clears throat evil laughs The next chapter... evil laughs You know?
Typing "evil laughs" isn't as fun as typing "MUWHAWHAHWAHWAAAAA!!!!" Hmm.
Oh well! ^-^ Hope ya have fun with this chapter! Lalalala... sings
jigglypuff song
All: ssnooore
Me: looks around HMPH! pulls out marker and gets creative
Why won't you give up? Version 2 ----------------------
[there has to be a way!] he thought over and over again, as he sat in front of his desk. His desk was now cluttered with spell books, ink bottles, pens, and even candy. ( hey just because he's some heavenly like figure, doesn't mean he can't have candy ^-^)
"Why don't we just *give* it a name?" asked Vegeta, gulping down a soda. Elias sighed.
"It's not that simple. He *has* a name, we just don't know it."
"People can change their names-"
"Did I ever say we were dealing with a person?"
Vegeta: *GLARE*
Elias: *GLARE*
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Elias stared about the lunch room wondering about his dilemma. [There must be someone who can confess ilyasse's name right?]
{ having problems Elias? }
Elias whipped his head around to see a girl of almost 13 sitting next to him. Oddly enough, she looked exactly like the author! gasps of surprise
{ do you like my new look Elias? }
Elias rubbed his eyes with his one arm.
{ I thought you would. } the girl smiled. Elias could see the glint of braces on her teeth as she spoke. {What's wrong?}
"None of your concern."
{ I certainly think it is. After all, I let you know about me. Tell me about what's going on. }
"Why should I?" asked Elias glaring at her. (hey meanie! Is that any way to treat your creator?! ^-^)
{ Don't you want to keep these last few years to yourself? }
"Why should you care?" asked Elias. The girl opened her mouth to speak, with a malicious smile. But Elias cut in. "Don't answer that. Well, if you must know, ask away.
{Why don'tcha listen to Kendra?}
"Hm? Because I don't have the time to wait for the others to- uh, help me" the girl leaned close to his ear and whispered.
{ why won't you give up? } before Elias could answer the girl had disappeared. He shook his head trying to rid himself of the memory, unsuccessfully.
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[ why won't you give up? ] the thought whistled throughout his head. He shook it again. To stop it from coming again. But it always came back haunting.
[why won't you give up?] each time the thought grew clearer and clearer. Elias bent harder over his work. His fingers clutched his scalp as he read the volumes over and over again.
[ why won't you--]
"-stop working and sleep for once?"
Elias jerked back into awareness.
"What?!" he must have sounded scared because whoever said that laughed. Someone grabbed his shoulder and turned him around.
"Get some *sleep* Elias." Elias sighed it was only Yugi. Rubbing his eyes he answered.
"I don't need sleep." But Elias yawned just a second later, and his eyelids drooped.
"And I wasn't born to play duel monsters, c'mon go to bed!"
"alright," Elias agreed reluctantly.
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why do you *want* to do this? Won't you die too? asked the boy as he picked an apple off of the tree, and cleaned it off with his jacket. He bit into it, and his mouth filled with the sweet taste. (hmm are apples ripe in autumn?)
{ silly child--}
I'm *serious* why? the little girl laughed at this.
{ I desire sorrow. Is that too much to ask? } laughing, the little girl pick of an autumn leaf, and twirled it in her hand. The little boy walked up next to her.
With time, you will go too. Don't you know that?
{ I do not care, just to see the look on your faces as the holes grow is enough for me } the little girl let go of the leaf and it fluttered down to the earth.(holes as in holes of time) { why do you care though? }
because I will--
{ you know you will still be there. You will still be alive for the emptiness, and then the new age } the little boy grabbed the jacket of the little girl and pulled her close, anger filled his eyes.
you don't see all of those people? the little boy gestured at the people down in the valley, all of the heroes were gathered together to find a plan. those people have done things that deserve remembering! The boy let go of the jacket and sat down on one of the tree's largest roots. The girl sat beside him and whispered.
{ you won't mind it will you? } with that the little boy's eyes watered. Tears fell down to the dry earth and soaked in. He shook his head slowly, then walked down to the valley clearing his eyes of tears. The girl smiled with malice in her eyes. (note: on poetry.com the def. for malice is "feeling a need to see others suffer)
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"There must be a way," said Yugi.
"Yeah, other people have done it!" cried Joey (would you call him a hero? He's tryin' to help his sis...)
"I need my mobile suit," muttered several mobile suit pilots. The little boy turned back into Elias, and sat down in the circle of friends. People had started to form groups of friends, no, not cliques. Too many bad experiences with them ^-^.
"In video games the protagonists always win," pointed out Fuu. Mokona jumped up and down shouting "Pu!" again. sweatdrop
"Fuu, we're not in a video game," said several people.
"This situation is just like one though... I just thought."
"Speaking of our situation, how long has it been since we all came here?" asked Gohan. Everyone sat and pondered that for a moment. But, as if in answer to his question, the tree up on the hill, where the little boy and girl were talking, just disappeared. About two dozen people jumped at the sight, and stood, looking for trouble. All they saw was a little girl skipping down the hill.
She stopped at the foot of the hill and turned towards the group. She smiled at Elias. everywhere that she had stepped, disappeared. Again it gets confusing... where everything disappeared, it seemed like a blind spot to your eye. It's not that you don't see black, but you see *nothing*. Again, I repeat, it's confusing. ^-^
Laughing, the little girl ran about the field, creating a complex pattern with the emptiness.
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*sniffles* I hate to waste your time to have you read it again, but it changed a bunch, the story is almost totally different, I think... Please tell me if it's any better k? ^-^ much appreciated! See ya!
Why won't you give up? Version 2 ----------------------
[there has to be a way!] he thought over and over again, as he sat in front of his desk. His desk was now cluttered with spell books, ink bottles, pens, and even candy. ( hey just because he's some heavenly like figure, doesn't mean he can't have candy ^-^)
"Why don't we just *give* it a name?" asked Vegeta, gulping down a soda. Elias sighed.
"It's not that simple. He *has* a name, we just don't know it."
"People can change their names-"
"Did I ever say we were dealing with a person?"
Vegeta: *GLARE*
Elias: *GLARE*
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Elias stared about the lunch room wondering about his dilemma. [There must be someone who can confess ilyasse's name right?]
{ having problems Elias? }
Elias whipped his head around to see a girl of almost 13 sitting next to him. Oddly enough, she looked exactly like the author! gasps of surprise
{ do you like my new look Elias? }
Elias rubbed his eyes with his one arm.
{ I thought you would. } the girl smiled. Elias could see the glint of braces on her teeth as she spoke. {What's wrong?}
"None of your concern."
{ I certainly think it is. After all, I let you know about me. Tell me about what's going on. }
"Why should I?" asked Elias glaring at her. (hey meanie! Is that any way to treat your creator?! ^-^)
{ Don't you want to keep these last few years to yourself? }
"Why should you care?" asked Elias. The girl opened her mouth to speak, with a malicious smile. But Elias cut in. "Don't answer that. Well, if you must know, ask away.
{Why don'tcha listen to Kendra?}
"Hm? Because I don't have the time to wait for the others to- uh, help me" the girl leaned close to his ear and whispered.
{ why won't you give up? } before Elias could answer the girl had disappeared. He shook his head trying to rid himself of the memory, unsuccessfully.
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[ why won't you give up? ] the thought whistled throughout his head. He shook it again. To stop it from coming again. But it always came back haunting.
[why won't you give up?] each time the thought grew clearer and clearer. Elias bent harder over his work. His fingers clutched his scalp as he read the volumes over and over again.
[ why won't you--]
"-stop working and sleep for once?"
Elias jerked back into awareness.
"What?!" he must have sounded scared because whoever said that laughed. Someone grabbed his shoulder and turned him around.
"Get some *sleep* Elias." Elias sighed it was only Yugi. Rubbing his eyes he answered.
"I don't need sleep." But Elias yawned just a second later, and his eyelids drooped.
"And I wasn't born to play duel monsters, c'mon go to bed!"
"alright," Elias agreed reluctantly.
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why do you *want* to do this? Won't you die too? asked the boy as he picked an apple off of the tree, and cleaned it off with his jacket. He bit into it, and his mouth filled with the sweet taste. (hmm are apples ripe in autumn?)
{ silly child--}
I'm *serious* why? the little girl laughed at this.
{ I desire sorrow. Is that too much to ask? } laughing, the little girl pick of an autumn leaf, and twirled it in her hand. The little boy walked up next to her.
With time, you will go too. Don't you know that?
{ I do not care, just to see the look on your faces as the holes grow is enough for me } the little girl let go of the leaf and it fluttered down to the earth.(holes as in holes of time) { why do you care though? }
because I will--
{ you know you will still be there. You will still be alive for the emptiness, and then the new age } the little boy grabbed the jacket of the little girl and pulled her close, anger filled his eyes.
you don't see all of those people? the little boy gestured at the people down in the valley, all of the heroes were gathered together to find a plan. those people have done things that deserve remembering! The boy let go of the jacket and sat down on one of the tree's largest roots. The girl sat beside him and whispered.
{ you won't mind it will you? } with that the little boy's eyes watered. Tears fell down to the dry earth and soaked in. He shook his head slowly, then walked down to the valley clearing his eyes of tears. The girl smiled with malice in her eyes. (note: on poetry.com the def. for malice is "feeling a need to see others suffer)
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"There must be a way," said Yugi.
"Yeah, other people have done it!" cried Joey (would you call him a hero? He's tryin' to help his sis...)
"I need my mobile suit," muttered several mobile suit pilots. The little boy turned back into Elias, and sat down in the circle of friends. People had started to form groups of friends, no, not cliques. Too many bad experiences with them ^-^.
"In video games the protagonists always win," pointed out Fuu. Mokona jumped up and down shouting "Pu!" again. sweatdrop
"Fuu, we're not in a video game," said several people.
"This situation is just like one though... I just thought."
"Speaking of our situation, how long has it been since we all came here?" asked Gohan. Everyone sat and pondered that for a moment. But, as if in answer to his question, the tree up on the hill, where the little boy and girl were talking, just disappeared. About two dozen people jumped at the sight, and stood, looking for trouble. All they saw was a little girl skipping down the hill.
She stopped at the foot of the hill and turned towards the group. She smiled at Elias. everywhere that she had stepped, disappeared. Again it gets confusing... where everything disappeared, it seemed like a blind spot to your eye. It's not that you don't see black, but you see *nothing*. Again, I repeat, it's confusing. ^-^
Laughing, the little girl ran about the field, creating a complex pattern with the emptiness.
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*sniffles* I hate to waste your time to have you read it again, but it changed a bunch, the story is almost totally different, I think... Please tell me if it's any better k? ^-^ much appreciated! See ya!
