AN: Yay! I AM SOOOOOOOOO SORRY THAT THIS TOOK SO LONG!!!!!!!!! First
Ff.net was down, and then I went to France for three weeks, and I left on
the 18 of June, but then when I came back you still couldn't do anything,
so I'm posting this as soon as was possible!
Disclaimer- I don't even own the computer that I'm writing this on, happy? *spoken in elvish*- in this chapter, there is actually some elvish spoken! Thoughts
Arwen stared in shock at the person on her bed. "L-Lord Glorfindel! H-how did you find this place?" she stammered. "It wasn't hard; you really should use a covering that blends in" Glorfindel replied. "Don't tell my father, please?" Arwen pleaded. "I meant to ask you about that, what happened?" "How do you know anything happened?" Glorfindel gave her a look that plainly said I'm an elf-lord, don't question me. Arwen looked at her hands, refusing to look Lord Glorfindel in the eye. *Undómiel* Glorfindel insisted. *I informed him of my decision to give up my immortality to Aragorn* *I take it his reaction wasn't very good* *To put it mildly* *What did he do?* *Well, we started off horribly, and it just got worse. I told him of my decision, and then we got into an argument, in which he blamed me for my mother going over the seas, then Elrohir came and he tried to defend me by telling father that he should be proud of his daughter, and then father said he has no daughter* Arwen said this all very quickly, and burst into tears when she was finished. Glorfindel stared in shock for a minute, then held his arms out to Arwen, and she swiftly came to his embrace, burying her face in his chest. "Shh, it's ok. I'm sure he didn't mean it. He'll probably forget all about it tomorrow" He tried to assure her, but his efforts were in vain. "You didn't see his face! He looked at me like I was the scum of the earth, or something equally as bad!" Arwen sobbed. Before Lord Glorfinel could reply, Elrohir came running by yelling for Arwen. "I think he's looking for you" Glorfindel said gently. "Really?" "Yes, really. Now come on, I'd say that if he is willing to bring down the wrath of all the elves in Rivendell by disturbing the peace, he wants to see you. Now." Glorfindel replied. Arwen wiped her eyes, then stepped out of her hideout, Lord Glorfindel on her heels. "El-Elrohir?" Arwen questioned shakily. Elrohir spun around so quickly he almost fell down. "Arwen!" He engulfed her in a big hug, causing her to burst into tears again. Elrohir appeared stunned t0 see Arwen like that. "Erm, uh, let's uh, go talk to Elladan. I think he has an idea." Sniffling, Arwen nodded her head and began walking with Elrohir down the path. Suddenly, she stopped and motioned for Lord Glorfindel to come. He did so, and all three continued d0wn the path.
Elrond's POV AN: The italicized stuff is thoughts, and if it has a marking it, then it's Elrond thinking, and if it has a / \ marking it, then it is the little voice in his head.
Elrond paced about in his throne room. Inside, he was kicking himself about disowning Arwen, although his exterior would never let it show. He needed counsel, no, what he needed was Celebrian. Why does she have to do this to me? He wondered to himself. /You didn't have to get so mad at her\ the nasty little voice that always seemed to be right spoke up. Oh, be quiet he replied back, then shook his head. I can't believe I'm talking to myself he admonished. /Yes, well, you always have been a bit loony\ the voice laughed at him. Have not! He protested. /Have- hey, stop trying to change the subject\! The voice exclaimed. Darn. I can try, can't I? Elrond tried to distract the little voice again. /Hah Hah. Nice try. But you really should have been more supportive of Arwen, I mean, she lost her mother, and now her father disowned her? Poor kid\. Elrond scowled. Yeah, well, um er, Luthien's dad reacted the same way! /He didn't disown her, and Luthien had not lost her mother.\ Erm, uh, um, err. fine, you got me. I'll go talk to her. /Civily\ The voice insisted. Civilly Elrond agreed. He sighed. Now to talk to Arwen.
AN: YES! THE CHAPTER IS OVER!!!! Ok, I am INCREDIBLY unhappy with this chapter, in my opinion, it really sucks, and I am having MAJOR WRITERS BLOCK. As I said, this is a really bad chapter, try not to flame too badly, please? I think I have flamed myself enough. Anyway, oh yeah, the thing with Luthien, not really sure if that is true, about her father not disowning her and her not losing her mother. For all I know, she could have been disowned and her mother could have died earlier. Anywho, if it's not right, tell me in your review and I will fix it. Luv ya!!
Disclaimer- I don't even own the computer that I'm writing this on, happy? *spoken in elvish*- in this chapter, there is actually some elvish spoken! Thoughts
Arwen stared in shock at the person on her bed. "L-Lord Glorfindel! H-how did you find this place?" she stammered. "It wasn't hard; you really should use a covering that blends in" Glorfindel replied. "Don't tell my father, please?" Arwen pleaded. "I meant to ask you about that, what happened?" "How do you know anything happened?" Glorfindel gave her a look that plainly said I'm an elf-lord, don't question me. Arwen looked at her hands, refusing to look Lord Glorfindel in the eye. *Undómiel* Glorfindel insisted. *I informed him of my decision to give up my immortality to Aragorn* *I take it his reaction wasn't very good* *To put it mildly* *What did he do?* *Well, we started off horribly, and it just got worse. I told him of my decision, and then we got into an argument, in which he blamed me for my mother going over the seas, then Elrohir came and he tried to defend me by telling father that he should be proud of his daughter, and then father said he has no daughter* Arwen said this all very quickly, and burst into tears when she was finished. Glorfindel stared in shock for a minute, then held his arms out to Arwen, and she swiftly came to his embrace, burying her face in his chest. "Shh, it's ok. I'm sure he didn't mean it. He'll probably forget all about it tomorrow" He tried to assure her, but his efforts were in vain. "You didn't see his face! He looked at me like I was the scum of the earth, or something equally as bad!" Arwen sobbed. Before Lord Glorfinel could reply, Elrohir came running by yelling for Arwen. "I think he's looking for you" Glorfindel said gently. "Really?" "Yes, really. Now come on, I'd say that if he is willing to bring down the wrath of all the elves in Rivendell by disturbing the peace, he wants to see you. Now." Glorfindel replied. Arwen wiped her eyes, then stepped out of her hideout, Lord Glorfindel on her heels. "El-Elrohir?" Arwen questioned shakily. Elrohir spun around so quickly he almost fell down. "Arwen!" He engulfed her in a big hug, causing her to burst into tears again. Elrohir appeared stunned t0 see Arwen like that. "Erm, uh, let's uh, go talk to Elladan. I think he has an idea." Sniffling, Arwen nodded her head and began walking with Elrohir down the path. Suddenly, she stopped and motioned for Lord Glorfindel to come. He did so, and all three continued d0wn the path.
Elrond's POV AN: The italicized stuff is thoughts, and if it has a marking it, then it's Elrond thinking, and if it has a / \ marking it, then it is the little voice in his head.
Elrond paced about in his throne room. Inside, he was kicking himself about disowning Arwen, although his exterior would never let it show. He needed counsel, no, what he needed was Celebrian. Why does she have to do this to me? He wondered to himself. /You didn't have to get so mad at her\ the nasty little voice that always seemed to be right spoke up. Oh, be quiet he replied back, then shook his head. I can't believe I'm talking to myself he admonished. /Yes, well, you always have been a bit loony\ the voice laughed at him. Have not! He protested. /Have- hey, stop trying to change the subject\! The voice exclaimed. Darn. I can try, can't I? Elrond tried to distract the little voice again. /Hah Hah. Nice try. But you really should have been more supportive of Arwen, I mean, she lost her mother, and now her father disowned her? Poor kid\. Elrond scowled. Yeah, well, um er, Luthien's dad reacted the same way! /He didn't disown her, and Luthien had not lost her mother.\ Erm, uh, um, err. fine, you got me. I'll go talk to her. /Civily\ The voice insisted. Civilly Elrond agreed. He sighed. Now to talk to Arwen.
AN: YES! THE CHAPTER IS OVER!!!! Ok, I am INCREDIBLY unhappy with this chapter, in my opinion, it really sucks, and I am having MAJOR WRITERS BLOCK. As I said, this is a really bad chapter, try not to flame too badly, please? I think I have flamed myself enough. Anyway, oh yeah, the thing with Luthien, not really sure if that is true, about her father not disowning her and her not losing her mother. For all I know, she could have been disowned and her mother could have died earlier. Anywho, if it's not right, tell me in your review and I will fix it. Luv ya!!
