Title: Haunted
Author: Sage
E-mail: danceswithwolves18@home.com
Rating:
not sure yet
Spoilers: Ideas and inspiration come from the movie The
Haunting of Hell House. Ideas also came from the movie I've Been Waiting for
You. I got one idea from the movie Wish Upon a Star, NW
Warning: I
got the location for the real haunted house in my story form this web
page:
http://www.realhaunts.com/states/ohio.htm
No
characters for either movies will be in the story!
Disclaimers: Anne,
Jana, Mia, Cian, Lain, and Rafeal are mine.
Summary: 16-year-old Jana is
moving from her home in New York City. A city girl moving to a rural area with a
population of only 896 people is pretty hard especially for Jana, but what Jana
least expects is for there to be legends about the house that she lives in,
legends of it being haunted, and that she has dreams of the cruel people that
use to live there.
Warning: There will be two, three at the most point of
views Jana and Lain are two of them. If I think of a third one I'll let you
know.
Note: Quaker Cemetery is in Worcester, England, but I'm getting my
'haunted' ideas from the cemetery. The main thing I'll be using is Spider
Gates.
Another note: I give a rose to Lindsay Sartoris, Joy
Sumner, and Christina Silverthorn for commenting! Thank
You!!
{Part: 3 Jana's POV}
"I found my
room!!" I yelled from attic.
"The
attic??" Sara asked in a scared voice.
"Why does
Jana get the attic? Why can't I have it?" asked Nik.
"Honey are
you sure you'll be okay up here alone?" Dad asked.
"Jana has
women needs Nik," my mom was explaining to my little
brother.
"SHUT-UP!!!!!!!!!!" I
yelled.
The room
went silent.
"Now, this
is my room. There will be no fighting over it because, Mom said I get first
dibs, so I call this room!" I said to everyone. "No shuuuuu!!!" I said waving my
hand, motioning them out.
"Well that
wasn't very dignified," said Sara.
"Do
I look like I care?" I asked looking at her.
She glared
at me and went downstairs.
"Can I
please be alone?? I need to get use to my surroundings!" I said again wanting to
be alone.
"Are you
sure you want to be alone in here? It's a little scary!! Boooooooo!!" said Cae
laughing and trying to make ghost sounds.
"Cae, you
suck at ghost sounds, you always have, now get lost!" I said as I pretended to
kick him in the butt and added a pretend right hook to the side of his
face.
"Okay just
if you see any ghost SCREAM!!!!" he said laughing and
leaving.
"Finally,
everyone's gone," I whispered to myself.
"Not quite
baby doll," said a slow sultry whisper.
"Sara is
that you!! Stop with the voices I'm fed...up," I said as I turned around to see
a women with skin pasty white, eyes the color of liquid black, her hair was a
midnight cream color, her lips had a blood red lipstick color applied to them,
her clothing was all black and it looked like she was floating about an inch off
the floor.
Next to the
women was a table that had a silver goblet filled to the brim with something
red, a black frosted cake with a knife beside it, and a black candle that had
been lite. For some odd reason the flame was burning blood
red.
"Wh-who are
you?? I-I-My family, are you, do you live by here or something?" I
stammered.
"Or
something," she said smiling evilly. "Would you like a piece of chocolate cake??
I made it myself!"
"Sure," I
said as I cautiously walked closer to her.
She picked
up the knife and sliced a piece of cake. As she did this something squirted
out.
"You have
frosting on your face," I said as I pointed to it.
She looked
at me. I could feel my heart pounding.
"It's
not frosting," she said.
"What is
it?" I said.
I turned
around to turn on the light.
"No don't,
just come closer," she said softly.
I slowly
walked closer. She raised the knife up to her lips and licked the blade. As I
got closer I saw that what was on the knife was red. All of a sudden she
changed. Her face got ugly and scrunched up her teeth grew over her
mouth.
"Jana come
on baby don't be scared," she snarled at me.
"AhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH,"
I screamed.
She picked
me up by my neck brought me closer and licked the side of my face. I could feel
the razorous feeling of her tongue cut into my cheek.
"OOOOOOWWWW
STOP IT!!!" I screamed. "SOMEBODY HELP ME!!"
She was
breathing heavily.
"I'll come
back for you," she said as she threw me across the room and vanished just as the
door opened to the room.
I flew into
the corner of a dresser. Sliding down to the floor just as Rafe ran up to
me.
"Oh my God.
What happened to your cheek?" he said.
"Didn't you
see her? She was right there. Right there. A demon. This house is fucking
haunted," I said hysterically.
"What?"
Rafe said looking at me worriedly.
"OHMYGOD
Jana!! Blood is getting all over you," said Cae coming in and seeing me on the
floor.
"Eww you
can see the meat in her cheek," said Sara disgusted.
"Jana honey
what happened??" said Dad coming in.
"Rafe?? Can
I sleep with you tonight??" I asked, my voice quivering, never taking my eyes
off the spot were the women had been.
Rafe looked
at me. "You haven't wanted to sleep in my room since you were little and afraid
of the monsters under your bed. Something must have really scared you
huh?"
I looked up
at Rafe pleading with my eyes.
"Yeah. Come
on Jana," he said as he helped me up and put my arm around his shoulders.
"You're shaking. Calm down. Nothing is going to happen."
"Oh
God. There's maggots all over the floor," said my mother.
I turned
around and saw that the maggots were in the exact same place where the women had
been standing.
