On Wings Of Love
By: Lady Venom
E-mail: diabla_devil@hotmail.com
A/N: Thank you for the reviews I recieved from Serene Blaze and another person whose name has just escaped my mind. I dedicated this to Rory but Rory hasn't sent me an e-ami l or anything saying if it was hated or loved, I personally hate this story but since my reviewers say they love it then I'll continue this for you..... Thank you so much, Without further ado here is chapter five of my story, I can't beleive I've actually gotten this far.... As much as I try this will probably end up turing into a lovey-dovey fluffy thingie......Damnit, why!?
P.S: FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO READ THIS I NEED A BETA READER! ANYONE INTERESTED? oh and please e-mail review me, my inbox is so empty, I would love you forever if you e-mailed me.....please???
Disclaimer: Nope nope nope....nope and a finity more nopes Escaflowne does NOT belong to me, nor do the characters, just this story...it IS mine....hence the capitalized is.
Warnings: Stupid spelling...stupid grammar, anywho mind those..I really need a beta reader, I don't care who..anyone interested? Well Violence, bloodshed, torture to characters, a bit of language and yet another attempt at an Escaflowne story. I hope they're not too OOC and if they are e-mail me and I"ll redo the whole story again until they are in (or to my extent) of in Character
Key
// // thoughts
* * * scene change
*~*~*same time, different place, and/or different person.
* * * * * * *
"Yes, I'm surprised you recognized me Hitomi. I tried coming here sooner but there have been some problems in Asutria that had to be fixed, to think that they wouldn't let me leave the country," Mallerna stopped to see Hitomi sit up in bed.
"I'm sorry I woke you up Hitomi, how have you been?," She asked approaching the chair near her bed and sitting on it. Hitomi rubbed her eyes and stared closely at the figure standing in fron of her. Mallerna had changed a bit, she looked more mature, her violet eyes had a sparkel to them and her blonde hair glistened against the suns' light.
"Hello Mallerna, I wish that I could say I am well but...," Hitomi paused tears filling her eyes. She gazed down at her bed and softly began to sob. Without a word Mallerna got up and hugged Hitomi, who froze in place for a few moments. She had forgotten what it was like to have a friend cared. Hitom hugged back, not knowing what else to do.
"Oh dear, what has happened?," Mallerna asked softly.
"I wish I knew," Hitomi replied softly. Moments passed and Hitomi finally drew up the courage to tell Mallerna everything.
"Mallerna, Why did I have to cause so much trouble?," That said she told her everything about her attempt at suicide, van saving her, her parent;s tragic deaths and her brothers', and how she ended up her now. Mallerna listened carefullt hanging on every word that escaped from Hitomi's lips.
"Hitomi.....," was all Mallerna could say as she hugged the poor girl tighter. Hitomi stopped crying after another long while.
"Now, I'm causing Van trouble, and disturbing his peace. Is there any place I can go without causing trouble?," Hitomi asked herself softly.
"You're not causing anyone trouble, Van loves you, that is why he saved you, after all this time, he has been waiting for you," Mallerna said. Hitomi blushed a crimson colour hearing Mallerna's words about Van.
"I'm sorry I'm telling you all this Mallerna, I'm sorry."She said. She was about to say something else when there was a kncok on the doo. Mallerna got up and opened it. There was Van, a worried expression on his face.
"Mallerna, I'm so glad to see you again, how is she?," Van saked quickly.
"Van, she's fine, feeling a lot better than she was before, it appears things will be looking up from now on.," She answered with a small smile.
Van sighed deeply and entered the room. Hitomi was sitting on her bed, looking a lot brighter than before. She had a rosy colour on her cheeks and suprisingly enough to Van, she didn't look in pain anymore. They both stared into eachother's eyes, that they didn't notice Mallerna exsit the room and shut the door quietly behind her.
//They need to console each other more than ever, they need to catch up on things as well// Mallerna thought to herself.
"Queen Mallerna are you in need of anything?," Akina asked as she stood up from her chair beside Hitomi's door.
"Actually I would like some tea," Mallerna said, and Akina led the way.
* * * * * *
Meilan was sitting in her throne room looking awfully bored. She had already dispatched a small group of soldiers to burn a few shops in Asturia and Fanelia as a small warning of the war to come. With that out of the way she sat and stared dully out the window. A few seconds passes and finally a figure in a black cloak appeared. He walked slowly to the throne. Once there, he bowed respectfully and removed his hood.
"What is it you request?," He said in a pained voice. He was still healing from the punishment he had to endure. Small cuts and bruises covered his face and hands. Thankfully for Ling the cloak and the clothes he was wearing didn't reveal the more serious damages the others made to his body.
" I want company, have you had any visions or any warnings, seerer?," She demanded. Ling flinched at her tone. He quickly pushed his trembling nerves aside and forced himself to speak.
"I had but one, The legend from the Phantom Moon is going to intervien in someway wwith your plans. The vision showed her sacrificing her life for a sillhouetted figure. That is all my eyes let me see," He answered. Meilan glared at him for a second. Her glare felt as it was piercing through Lings' skin. He looked around the room, ignoring that sensation that he felt on his black. The walls were filled with all kinds of weapons. Swords, spears, whips, bows and arrows. On the ceiling, a long thick rope hung down, ending in a loop.
//I hope I do not upset Meilan too mcuh, I would hate to be hanged like the last person// He thought trembling violently.
* * * * * * *
Venom's Endless Note: Yes yes I know this one was short. It's already four pages as it is, and besides it's been a while since I last posted something worth reading...even though this isn't......anyho please read and review, I know a lot of people who have stopped reading...oh well can't have anything ne?
By: Lady Venom
E-mail: diabla_devil@hotmail.com
A/N: Thank you for the reviews I recieved from Serene Blaze and another person whose name has just escaped my mind. I dedicated this to Rory but Rory hasn't sent me an e-ami l or anything saying if it was hated or loved, I personally hate this story but since my reviewers say they love it then I'll continue this for you..... Thank you so much, Without further ado here is chapter five of my story, I can't beleive I've actually gotten this far.... As much as I try this will probably end up turing into a lovey-dovey fluffy thingie......Damnit, why!?
P.S: FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO READ THIS I NEED A BETA READER! ANYONE INTERESTED? oh and please e-mail review me, my inbox is so empty, I would love you forever if you e-mailed me.....please???
Disclaimer: Nope nope nope....nope and a finity more nopes Escaflowne does NOT belong to me, nor do the characters, just this story...it IS mine....hence the capitalized is.
Warnings: Stupid spelling...stupid grammar, anywho mind those..I really need a beta reader, I don't care who..anyone interested? Well Violence, bloodshed, torture to characters, a bit of language and yet another attempt at an Escaflowne story. I hope they're not too OOC and if they are e-mail me and I"ll redo the whole story again until they are in (or to my extent) of in Character
Key
// // thoughts
* * * scene change
*~*~*same time, different place, and/or different person.
* * * * * * *
"Yes, I'm surprised you recognized me Hitomi. I tried coming here sooner but there have been some problems in Asutria that had to be fixed, to think that they wouldn't let me leave the country," Mallerna stopped to see Hitomi sit up in bed.
"I'm sorry I woke you up Hitomi, how have you been?," She asked approaching the chair near her bed and sitting on it. Hitomi rubbed her eyes and stared closely at the figure standing in fron of her. Mallerna had changed a bit, she looked more mature, her violet eyes had a sparkel to them and her blonde hair glistened against the suns' light.
"Hello Mallerna, I wish that I could say I am well but...," Hitomi paused tears filling her eyes. She gazed down at her bed and softly began to sob. Without a word Mallerna got up and hugged Hitomi, who froze in place for a few moments. She had forgotten what it was like to have a friend cared. Hitom hugged back, not knowing what else to do.
"Oh dear, what has happened?," Mallerna asked softly.
"I wish I knew," Hitomi replied softly. Moments passed and Hitomi finally drew up the courage to tell Mallerna everything.
"Mallerna, Why did I have to cause so much trouble?," That said she told her everything about her attempt at suicide, van saving her, her parent;s tragic deaths and her brothers', and how she ended up her now. Mallerna listened carefullt hanging on every word that escaped from Hitomi's lips.
"Hitomi.....," was all Mallerna could say as she hugged the poor girl tighter. Hitomi stopped crying after another long while.
"Now, I'm causing Van trouble, and disturbing his peace. Is there any place I can go without causing trouble?," Hitomi asked herself softly.
"You're not causing anyone trouble, Van loves you, that is why he saved you, after all this time, he has been waiting for you," Mallerna said. Hitomi blushed a crimson colour hearing Mallerna's words about Van.
"I'm sorry I'm telling you all this Mallerna, I'm sorry."She said. She was about to say something else when there was a kncok on the doo. Mallerna got up and opened it. There was Van, a worried expression on his face.
"Mallerna, I'm so glad to see you again, how is she?," Van saked quickly.
"Van, she's fine, feeling a lot better than she was before, it appears things will be looking up from now on.," She answered with a small smile.
Van sighed deeply and entered the room. Hitomi was sitting on her bed, looking a lot brighter than before. She had a rosy colour on her cheeks and suprisingly enough to Van, she didn't look in pain anymore. They both stared into eachother's eyes, that they didn't notice Mallerna exsit the room and shut the door quietly behind her.
//They need to console each other more than ever, they need to catch up on things as well// Mallerna thought to herself.
"Queen Mallerna are you in need of anything?," Akina asked as she stood up from her chair beside Hitomi's door.
"Actually I would like some tea," Mallerna said, and Akina led the way.
* * * * * *
Meilan was sitting in her throne room looking awfully bored. She had already dispatched a small group of soldiers to burn a few shops in Asturia and Fanelia as a small warning of the war to come. With that out of the way she sat and stared dully out the window. A few seconds passes and finally a figure in a black cloak appeared. He walked slowly to the throne. Once there, he bowed respectfully and removed his hood.
"What is it you request?," He said in a pained voice. He was still healing from the punishment he had to endure. Small cuts and bruises covered his face and hands. Thankfully for Ling the cloak and the clothes he was wearing didn't reveal the more serious damages the others made to his body.
" I want company, have you had any visions or any warnings, seerer?," She demanded. Ling flinched at her tone. He quickly pushed his trembling nerves aside and forced himself to speak.
"I had but one, The legend from the Phantom Moon is going to intervien in someway wwith your plans. The vision showed her sacrificing her life for a sillhouetted figure. That is all my eyes let me see," He answered. Meilan glared at him for a second. Her glare felt as it was piercing through Lings' skin. He looked around the room, ignoring that sensation that he felt on his black. The walls were filled with all kinds of weapons. Swords, spears, whips, bows and arrows. On the ceiling, a long thick rope hung down, ending in a loop.
//I hope I do not upset Meilan too mcuh, I would hate to be hanged like the last person// He thought trembling violently.
* * * * * * *
Venom's Endless Note: Yes yes I know this one was short. It's already four pages as it is, and besides it's been a while since I last posted something worth reading...even though this isn't......anyho please read and review, I know a lot of people who have stopped reading...oh well can't have anything ne?
