Title: Haunted
Author: Sage
Rating: A Strong 15 for goriness and language.
Spoilers: Ideas and inspiration come from the movie The Haunting of Hell House.
Ideas also came from the movie I've Been Waiting for You. I got one idea from
the movie Wish Upon a Star, NW
Warning: I got the location for the real haunted house in my story form this
webpage:
http://www.realhaunts.com/states/ohio.htm
No characters for either movie will be in the story!
Disclaimers: Anne, Jana, Mia, Cian, Lain, and Rafeal are mine.
Summary: 16-year-old Jana is moving from her home in New York City. A city girl
moving to a rural area with a population of only 896 people is pretty hard
especially for Jana, but what Jana least expects is for there to be legends
about the house that she lives in, legends of it being haunted, and that she
has dreams of the cruel people that use to live there.
Warning: There will be two, three at the most point of views Jana and Lain are
two of them. If I think of a third one I'll let you know.
Part seven: Jana's POV
At 7:00 sharp the doorbell rang…
"Jana your friends are here. Oh and Jana you're dad and I are going out and the young ones are in be," yelled my mom.
"Not really friends yet mama, we just met today and okay!" I said as I slowly walked down the stairs.
I had on a black ribbed turtleneck, with a pair of hot khaki colored stretch shorts that came up to the middle of my thighs.
"Hey Jana," said Mia as she lugged her book bag in and a few other books. "I brought some books of things we could base our plot on."
I noticed Cian looking at me with interest. I started fidgeting under her gaze.
"I brought Urban Legend I and II. I figured maybe we could get some idea's from them," said Cian.
"Yeah that's good. Well let's go upstairs to my room, unless you guys want some snacks??" I asked.
"Sure," said Mia.
"Okay, you guys can go upstairs and I'll order a pizza??" I suggested/asked.
"Sounds good, could it just have mushrooms, onions, and green peppers on it??" asked Mia.
I nodded my head. I was about ready to shut the door when some one pushed it open.
"Sorry I'm late, traffic you know," said Lain, his cheeks all red.
Again my breath was taken away at his beauty, I almost failed to notice him look me up and down, the same way Cian had. I looked over at Mia and Cian to see if they had noticed it. They hadn't, only because they were so interested in the house.
"I brought a video camera. I'm going to record all of our sessions together and the next time we meet before we start we can watch what happened the previous day and maybe catch up on some ideas," Lain said.
"Good. Um, okay go straight up the stairs, turn to you're left and then open the black door, and walk up the stairs. You guys can just set your stuff down on my bed," I said.
They slowly went up the stairs looking in awe at the ancient looking ness of the old haunted hell house. I dialed a number and ordered two medium pizzas with mushrooms, onions, and green peppers. After I ordered I ran up the stairs two at a time, dashed to the left and ran up the attic stairs. I burst through my door.
"Okay," I said ran to the bed and leaped on it.
"Wow, anxious to start??" Mia said laughing.
"Not really. Um, maybe you guys should sit on the bed too," I said gulping.
"No we're good," Lain said.
"GET UP HERE!!!" I yelled.
"Okay, okay don't have a cow," Cian said laughing.
Lain turned on his video camera.
"Okay lets begin," he said as he started walking over toward my big king size bed.
It was big enough to fit 5 people on and maybe then some.
"Well, I guess first we can decide who should be the victim and who should be the killer," said Mia.
"Oh, oh, I have a good idea for that!! Like okay, two of us are victims and two are killers right, but what if we switched one of the victims with one of the killers?? You know like make the real victim think that the other supposed victim was really a victim as well and like the one that is supposedly one of the killers could be the victim. Did that make any sense?" I asked looking at them.
"Actually, it did. That's a great idea, I'm surprised I didn't think of it!" said Cian. "Got any ideas of who should be who in that pretty little head of yours?"
"Well, since Lain kind of looks evil and innocent at the same time I thought he could be one of the victims, but really be the killer, and I thought you, Cian, could be one of the killers who was really a victim because you have a sly, innocent look about you. I don't know about Mia and I though," I said wringing my hands together in uneasiness.
"I don't look that evil do I?" Lain said looking at me.
I melted. He is so beautiful. I saw him smirk a little bit. Hmmm.
"Yeah you do," I said smiling a little at him. "You kind of have that look, laid back, but alert, that says 'don't piss me off if you do I'll fucking gut you' and your hair and eyes make you look innocent," I said bobbing my head in agreement with myself.
Cian and Mia burst into laughter, while Lain on the other hand just looked at me in amazement.
"Jesus Jana, that's not the way you talk to your guest. She's such a rude little bi-a-tch isn't she??" said Cae as he brought in the pizza.
Cae actually looked decent for once with a gray Adirondack sweater and olive colored urban cargos. He still had his black hair spiked and it's still blue tipped.
"Oh go get laid or get a life or something just get out, but leave the pizza dumb ass," I said to him rolling my eyes as he brought the pizza back to us and then he sat on the bed next to Cian and Mia.
"Oh I'd love to, get laid I mean," he said smiling at Cian.
"Oh my god," I said my cheeks burning with embarrassment.
I saw Lain looking at me, smiling.
"Don't even bother," Cian said smiling.
"What you a lesbian??" he asked.
"Cae that's rude!" I said my eyes practically popping open. "Sorry," I said to Cian.
"It's perfectly alright, and actually yes I am," she said smiling at Cae and then at me.
Cae smile went up farther.
"That's okay you, your girlfriend and I could have a threesome, I have a few good pleasing tricks up my sleeves," Cae said.
"OHMYGOD!! Cae what is wrong with you?? You don't say things like that in front of your sister. Ooooohhh my tummy just did rumblins," I said bending over.
Lain and Mia laughed. Cian just smiled lightly and looked me as if she wanted to see me more closely.
My back straightened as I looked in the corner and saw something that I wish I wouldn't have to see again.
"Tempting, but no thanks," Cian said.
"Oh and a, I'm not her girlfriend, I'm totally into guys," Mia said looking Cae up and down.
Cian rolled her eyes. Then looked over at me.
"Hey sweetie are you okay?" she said noticing that my whole face had lost all color.
I scooted over closer to Lain. For some reason feeling safe sitting by him.
"Can we please go outside," I said pleadingly.
"What's the matter sweetems are you scared of little old me??" said the demoness in the corner.
She started walking over here slowly.
"Go, get out," I said to them as I slowly got up from the bed.
"What in the freaken hell is that??" said Lain looking through the video camera.
"You see it??" I asked in yearning.
"Through the camera, but not without looking through it," he said as he got up and grabbed for Cian and Mia.
He didn't have to worry about me I was already up. Cae, Mia, Cian, and Lain led the front. I led the back. We slowly started to walk out. Then gradually they got faster. I looked around for the demonness, but saw nothing. Just as Cae, Mia, Cian, and Lain we outside of my door I said: "I don't see her anymore, but I still think we should skid Addle." Just as I said this, the wind was knocked out of me and I flew all the way across the room and landed softly on my bed, my head hitting the backboard. Before the others had time to react the door slammed in their faces and locked. My boxes that hadn't been un-packed yet flew to the door.
"You're mine," said an evil sultry stricken voice.
I jumped up and ran to the door moving everything, getting down on my knees because the boxes were so heavy.
"Nooooo, Rafe!! Cae!!! Help me!!" I screamed as something slashed across my back.
It hurt so bad it felt like a whip slicing into my skin. I heard the crack of it but saw nothing.
"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEE" I screamed in agony.
"God damnit open the fucking door!!" I heard Cae and Rafe yell in worry.
"Cae please," I yelled at him and then sucked in my breath as an invisible hand wrapped around my neck.
The hand felt cold and clammy. It slowly lifted me up in the air.
"Please don't do this. What do you want from me?" I squeaked out.
No answer.
~~~~~~~ On the other side of the door. 3rd {POV}
"Open the door Lain," Cian said in worry.
"I can't," Lain said.
"Use your vampire powers!!" Cian said angrily.
"I am!! Some powerful force is blocking it! Don't you feel it??" He said.
"Maybe if all three of us combined our powers. Mia!" Cian said.
"Why do you guys care so much she's just a pathetic human!" Mia said.
*Good pointers with Cae if you help!!* Lain said.
"Okay then!" she said and pushed with all three of them.
"Vampire powers??" Cae said then shaking his head out of his daze and rammed his shoulder into the door.
Rafe, giving up slid down to the bottom of the door and started talking to Jana.
"Jana, baby are you okay," he asked. "It's too quite!"
They heard hard pounding on the wall.
"Wait if it's three time knocking its Jana," Cae said.
Knock, Knock, Knock.
"Ram it again!" Rafe said as he put his back against the other side of the wall and tried kicking it open.
Just then screaming rose up again.
"HELP ME!! It hurts. It hurts so bad!!" Jana screamed.
The screaming stopped and the door flew open.
We ran in and saw Jana lying on the floor on her stomach. Her back looked like a leather string had whipped it repeatedly. There were gashes all over her arms and hand marking all over her neck.
"Oh my god, Jana," said Rafe and Cae getting on their knees.
"What's going on," said some crying voices.
"Get out of here Sarah and Nik, Cae would you??" Rafe asked.
"No I'm not leaving her again!!" he said.
"I will," Mia said.
Cae looked at her with tears in his eyes. "Thank You."
"I'll call an ambulance," said Cian.
Rafe slowly picked Jana up.
"Sssss, owe," she cried.
"Sorry, sorry," Rafe said as a tear dropped down his cheeks.
He put her back down.
3 minutes later…
"The ambulance is here," said Lain looking at her in worry.
"Good," said Rafe not taking his eyes off of her.
"Get me out of here!" she pleaded.
"We're working on it sweets!" said Cae.
"I can't breathe," she said crying.
"Hi where is she?" said the paramedic.
"Here," Cian said.
"What in the hell??" he said. "Who was in the room with her? An ex-boyfriend??"
"No one, just a demon," said Cae looking at Jana and brushing her bloodied hair off of her face.
TBC…
Comments would be greatly appreciated as always!