not an update, but I got 2 more chapters coming up.
I was just amused greatly by a reviewer. Bouzi Neo.. Thankyou for your review!! It gave me a great laugh. I am open to flames and all, and I actually take it to a complement that you told me about my problems with the flashbacks, yes, He is thinking back most of the time. I guess I should be more clear on that, thanx!!
I don't know what you are x'ing out, but hey, whatever floats your boat.
2. Bulma being an emitional bitch? I think she is. I am not saying she is a bitchy person, she is awesome, I just don't like her very much.
As for the bulma bashing, What the heck do you think I am doing? YES THIS IS A BULMA BASHING FIC!!!!!! If I could make this text in neon signs making it clearer I would!!!
LOL, you should check out my vegeta website and read the bulma section heh heh heh .
Now, do I think yamcha is off the hook ( if he was a real person, I am sure most readers here know that these are made up characters)..No. In all honesty, I do think it was him who would be the cheater in the relationship, not Bulma.
OOC.. ok, I didn't see it as that, at ;least that much. But you are intitled to have your veiws.
As for it needing work? Hell yeah it does!! I hate my writings, I know I do not write well, I do this as a hobby. I am writing another major story of my own, and I work on these on the sides.
The reason I am posting this, is not because I am gonna do this for
every flame, THIS IS MY FIRST ONE!!!! YAY. I am actualy happy I got a signed
reveiw flame.
ALL OF YOU GO TO MY REVIEWS AND READ IT!!!!
Honestly tho, I don't care if you like my story or not. It is something I do to clear my mind when I am upset, that is why I dont update much, because I dont write fanfics that much. I am actually honored that you think I put so much time in this. I wish I could write better for you all, but if I did that, I would never post anything because as the true artist I am, I never like my work.
As for my having a career, thank you very much, I gradutated form Tyler,
an expensive art college. I got an award for excelelence in printmaking,
only 2 giving out, and I got one. I have a sucsessful job in a silk
screen studio soon to be a freelance illustrator also. So, I am dong good
in what I went to college for, which is art, and not writing. I was actually
behind in my writing skills. LOl, as you obviously can tell. SO i will work my fanfic better, and be sure to update this with even more
bulma-bashing, just for you, arent you special? lol. ~~evil
grin~ EDF
~~Bald and bold, oh my, what am I to do?~~ Freiza
