Chapter 2
Shui ran to try to escape the flames. She hid in a small corner, a direction the Houndooms weren't facing. From there she saw everything. Her father ordered them to flee. Her mother had already died. Shui was angry. She didn't like her mother dying.
SHUI!!!! Where the hell you?! her father bellowed.
Ha Ha Ha! The king can't find his beloved daughter? Too bad. the leader of the Houndooms teased. Her horns shone brightly.
Shui sat in her little corner. The Ice Caves was made completely out of ice. Shui knew she wouldn't be safe for long, and she also knew running out would also be dangerous.
My son, go over there in that corner, and wait. It won't be long until the entire Ice Gang is gone! the Houndoom leader said.
Huo walked over to the corner that Shui was at. Shui sank lower into the corner.
I smell a Sneasel. Where are you? I'm going to get you! Huo said.
Shui could not move. Frozen with fear.
I know you're here! Show yourself! Huo said.
Shui stuck her head out. G-g-go a-a-away! GO AWAY! she whispered.
A little Sneasel, all by herself! I'll show my mother I'm worth something! I'll show her! Huo prepared for a Fire Blast.
But you are worth something. Shui said. Huo stopped his attack.
I don't understand how you weak ice Pokemon think! he shouted pinning Shui down on the ground.
Let me go! Shui screamed.
What's going on? Huo's mother stepped up to the corner. Her eyes widened as she saw the sight. What are you doing, Huo!?
Dearest Mother, I was only trying to kill her. Huo mumbled.
You are a disgrace! You should have killed her by now!
Mei-Hong! Leave my daughter alone! Shui's father thundered. Shui, there you are! Thank goodness you're alive!
Mei-Hong growled. All you Sneasels are weak fools! Especially, you, Shui-Bing!
Shui pushed Huo off of her. Leave my father alone! Suddenly, Mei-Hong's feet and horns stood frozen.
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