toward them.
"Go on... GO!" Max urged Jondy to leave.
"No. We stick together." Jondy wasn't about to leave Max there.
"Go, Jondy. I'll find you, I promise." Max took a big gulp of breath and disappeared under the ice and Jondy ran back in the direction they were headed in.
Suddenly a hummer pulled up by the pond. Lydecker steps out and is confronted by another man. The man tells Lydecker that they've caught seven kids, two of them are dead. Lydecker told him to get them and it was to mean BIG trouble if one of the chimeras were caught. He watched the man scurry away and lit a cigarette. He re-entered the truck and drove off, but he didn't noticed that where he had been standing Max was under the inches of ice.
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Max had been in Seattle for about 4 months. It had been a year since she broke out of that hellhole. She had been traveling around the western side of the U.S. trying to find a place to stay. Seattle seemed like a good place to crash, she didn't have to worry about finding a place to stay because there were so many abandoned places since the pulse.
She had been in Oregon when the pulse hit. She was napping in a pile of cloth pieces that she had gathered for a "mattress" in an abandoned shack in the outskirts of Salem. Once the pulse came, and everyone was going all whacko, she decided to split. A month later, a skinny girl with deep brown eyes and shoulder length wavy hair walked into Seattle.
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Ok I put three installments on here, now I'll put more if and/or when I get reviews.
