It took me a long time to decide whether to reveal the plot's secrets at
the end or beginning - I've done it this way but maybe imagine the other
way too.
Ignore all the notions set up in Cruel intentions 2. Because I always had different ideas as to their past!. For a start, Kathryn's mother and step father look the way they did in Cruel Intentions 1!.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------- Chapter 1 A man in his mid forties picked up the telephone receiver and dialed a number. A woman of similar age picked up. "Hello?" she inquired. She had an Irish accent. Frantically he began talking. He had a sophisticated posh English accent. He did not give her enough room to interrupt him. "It's Richard!...Listen you know what we talked about...Well, you've got to make a decision now or never...because I'm leaving now!". She whispered down the phone frantically in reply: "What?...But you can't!...You can't just expect me to make this sort of decision on the spot!!!!!...Where are you even thinking of going?". "I don't know!...abroad?...England maybe...Ireland if you want!". "Can't you wait just another day!" she begged. "No!...You don't understand she'll take her!...the bitch will take my daughter away from me!...We have to go now!...Are you coming or not?". "All right! All right!...come and collect me!". She put the phone down and begun to.- But wait a moment!. This is all too soon!. I'm sure your all eager to know what happened after Sebastian's funeral...So we'll deal with that first!.
It had only been ten or fifteen minutes since Sebastian's journal had been handed round. But to Kathryn it felt like a lifetime. Her world had been shattered. The only person she had vaguely put trust in had betrayed her. Kathryn was being pushed around and shouted at by angry fellow pupils. "How could you...!" this and "I trusted you" that. The parental units had been ages. Where were they?...Did they still love her?...What were they thinking?. She'd probably be disowned and sent off to some boarding school in Outer Mongolia!!!. But then again no!. They clearly loved her. They'd never stop reminding her!. Their actions and neglect may not show it but she knew they did love her in their own sweet way. Or would they?. She isn't perfect now!. They may not love her if she's not perfect. They didn't disown Sebastian though!. But, Kathryn remembered the time she rebelled when she was 12. She turned at 12 - well, ten technically - but it was really 12 she got serious!. And her mother was so ashamed!. Her mother didn't know about the promiscuousity or alcohol...but the rude behavior was bad enough!. Kathryn decided after her mother's lecture that she should act perfect again - and she had till this day!. She almost felt a relief for a second that she now had the opportunity to tell everyone what she thought of them!. All about the way she hated her stepfather's attention. He was always touching her and petting her like she was a pet cat or something. Always wanting to be her father, when she didn't need one. And her mother!!!...both of them!!!...so sweetie sweet!!!...it made Kathryn sick!. Suddenly the crowds cleared. Someone was shouting at them to stop. It was her stepfather. Thank goodness she thought!. But he didn't look his usual sweet self!-he looked a bit angry with her!.
Kathryn sat crying on her bed. Her mother knocked and came in. Kathryn was angry about something. "Everyone's asking after you, dear...why don't you come out?". Her mother was received with silence. So, she continued "Blaine's had to go!...he said to tell you bye...he said if you need anything then to go to him...such a sweet boy!...It's a shame he's gay!" said her mother in her usual sweet and delicate tender way. "Why do you fancy him?" sniped Kathryn. "Kathryn!" replied her shocked mother. "Well, you seem to fancy every other male" scorned Kathryn. "I'm not as bad as some!...anyway!...I meant it's a shame he's gay in a moral way!" her mother defended herself. "And you'd know all about morals wouldn't you, mother!...I'd simply like to remind you that you aren't exactly Mother Theresa yourself because you lecture me!" said Kathryn. "I know I'm not!" her mother admitted. Then there was just mere silence. Eventually her mother decided to get up and leave. But as she reached the door her mother turned and blurted out something, "He's sorry, Kathryn...really sorry!". "Yeah whatever!" replied Kathryn. "Well, can you blame him?" she asked. At that point Kathryn's stepfather walked in. He approached cautiously, meekly and sensitively. "Yes...I can blame him!" Kathryn sniped back in reply to the question. "Ah!...there you are, darling...I was just explaining to Kathryn...that you..." said her mother. He interrupted to continue, "Am truly sorry, Kathryn!...I don't know what came over me!...I was just so stressed!!!!...First, my son is dead...and then my daughter is goodness knows what!!!...I just flipped!!!". "I am not your daughter!!!" Kathryn sniped. "How can you be surprised after the way you behaved?...in front of everyone?...the things you said!...that was below the belt!" her mother said. "Why are you defending him?...watch out for him, your be next!...mark my words!" Kathryn sniped. "Don't over react Kathryn...he only tapped you on the cheek!" her mother exclaimed. "In front of everyone!!!!...and they!!!...they clapped!!!" shouted Kathryn. Leonie comforted Kathryn by sliding an arm round her and sitting on the bed next to her. David came over to do it too. But, Kathryn eventually pushed them both off. "Just go!!...Both of you!!...Just go!!...No actually!!! I will go!!...I'm staying the night at Blaine's!" Kathryn got up to storm out her bedroom. "You can't!!!" her mother called out trying to stop her. "Why?" Kathryn demanded. "Well...errr..." her mother murmured. "We need to talk, Kathryn!" her stepfather added. "Tomorrow" Kathryn said. "Today!" her stepfather demanded. "Am I grounded?...because otherwise!...I'm going!" asked Kathryn. There was silence. The parental units didn't know what to say. "Well, er...we were hoping instead you just stay in for...let's stay the rest of the week?" her mother murmured. "Am I grounded or not?......For goodness sake, you've got to make one decision in your life!......for once act like parents and discipline me!". Kathryn seemed to want to be punished or controlled. Yet, her parental units just weren't naturally like that. Her mother and stepfather discussed the topic and came back with an answer. "We've decided...yes, you are grounded!" her mother said proudly. "I'm impressed!...see ya!" Kathryn said as leaving. "Where are you going?" her mother asked frantically. "Oh sorry, I forgot to mention!...I'm disobeying you!" exclaimed Kathryn walking out. "She wasn't meant to do that", her stepfather concluded worriedly. "I think this may be harder than we thought!" her mother said worried and exhausted. They were like something out a cartoon or a comedy sketch!. They were the world's best and worst parents. Good in the way they cared so much and let their children do what they wanted. But, bad in the way they let their children do what they wanted and were never around!. "At least, she's safe at Blaine's!...he's gay!...he won't get her pregnant!" her mother laughed, in an attempt to lighten the situation. "It's not funny!...with a reputation like hers!" said her stepfather. "She's a sensible and clever girl, sweetheart!...she'd never be that stupid!" said her mother. "That's not what I've been hearing!...I heard from someone just now that she's been playing Russian roulette with contraception!" her stepfather remarked. "Done be so stupid!...it's just a rumor!...she isn't that stupid!" remarked her mother. "I wouldn't have thought her mother would be!!!...But!!!!...does your illegitimate son ring any bells?!?!?!" remarked her stepfather. "You pig!!...that was an accident and you know it!" exploded her mother. "I'm sorry...that was uncalled for!...I apologize!" her stepfather said. "We'll sort her before it's too late!...Don't worry!" her mother comforted her stepfather. "I hope so" he sighed. He sat down exhausted and worried. What were they going to do with her?. "We shouldn't have kept Kathryn's grief from everyone!...now all this stuff has come out, it's confirmed her as a....well, a not very nice and caring person!" her mother meekly whined. "She needed those pills!...it wasn't even a case of concealing it!...she couldn't stay in that state!...plus we deserve to mourn too!...it is our child buried there" wept David. "It's just I heard Mrs Vincy commenting on it!!...don't worry I put her straight!!...I put her straight on the many hours of wailing!!!...the collapsing!!!...the throwing up!!!...the various suicide attempts!!!...the amount of breakable items she broke!!!...the fact she had to be sedated!!!...the many different types of pills she had to take!!!...etc,etc,etc,etc,etc!!!!!!!!!!!!...the whole fiasco of it!!!". Her stepfather got up from his seat in a flurry. "What are we going to do?!?!?!?" he declared. Her mother paused and suddenly turned her mood. It wasn't about Kathryn anymore, it was about her stepfather. "I don't know, darling....but there is one thing I know...sit down...there's something we need to discuss that I didn't want to mention in front of Kathryn" her mother said taking her stepfather's hand and pulling him down to sit next to her as she sat. "Sweetheart, I love you to the end of the earth!!!!...but!...if you ever put so much as a finger on my daughter again!!! I will be right out that door, understand?!!!!!!...she means the world to me!!!...more than you!!!...no offense!!...I mean!...If it was between you and her!...well, she's my daughter!!!...she needs me!...and when you give birth to something...someone!...well, I didn't give birth to you! - Let's put it that way!". Kathryn's stepfather sat stunned. "I'm sorry...of course!...you know I'm not like that!...how could you think...?" said David hurt. "Fine! It's settled!" her mother said and left abruptly.
Ignore all the notions set up in Cruel intentions 2. Because I always had different ideas as to their past!. For a start, Kathryn's mother and step father look the way they did in Cruel Intentions 1!.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------- Chapter 1 A man in his mid forties picked up the telephone receiver and dialed a number. A woman of similar age picked up. "Hello?" she inquired. She had an Irish accent. Frantically he began talking. He had a sophisticated posh English accent. He did not give her enough room to interrupt him. "It's Richard!...Listen you know what we talked about...Well, you've got to make a decision now or never...because I'm leaving now!". She whispered down the phone frantically in reply: "What?...But you can't!...You can't just expect me to make this sort of decision on the spot!!!!!...Where are you even thinking of going?". "I don't know!...abroad?...England maybe...Ireland if you want!". "Can't you wait just another day!" she begged. "No!...You don't understand she'll take her!...the bitch will take my daughter away from me!...We have to go now!...Are you coming or not?". "All right! All right!...come and collect me!". She put the phone down and begun to.- But wait a moment!. This is all too soon!. I'm sure your all eager to know what happened after Sebastian's funeral...So we'll deal with that first!.
It had only been ten or fifteen minutes since Sebastian's journal had been handed round. But to Kathryn it felt like a lifetime. Her world had been shattered. The only person she had vaguely put trust in had betrayed her. Kathryn was being pushed around and shouted at by angry fellow pupils. "How could you...!" this and "I trusted you" that. The parental units had been ages. Where were they?...Did they still love her?...What were they thinking?. She'd probably be disowned and sent off to some boarding school in Outer Mongolia!!!. But then again no!. They clearly loved her. They'd never stop reminding her!. Their actions and neglect may not show it but she knew they did love her in their own sweet way. Or would they?. She isn't perfect now!. They may not love her if she's not perfect. They didn't disown Sebastian though!. But, Kathryn remembered the time she rebelled when she was 12. She turned at 12 - well, ten technically - but it was really 12 she got serious!. And her mother was so ashamed!. Her mother didn't know about the promiscuousity or alcohol...but the rude behavior was bad enough!. Kathryn decided after her mother's lecture that she should act perfect again - and she had till this day!. She almost felt a relief for a second that she now had the opportunity to tell everyone what she thought of them!. All about the way she hated her stepfather's attention. He was always touching her and petting her like she was a pet cat or something. Always wanting to be her father, when she didn't need one. And her mother!!!...both of them!!!...so sweetie sweet!!!...it made Kathryn sick!. Suddenly the crowds cleared. Someone was shouting at them to stop. It was her stepfather. Thank goodness she thought!. But he didn't look his usual sweet self!-he looked a bit angry with her!.
Kathryn sat crying on her bed. Her mother knocked and came in. Kathryn was angry about something. "Everyone's asking after you, dear...why don't you come out?". Her mother was received with silence. So, she continued "Blaine's had to go!...he said to tell you bye...he said if you need anything then to go to him...such a sweet boy!...It's a shame he's gay!" said her mother in her usual sweet and delicate tender way. "Why do you fancy him?" sniped Kathryn. "Kathryn!" replied her shocked mother. "Well, you seem to fancy every other male" scorned Kathryn. "I'm not as bad as some!...anyway!...I meant it's a shame he's gay in a moral way!" her mother defended herself. "And you'd know all about morals wouldn't you, mother!...I'd simply like to remind you that you aren't exactly Mother Theresa yourself because you lecture me!" said Kathryn. "I know I'm not!" her mother admitted. Then there was just mere silence. Eventually her mother decided to get up and leave. But as she reached the door her mother turned and blurted out something, "He's sorry, Kathryn...really sorry!". "Yeah whatever!" replied Kathryn. "Well, can you blame him?" she asked. At that point Kathryn's stepfather walked in. He approached cautiously, meekly and sensitively. "Yes...I can blame him!" Kathryn sniped back in reply to the question. "Ah!...there you are, darling...I was just explaining to Kathryn...that you..." said her mother. He interrupted to continue, "Am truly sorry, Kathryn!...I don't know what came over me!...I was just so stressed!!!!...First, my son is dead...and then my daughter is goodness knows what!!!...I just flipped!!!". "I am not your daughter!!!" Kathryn sniped. "How can you be surprised after the way you behaved?...in front of everyone?...the things you said!...that was below the belt!" her mother said. "Why are you defending him?...watch out for him, your be next!...mark my words!" Kathryn sniped. "Don't over react Kathryn...he only tapped you on the cheek!" her mother exclaimed. "In front of everyone!!!!...and they!!!...they clapped!!!" shouted Kathryn. Leonie comforted Kathryn by sliding an arm round her and sitting on the bed next to her. David came over to do it too. But, Kathryn eventually pushed them both off. "Just go!!...Both of you!!...Just go!!...No actually!!! I will go!!...I'm staying the night at Blaine's!" Kathryn got up to storm out her bedroom. "You can't!!!" her mother called out trying to stop her. "Why?" Kathryn demanded. "Well...errr..." her mother murmured. "We need to talk, Kathryn!" her stepfather added. "Tomorrow" Kathryn said. "Today!" her stepfather demanded. "Am I grounded?...because otherwise!...I'm going!" asked Kathryn. There was silence. The parental units didn't know what to say. "Well, er...we were hoping instead you just stay in for...let's stay the rest of the week?" her mother murmured. "Am I grounded or not?......For goodness sake, you've got to make one decision in your life!......for once act like parents and discipline me!". Kathryn seemed to want to be punished or controlled. Yet, her parental units just weren't naturally like that. Her mother and stepfather discussed the topic and came back with an answer. "We've decided...yes, you are grounded!" her mother said proudly. "I'm impressed!...see ya!" Kathryn said as leaving. "Where are you going?" her mother asked frantically. "Oh sorry, I forgot to mention!...I'm disobeying you!" exclaimed Kathryn walking out. "She wasn't meant to do that", her stepfather concluded worriedly. "I think this may be harder than we thought!" her mother said worried and exhausted. They were like something out a cartoon or a comedy sketch!. They were the world's best and worst parents. Good in the way they cared so much and let their children do what they wanted. But, bad in the way they let their children do what they wanted and were never around!. "At least, she's safe at Blaine's!...he's gay!...he won't get her pregnant!" her mother laughed, in an attempt to lighten the situation. "It's not funny!...with a reputation like hers!" said her stepfather. "She's a sensible and clever girl, sweetheart!...she'd never be that stupid!" said her mother. "That's not what I've been hearing!...I heard from someone just now that she's been playing Russian roulette with contraception!" her stepfather remarked. "Done be so stupid!...it's just a rumor!...she isn't that stupid!" remarked her mother. "I wouldn't have thought her mother would be!!!...But!!!!...does your illegitimate son ring any bells?!?!?!" remarked her stepfather. "You pig!!...that was an accident and you know it!" exploded her mother. "I'm sorry...that was uncalled for!...I apologize!" her stepfather said. "We'll sort her before it's too late!...Don't worry!" her mother comforted her stepfather. "I hope so" he sighed. He sat down exhausted and worried. What were they going to do with her?. "We shouldn't have kept Kathryn's grief from everyone!...now all this stuff has come out, it's confirmed her as a....well, a not very nice and caring person!" her mother meekly whined. "She needed those pills!...it wasn't even a case of concealing it!...she couldn't stay in that state!...plus we deserve to mourn too!...it is our child buried there" wept David. "It's just I heard Mrs Vincy commenting on it!!...don't worry I put her straight!!...I put her straight on the many hours of wailing!!!...the collapsing!!!...the throwing up!!!...the various suicide attempts!!!...the amount of breakable items she broke!!!...the fact she had to be sedated!!!...the many different types of pills she had to take!!!...etc,etc,etc,etc,etc!!!!!!!!!!!!...the whole fiasco of it!!!". Her stepfather got up from his seat in a flurry. "What are we going to do?!?!?!?" he declared. Her mother paused and suddenly turned her mood. It wasn't about Kathryn anymore, it was about her stepfather. "I don't know, darling....but there is one thing I know...sit down...there's something we need to discuss that I didn't want to mention in front of Kathryn" her mother said taking her stepfather's hand and pulling him down to sit next to her as she sat. "Sweetheart, I love you to the end of the earth!!!!...but!...if you ever put so much as a finger on my daughter again!!! I will be right out that door, understand?!!!!!!...she means the world to me!!!...more than you!!!...no offense!!...I mean!...If it was between you and her!...well, she's my daughter!!!...she needs me!...and when you give birth to something...someone!...well, I didn't give birth to you! - Let's put it that way!". Kathryn's stepfather sat stunned. "I'm sorry...of course!...you know I'm not like that!...how could you think...?" said David hurt. "Fine! It's settled!" her mother said and left abruptly.
