The king () Date: 2002-04-06 Ch: 1 Anonymous (Evil of the Digital Kind) review from ff.net
I'AM SO SICK OF THESE GOD DAMN TYPE OS TAIORA'S.
WAKE UP CALL BITCH THIS THE 21 CENTURY AND THERE IS
NO WAY TWO PEOPLE CAN LOVE EACH OTHER THAT MUCH.
AND SORA IS ALWAYS CRYING BITCH IN THIS STORY. MUST
TEENAGERS LIKE MATT,SORA,AND TAI. ARE SUPPOSE TO BE ENJOYING LIFE LIKE A TEEN INSTEAD WORRYING ABOUT "TRUE LOVE"
AND EVERY TAIORA TAI IS ALWAYS MOPING ABOUT LOSING
SORA AND HE DOESN'T EVER GET OVER IT, I WOULD
SO YOU STORY SUCKS! I READ STORY'S WHERE TAI BECAME A BUM
FROM LOSING SORA, NOW THAT'S GOING TO FAR.
I HOPE THIS REVIEW WILL OPEN YOUR EYES TO WHAT LOVE
REALLY IS INSTEAD OF YOUR SO CALLED LOVE BITCH.
GO AHEAD DELETE THIS REVIEW BUT MY WORDS WILL
STILL BE RINGING IN YOUR HEAD.
My reply to that Flame =
Ah, I feel so loved now thanks for that lovely review "the King" although I didn't see the reason to call me a bitch. I thought that was kind of rude….oh and as for deleting it I think I'll leave it up, you know to let a lot of people read it.
And ya as for the comment about how much two people can love each other YOU need the wake up call not me! I know a few teens who gone through that namely myself!
And as for the words ringing in my head part…..HAHA I couldn't careless, the only reason I put this up is because u called me a bitch…that was totally uncalled for and no one calls me a bitch! Got that boy.
P.S.
Read the story before you decide to flame me next time. :P
Any ways that was so long along that I don't really care anymore just thought I'd let everyone see it hope u enjoyed the flame as much as me!! LOL
Evil of the Digital Kind Chapter 7Matt turned his head to the barred window he heard Sora scream. He quickly jumped onto his cot and look out of the small window. He looked back to Tai who lay there motionless on the cot. "SORA!!!!! SOMEONE HELP!!!" he shouted out of the window, he quickly turned to look at the cell doors make sure no guards were around before he shout for help again cupping his hands in the shape forming and o around his mouth. "SORA!!!!! WERE OVER HERE!" Matt shouted again he stopped and jumped off the cot.
"Tai come on Sora's near get up." Matt called to him; Tai was still out of it he was unconscious to anything that Matt was saying to him. "TAI!" he shouted at him again. "What's with the yelling around here." an Guardromon looked over at Matt. "My friend is sick…let me go and check up on him." Matt looked at the digimon with sincerer look.
"In your dreams…. my orders are to keep u in both separate cells and that's final." he told him angry. "For god sakes! He's sick!" Matt shouted pointing at Tai while his eyes were narrowed at the digimon in front of his cell. "He's not sick, you should mind your own business." he told him again.
"DAMN YOU!" he shouted at the Guardromon who was walking away from the cellblocks. "Why aren't they even bothering to help." Matt went to the door of his cell tired to look to see if the coast was clear. It was and Matt quickly climb on top of the cot and looked out to small window he put his hand out waving it, hoping if Sora was near she would see his hand.
Then a shoe came down hard onto his hand he screamed in pain pulling his hand away quickly. "WHO THE HELL…." Matt gasped in shocked his blue eyes widened as they landed on a familiar face. "Oh my god." he whispered.
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Tentomon came flying toward the other Digi-destine were. "I didn't see anything it's like what ever happen is gone." he replied. "Damn we should be able to find her she didn't even go far!" Takeru cried he looked ahead past Tentomon. "Takeru come down." Mimi told him.
"This is great." Joe replied he sat down on the ground. "Come on I swear I heard Sora." Takeru replied he began walking ahead of them with Tokomon in his arms. "Takeru!" Kari cried she stood there watching as he was running off. "I'm going after him." Kari told them. "Wait!" Izzy cried out he groaned as she took off with her digimon as well.
"Okay…that leaves us now." Mimi replied. "Well come on we got to chase after them! We are already have been separated enough as we are." Tentomon replied. "Right come on." Izzy said.
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Kari caught up with Takeru she grabbed his arm, and spun him around to face her. "Takeru! What's gotten into you!" she cried. "Sora's in trouble I just know it, we got to save her." Takeru explained to her. "Takeru I know, but we all want to help all right so lets wait until the other's catch up." Kari suggested.
"Wait? it's too late what if Celeste got her? Huh what then…we would should have been able to safe her." he replied. "Takeru…clam down." Tokomon replied he looked up at the young teen. "We have to work as a team don't you remember?" his digimon told him Takeru sighed. "Your right…we are a team." he replied. "Good so let's wait for the others." Tokomon told him.
The four were standing there when Mimi, Izzy and Joe all came up digimon included. "Takeru what were you thinking?" Mimi questioned him. "I wasn't but now we are all together again lets go find Sora." he replied.
They started forward through the brush.
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"My brother." Matt's look alike replied he came in front of Matt's cell standing there. Matt could only stare at his look alike it was an exact replica of himself, the hair, the eyes the height, the clothing. "Who the hell do you think you are." Matt whispered. "Your brother…don't you remember me?" the evil Matt asked then he laughed.
"BULL!" Matt shouted, the evil Matt looked at Matt with a smirk "Okay maybe not." he whispered, his eyes glowed red Matt watch shocked. "Now I got something for you." he opened the cell door that was next to Matt's cell, which was empty.
He threw someone in…along with three digimon. Two small ones and one big digimon, they looked familiar to him. Matt watched as his evil self shut the door of the cell and walked away. "YOU EVIL SON OF A….." Matt stopped shouting and noticed the person starting to shift on the ground…Sora began to come too she pushed herself off the floor she turned and saw Matt. "No…no…" she whispered she quickly started to push herself away from him. "Sora…Sora what's wrong?" Matt questioned worried. "GET AWAY FROM ME!" she shouted at him she had her back against the wall of the cell while hugging her knees to her chest.
Matt suddenly realized that his evil clone must have done something to her to make her that terrified of him. "Sora it's the real me…it's me the real Matt." he told her as he stood at the bars that separated them from each other. "How the hell do u expect me to believe that?" she questioned tears stricken down her cheeks. "Tai's in the other cell…. Sora why would I be the evil Matt when I'm locked up here as well?" He questioned, Sora still looked frightened of him.
She looked past him, to the other cell. "Where's Tai?" she asked Matt stood aside. "He's laying on the cot….I asked him to wake up but, I think he's out cold." Matt explained, he watched Sora who was still in her spot agaist the wall, the digimon started to wake up. "Ohhhhh." Tusnomon woke up he looked around and groaned. "No…." he replied "Tusnomon?" Matt questioned, the digimon hopped toward him. "I found help…but we didn't get far…" he explained.
"That's all right…we'll think of a way out right Sora?" he questioned, Sora had fearful look in her eyes she hugged her knees to her chest. "I don't know…." she whispered putting her head on her knees.
Matt walked over to the other cell stopping at the bars that separated Tai's cell from his. "Tai!" he shouted again there was still no responses. 'What the hell did they do to the both of them?' he thought looking from Tai then to Sora.
"Where's Tai?" Koromon questioned he hopped between the bars he was now it Matt's cell, he's over there on the cot see if could wake him up Koromon." Matt suggested, Koromon nodded and hopped toward Tai who was lying on the cot. He hopped onto the cot next to him. "Tai wake up it's me Koromon." the digimon replied Tai looked almost dead it frightened him.
"I'm afraid that you won't be able to wake him up…" Celeste came from nowhere, Evil Matt by her side. "What do you mean?" Matt asked quickly. "He won't be…himself Yamato." his look alike told him.
Matt looked away from the two and looked at Tai who seemed to be coming too, he watched Tai sat up suddenly making Koromon fall off onto the ground. "Owe…Tai your okay." Koromon looked up at him Tai nearly stepped on his own digimon but Koromon moved quickly before he did so, Tai stood up.
"Very good now Tai…repeat after me. Celeste is my master and I shall obey her every command." she replied.
"Celeste is my master and I shall obey her every command." Tai whispered in monotone, Matt gasped they turned him into a zombie or something. "TAI snap out of it! Come on TAI!" Matt shouted at his friend, he looked to Sora. "Sora help him." Matt begged her. "NO!!!" she screamed covered her ears with her hands "STOP IT!" she cried in horror.
Matt turned and looked at his look alike. "What did you do to her!" he demanded his evil self. "Oh a little self-esteem reducer…it was easy she is too gullible." He replied.
"What do you want? Just tell me then we all will understand all right! Come on!" Matt shouted angry at the two. "Well since it worked so well on Tai…. you and your friends can become my puppets as well." Celeste replied laughing she brought her hand to her mouth then opened it up and blew some sort of fine powder onto Matt he sneezed as well as the digimon; Sora was sprinkled with the dust as well, she sneezed.
"You won't get away with this." Matt warned her, he started to feel nauseous and dizzy. "Oh I think I already have." Celeste laughed evilly then that was the last thing Matt heard before passing out.
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Kari and the others walked on for a while, until neither of them could go on any longer. They all sat down a group of rocks.
Izzy fiddled with his laptop hoping it could some how find Tai or Sora.
Matt stepped out from the bushed startling them all. "Where did you go to?" Mimi questioned him getting up off the rock. "To go think somewhere why?" he said to her. "Well I will tell you a few things." Mimi stomped over to him angry. "First off Tai's gone in case you haven't notice and second so is Sora, as well as Koromon and Biyomon. Where the hell do you get off running off like that." Mimi told him.
Matt smirked inside 'You have no idea what's going on' he though he just smiled at her. "I had things to do." he replied.
"More important then finding your friends?" she questioned. "Mimi I don't think it's worth it." Takeru replied he got up from where he was seated, the other's followed suit and were now standing and watching this unfold.
"My brother doesn't know the common sense of helping others…lately all he's be doing is acting like a huge baby isn't that right?" Takeru stated angrily at Matt. "Hm…. little bro, I'm surprised. What's with this hatred all the sudden?" he questioned.
"Matt I'm beginning to think that something happened to you…something that I can't put my finger on it but your defiantly not yourself." Takeru replied. "Takeru! How could you say something like that!" Kari replied, Takeru stared at his brother and he back at him. Takeru handed Tokomon over to Kari.
"There's no excuses for him Kari…" Takeru said, he balled his fists tightly.
"I don't like what your planning Takeru." Tokomon said as Kari held on to him. "Me neither Takeru stop it." Kari said again.
Matt just grinned at them. "It's okay let him take a punch at me." Matt said. "Guys stay back." Takeru warned them.
"Look I don't want anyone to go to the hospital guys I'm supposed to be the reliable one you know!" Joe said to the two.
"You don't understand guys this isn't Matt…it's some one else that's trying to be him I know it." Takeru replied he inched forward just a bit Matt smiled. "Come on little bro take a swing." Matt threatened.
Takeru growled at him and lunged at Matt punching him in the face it was enough of a force to send the older "boy" down to the ground. Matt pushed himself up with his arms he rubbed cheek gingerly. "Well, I underestimated your strength little bro." Matt replied he got up slowly. "Stop calling me that…you're not my brother." Takeru said to him.
"I'm shocked, my own brother disowns me." Matt replied he walked closer to Takeru. "Then Takeru take this." Matt punched him in the face; it sent the younger boy to the ground. By this time everyone that was watching gasped. "Takeru!" Kari cried out.
Matt walked to the still fallen Takeru who at the moment was rubbing his bruised cheek, while looking at the Matt. Then Matt's eyes turned to a glowing red colour… "OH my god…" Mimi cried. "What did you do with the real Matt?" Takeru shouted he had stood up.
"That is for me to know and you to find out…. but it really isn't any of your concern right now…because frankly it's too late for them…. all three of them." he whispered.
"All three of them? What do you mean." Izzy asked him. Evil Matt looked at them and shrugged "I'm going to do what I was ordered to do and that is destroy you…and your digimon." he replied not answering the question "Not if we can help it!" the digimon replied
"None of you will be able to stop me…or Celeste from conquering the Digital world and earth." he replied he began to laugh at them.
"Tokomon." Takeru replied. "Right."
Tokomon digivole to… Patamon!
Patamon digivole to… Angemon!
"Even if you defeat me you still have problems…lots of problems." he laughed then disappeared into thin air.
"COME BACK!" Takeru shouted. "WE WILL HUNT YOU DOWN!" he shouted for the evil Matt…but he didn't get answer from him.
"Okay so now this is totally messed up." Joe began. "Tai's gone first, Sora runs off Koromon disappears and now…we find out that Matt isn't even Matt." he replied.
"Now we got to find Sora, Tai and Matt where ever they maybe." Mimi said she sighed. "I think there is someone near us." Gatomon replied.
Tai and Sora both came through the bushes… "TAI! SORA!" Kari cried happily she stopped when she noticed they didn't react to her. "I don't like the look of them." Bukamon replied watching the two.
Sora and Tai both had a tired expression on there face, there eyes gave off a hallow look. "Tai, Sora?" Izzy questioned them the two never responded, they stood there. "Mhmhmhmhm….you can't talk to them…they belong to me now." Celeste replied she laughed and appeared beside the two.
"Of course…they're under a mind control…" Izzy whispered. "But how?" he questioned. "Izzy now is not to time to think about that. Right now we got even bigger problems, like getting Celeste." Joe replied. "If I figure out how to bring them out of that trance then we have a better chance of getting rid of Celeste." he replied and began to type on the computer.
"Where is my brother!" Takeru shouted at her. "Your brother? I have no Idea." she replied, Takeru growled angrily. "Angemon." he replied.
Angemon flew up in the sky then "Hand of Fate! ha." his attack hit Celeste she was pushed back a considerably amount but then laughed at them. "Fools it takes much more…. let's see how well you are against your friends "Tai, Sora." she replied.
"Koromon digivole."
"Biyomon digivole."
The two replied in a distant tone.
"Agumon Warp digivole to…Wargreymon!"
"Birdramon digivole to…. Garudamon."
The Ultimate and Mega digimon stood before them "Holy damn…guys we are in big trouble." Mimi replied wide-eyed.
To Be Continued…