Hi this is my first fanfic. So I ask that we keep the flaming down to a
minimum, but constructive criticism is welcome. I only ask that you don't
harass me about my spelling or grammar. The spell check is kind of stupid
and I can't spell. But hay I'm sure we'll live.
Next I ask do you want this to be a long story (20-ish ch.) or short (3-ish
ch.) please tell me when you review.
Disclaimer: I don't own mk. Get it. Got it. Good!
What i realy want Chapter 1
This is a story of love so denied even the goddesses had no control over it. A passion so deep seeded it could barely be seen. a romance so forbidden Satan did not approve. This is the life of PHIL-PHLEIRA DEED and RIOROUTE VILGYNA **************************************************************************** ******************************** "Rio Rio Rio RIOROUTE VILGYNA! WAKE UP!!!!" Said Phil out of breathe as she sat upon the abdomen if the sleeping Rio shacking him violently. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz "Come on Rio if you don't wake up you'll miss breakfast," Phil said softly to her self. "What breakfast where? '' Said Rio as he shot out of bed sending the startled Phil to the floor. " What are you doing on the floor Phil? Come one if you don't hurry we will be late for breakfast" "Ido.... ahh wha" Phil was cut off as Rio picked her up and flung her over his shoulder and ran off down the hall in his boxers to the cafeteria. "Rio what the," said Phil in protest but quickly gave up when she realized she was talking to his butt. " This is pointless " Not long after Rio shot through the cafeteria entrance only to trip over a 'caution wet floor' sine sending him and Phil slip sliding a cross the wet floor into the cart full of biscuits and gravy or what resembled biscuits and gravy. "Woh... Phil are you ok?" Said Rio as he through an array of soggy biscuits off him " mmmmm" came Phil's response from under the bowl of gravy on top of her head. "I'm so sorry. I didn't see the sing there," said Rio as he took the bowl of gravy off of Phil's head. Phil wiped her face of gravy so she could see her surroundings. What she saw was practically the entire GIS staff and all the pilots and there repairs with the exception of Yu, Teela, and Kazuhi staring at he and Rio slumped up agenst the food cart. To refrain from making a bigger fool of her self-Phil decided to continue this in her room where no one could here Rio's screams. "Come on Rio." Ordered Phil coolly as she stood up to leave.
"But what about breakfast?" said Rio as he stood to follow her in hopes to calm her down. That was about all Phil could take. "What about breakfast?" said Phil irritably as she spun on her heel to come face to chest with Rio. She glared in to his eyes "you don't get any breakfast idiot." said Phil hotly as she pocked a finger into Rio's muscular chest thretingly. Rio took a step back in fear and slipped on a soggy biscuit causing him to go crashing to the floor once more. But if than weren't bad enough Phil came tumbling down on top of Rio. Phil's face was squished agents Rio's, her petite body along his tall, and firm one. "Why can't I have breakfast, Phil?" Said Rio causing his lips to brush over hers ever so lightly as he spoke. Phil pushed her self off Rio and stood up. Rio quickly followed in suit. "We are leaving.'' said Phil firmly as she grabbed the upset pilot by his ear and drug him out of the cafeteria in to the hall before Rio made an even bigger fool of them.
What do you think I need at least 3 reviews before I will up date again.
What i realy want Chapter 1
This is a story of love so denied even the goddesses had no control over it. A passion so deep seeded it could barely be seen. a romance so forbidden Satan did not approve. This is the life of PHIL-PHLEIRA DEED and RIOROUTE VILGYNA **************************************************************************** ******************************** "Rio Rio Rio RIOROUTE VILGYNA! WAKE UP!!!!" Said Phil out of breathe as she sat upon the abdomen if the sleeping Rio shacking him violently. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz "Come on Rio if you don't wake up you'll miss breakfast," Phil said softly to her self. "What breakfast where? '' Said Rio as he shot out of bed sending the startled Phil to the floor. " What are you doing on the floor Phil? Come one if you don't hurry we will be late for breakfast" "Ido.... ahh wha" Phil was cut off as Rio picked her up and flung her over his shoulder and ran off down the hall in his boxers to the cafeteria. "Rio what the," said Phil in protest but quickly gave up when she realized she was talking to his butt. " This is pointless " Not long after Rio shot through the cafeteria entrance only to trip over a 'caution wet floor' sine sending him and Phil slip sliding a cross the wet floor into the cart full of biscuits and gravy or what resembled biscuits and gravy. "Woh... Phil are you ok?" Said Rio as he through an array of soggy biscuits off him " mmmmm" came Phil's response from under the bowl of gravy on top of her head. "I'm so sorry. I didn't see the sing there," said Rio as he took the bowl of gravy off of Phil's head. Phil wiped her face of gravy so she could see her surroundings. What she saw was practically the entire GIS staff and all the pilots and there repairs with the exception of Yu, Teela, and Kazuhi staring at he and Rio slumped up agenst the food cart. To refrain from making a bigger fool of her self-Phil decided to continue this in her room where no one could here Rio's screams. "Come on Rio." Ordered Phil coolly as she stood up to leave.
"But what about breakfast?" said Rio as he stood to follow her in hopes to calm her down. That was about all Phil could take. "What about breakfast?" said Phil irritably as she spun on her heel to come face to chest with Rio. She glared in to his eyes "you don't get any breakfast idiot." said Phil hotly as she pocked a finger into Rio's muscular chest thretingly. Rio took a step back in fear and slipped on a soggy biscuit causing him to go crashing to the floor once more. But if than weren't bad enough Phil came tumbling down on top of Rio. Phil's face was squished agents Rio's, her petite body along his tall, and firm one. "Why can't I have breakfast, Phil?" Said Rio causing his lips to brush over hers ever so lightly as he spoke. Phil pushed her self off Rio and stood up. Rio quickly followed in suit. "We are leaving.'' said Phil firmly as she grabbed the upset pilot by his ear and drug him out of the cafeteria in to the hall before Rio made an even bigger fool of them.
What do you think I need at least 3 reviews before I will up date again.
