NOTE TO READERS: Thank you so much for all your comments. I had no idea
people would like my story, but I'm glad I was wrong. I wasn't totally sure
how to continue the story, I had many ideas so I hope you like the choice I
picked. Tell me what you think...bad, good, whatever. I hope to hear from
you soon.
KT the Shimmer Skank: I'm sorry about the commas, its just my style of writing but I'll try and ease off of them ,,,,,,,, (lol sorry i just couldn't help myself) ********I do not own anything....except a fish that died the day after I got it(dont you just hate those cheep carnival fish) oh well********
Ok on with the story:
He was overthrown by feelings, but not ones for Lizzie. They were for another unknown. Gordo's mind became filled with pictures of the girl drinking coffee and reading a copy of "The Shinning" by Stephen King. He saw her beauty and her grace for the first time and couldn't believe how blind he was for not seeing it sooner. In an instant, he pulled away from Lizzie and shouted "I LOVE HER," as he ran out the door. Lizzie stood there dumbfounded, not sure of what had happened. When she heard the door slam she was awoken from her trance.
"WAIT GORDO. You can't just kiss me and leave." But it was too late, he was already out the door and on his way to find his true love.
Ethan looked up from his table at the digital to discover a crying Chris, sitting all by herself. He quickly left his table and million of friends and rushed to see what was the matter. "Yo, why are ya cryin?" he said as he sat at her table.
"My Dad called," she said through her sobs. "he's getting transferred back home in New York, so he'll have more time to spend with me."
Ethan looked more confused than ever. "Isn't that a good thing?"
"Its great, my dad will be with me." Chris said, still crying.
"Then what's with the tears?"
"Because....because....Gordo's won't be." She finally said.
Gordo tried to catch his breath as he stopped at the door. He had been running all around town for quite a while now with no luck. As he knocked on Ethan's front door, he knew the minute she answered his life would be forever changed. She didn't answer the door, though, Ethan did.
"She doesn't want to see you." Ethan said as he began to shut the door, but Gordo shoved his foot on the door so it couldn't be closed. "Leave, I told you she didn't want to see..."
"Its ok," a saddened voice appeared. Chris stepped outside and Gordo could see her eyes were red. "What do you want?"
"I went to see Lizzie, to tell her how I feel..." He paused when tears began to flow down her cheeks. "Well, I kissed her and..."
"And now you guys are in love, congratulations." Chris spoke with words so sad, so depressing there was no words to describe them.
"No, I didn't want her."
"What, of course you did, you love her." She spoke more coldly now.
"I thought I was in love with Lizzie for the longest time, but I was wrong. When we kissed all these new feelings sprang up out of no where and they weren't for Lizzie." She was confused and Gordo could feel it. "They were for you."
Chris was both surprised and ecstatic by this and would have responded, but every sentence she thought of didn't seem good enough. The silence was killing Gordo inside, but before he could break it something touch his lips. In an instant Chris had grabbed Gordo and brought their lips together. They shared a kiss so magical, so wonderful birds sang, fireworks boomed, and the heavens opened.
ANOTHER NOTE: I know its kind of short but of well. So what did you think? Though it may seem like the end, it isn't so please stick around to see what happens next.
KT the Shimmer Skank: I'm sorry about the commas, its just my style of writing but I'll try and ease off of them ,,,,,,,, (lol sorry i just couldn't help myself) ********I do not own anything....except a fish that died the day after I got it(dont you just hate those cheep carnival fish) oh well********
Ok on with the story:
He was overthrown by feelings, but not ones for Lizzie. They were for another unknown. Gordo's mind became filled with pictures of the girl drinking coffee and reading a copy of "The Shinning" by Stephen King. He saw her beauty and her grace for the first time and couldn't believe how blind he was for not seeing it sooner. In an instant, he pulled away from Lizzie and shouted "I LOVE HER," as he ran out the door. Lizzie stood there dumbfounded, not sure of what had happened. When she heard the door slam she was awoken from her trance.
"WAIT GORDO. You can't just kiss me and leave." But it was too late, he was already out the door and on his way to find his true love.
Ethan looked up from his table at the digital to discover a crying Chris, sitting all by herself. He quickly left his table and million of friends and rushed to see what was the matter. "Yo, why are ya cryin?" he said as he sat at her table.
"My Dad called," she said through her sobs. "he's getting transferred back home in New York, so he'll have more time to spend with me."
Ethan looked more confused than ever. "Isn't that a good thing?"
"Its great, my dad will be with me." Chris said, still crying.
"Then what's with the tears?"
"Because....because....Gordo's won't be." She finally said.
Gordo tried to catch his breath as he stopped at the door. He had been running all around town for quite a while now with no luck. As he knocked on Ethan's front door, he knew the minute she answered his life would be forever changed. She didn't answer the door, though, Ethan did.
"She doesn't want to see you." Ethan said as he began to shut the door, but Gordo shoved his foot on the door so it couldn't be closed. "Leave, I told you she didn't want to see..."
"Its ok," a saddened voice appeared. Chris stepped outside and Gordo could see her eyes were red. "What do you want?"
"I went to see Lizzie, to tell her how I feel..." He paused when tears began to flow down her cheeks. "Well, I kissed her and..."
"And now you guys are in love, congratulations." Chris spoke with words so sad, so depressing there was no words to describe them.
"No, I didn't want her."
"What, of course you did, you love her." She spoke more coldly now.
"I thought I was in love with Lizzie for the longest time, but I was wrong. When we kissed all these new feelings sprang up out of no where and they weren't for Lizzie." She was confused and Gordo could feel it. "They were for you."
Chris was both surprised and ecstatic by this and would have responded, but every sentence she thought of didn't seem good enough. The silence was killing Gordo inside, but before he could break it something touch his lips. In an instant Chris had grabbed Gordo and brought their lips together. They shared a kiss so magical, so wonderful birds sang, fireworks boomed, and the heavens opened.
ANOTHER NOTE: I know its kind of short but of well. So what did you think? Though it may seem like the end, it isn't so please stick around to see what happens next.