Some people were freaking out confused about the Chuck E. Cheese thing. Sometimes it's just funny to put out of time things there, I've done it before. I don't have a lot of reviews but the story is so fun, I don't mind. Though I am trying to break the record of 28 that I have on Shippou's Revenge.

Is there such a thing as a Kikyo fan? I have only once-no twice seen a person stick up for Kikyo. The first time was when some writer wrote a story where Inu Yasha went off with Kikyo and Kagome went off with Kouga. Even if I did remember her name, I wouldn't reveal it online, she'd probably get bombarded with nasty emails. The other time was when one of my friends(who shall remain nameless), was debating with me whether Kikyo was evil or not.

Anyway, I'm not a big Kikyo fan. I can't stand the way she always walks around with that look on her face that says, "Ooo, look at me, I'm a prissy priestess who can get what ever she wants, come and go when I want to (sometimes when it's inconvenient), and if you say something mean I might burst into tears because I'm such a crybaby who must get what she wants. I had plastic surgery."

Happy Birthday to my sister who is 9 years old. ^_^ (She drive me crazy to no end.. _*) ^_^



Chapter 6: How Kikyo Ruined It All



Inu Onna sighed. She looked over at Musuko who was sitting with Sango and Miroku each at his side. Musuko said something to them then the three of them laughed. The cold wind of evening whipped at her face. She felt an ache in her chest. She was alone. She looked at her mom, who was riding her bike with Shippou in the basket on the left side of the cart. Then at her dad, who was walking on the right side of the cart. How could her own parents seem so distant from each other? She loved her father, but he didn't seem to love her back.

They stopped on a hill for camp. Kagome started to unload her Ramen with Shippou while Miroku and Musuko went to go find firewood. Sango was do'n..something, I don't know!. With everyone busy, no one noticed Inu Yasha walk off. No one, except Inu Onna of course. She followed him silently, moving through the trees with cat-like stealth. He didn't even notice her. Suddenly Inu Onna's nose picked up a scent that she hadn't noticed. It smelled kind of like Kagome, only different somehow. And it was mixed with the smell of dirt and corpse.

Suddenly, Kagome came out of the trees. No wait, it wasn't her mom. But who was it?

"I thought I'd find you here." He said. Then he said something about her scent. It was hard to hear from where Inu Onna perched.

The women said something, she had a sad look on her face. She stroked Inu Yasha's cheek. Inu Onna growled deep in her throat. She didn't like this women. Then she heard him say, "Kikyo."

'Kikyo, huh?' Inu Onna thought. 'She had better stay away from him. But then again I have nothing to worry about. Daddy has mom, he has his friends, he has me! Why would he want to give that up for some corpsy hoer?' Suddenly, Kikyo brought her head up to kiss him.

Inu Onna gasped. She watched in shock how he responded to the kiss. They talked for a few minutes then Kikyo said, "I'll se you later." And she disappeared into the darkened trees she came from. Inu Yasha bounded away but Inu Onna was still frozen in shock.

'Why?' she thought. 'Why did he kiss that walking dirt clod?' Tears stung her eyes as anger rose. "Because he doesn't care." She said aloud. She cried into her sleeve. When she finally calmed down she went back to camp.



"Where have you been I've been worried sick!" Kagome walked over to Inu Onna and embraced her. "Sorry, Momma." She said with a slightly sad tone. 'At least someone cares.' She thought, and her anger returned to her.

"Well I saved you some Ramen." Kagome said. She handed her a bowel and Inu Onna went to sit in the circle with everyone else. She glanced over at Inu Yasha who was sucking up his noodles like a vacuum, like nothing had ever happened. A feeling of loath and disgust crept over her and she glared at him. Musuko was talking, but she wasn't listening.

"..So then I said, 'Why no, Miss. I'm not a model!" then he laughed like a fool. Miroku laughed too. Sango sweat dropped. No, Inu Onna couldn't hear. She could only hear the sound of her fury, boiling like the pot of ramen. Bubbling and boiling, bubbling and boiling, bubbling and boiling, bubbling and.. Suddenly Inu Yasha noticed her staring, he looked up at her with irritation, "What's wrong with you, B****?"

SNAP!

"HOW DARE YOU!!" Inu Onna suddenly shrieked. Everyone looked at her wide-eyed. Musuko shrugged and said, "Fine, then I'll stay away from kickboxing nuns."

"Not you!" she shouted at him. Then she stood up and pointed at Inu Yasha. "You!!"

Inu Yasha narrowed his eyes at her. "What'chu talkn' about, B****?"

"I have a name!" Inu Onna grabbed the front of his jacket and pulled him up to her face. "You really have some nerve!" she shouted. "We love you! We show it all the time! I love you! Your friends love you! MOM loves you!" Kagome blushed.

"Let go." Inu Yasha's eye's threatened.

"And then you run off to be with that-that-KIKYO!" Inu Onna shouted.

Everyone looked at Inu Yasha. Kagome looked sad.

"You're so cold. Let me into your life." She shook him violently. "Say my name, Daddy! Pops! Father!"

Inu Yasha's eye's flashed and he lost control. His hand flew.

SMACK!

Everyone stared in horrified shock. Inu Onna looked up at Inu Yasha in wide-eyed shock. She felt the sting of her cheek as it reddened with a hand print. Inu Yasha stared in wonder at his own hand, not even sure himself what he had done. Inu Onna recovered before he did, she held her cheek and said, "Good~bye, Inu Yasha." Those words echoed Inside his head. Streams of tears trickled down her cheeks and she flew off.

Musuko jumped up and watched until she was gone from sight. Then he turned to look at Inu Yasha with a disgusted look on his face. "All of this time I had been thinking you were a kind heart deep down, Mr. Yasha." He said. "But you are colder then that Naraku guy." Those words stung the Dog demon and Musuko ran in the direction that Inu Onna had gone.

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