NOTE TO READERS: Here it is, the next chapter. I hope you like it. I read
all of your notes (thanks to all for noting and who read it by the way) and
I would like to respond to some before I begin the story.
Whaza: I've seen that episode....wow I didn't even think of that when I was writing it. Cool observation. sweet-angel-2-dark: I'm glad you didn't get confused...I get confused easily lol. Wednesday Adams: I'm sorry I misspelt shining. It was a mistake. You ARE right, Steven King is the greatest writer...I haven't read "The Shining," i have only seen the movie, but I have read other Steven King novels. Anyway, I know what you mean about people reading too much into the whole Lizzie and Gordo thing. Yeah there has been some hints about Gordo having a crush on Lizzie and all, but no ones sure about Lizzie liking him. That's why in my story, I explained that Gordo had been in love with her for a while. It might be true in the show, it might not be, but in my story it is, and its explained. I just reread through what I wrote and it may seem like I'm being mean or something, but I'm truly not, I'm just trying to explain something. Sorry if I seem mean, I don't mean to come off that way.
OK, on with the story:
Gordo straightened everything out with Lizzie, but not before revealing how he thought he felt about her. Things were a little strange afterwards, but they were able to get through it, though the friendship was never the same. Gordo's mind was always on something else and everyone around him could sense it, which forced him to be distant.
In the middle of October of freshman year, Ethan's father was transferred. Before you knew it, Ethan and his family moved to Virginia. With Chris's only remaining family in California gone, Gordo's plan to see her flew out the window. They promised to call each other every chance they got, but with no hope of seeing one another's faces it seemed to hard to hear each other's voices. The calls decreased from everyday to once a week to once a month, until there were no calls at all.
Gordo looked around his room, almost everything was packed away in boxes. He would be leaving for college in Boston in a few days. Everyone was shocked when they learned he had turned down a very good school that had a great directing department in California, close to home and Lizzie and Miranda's schools. Gordo told his family and friends that he wanted to experience a life on his own, but in reality he wanted to experience a life with the lost Christine.
Gordo glanced out his window, it was raining and thundering out. He always thought about Chris, but thought of her more on nights like this. They hadn't spoken in two years. He ran to his computer and checked the forecast for New York, it was thundering there too. Going back to the window he looked outside questioning whether to call her and wondering if she was looking outside her window at this very moment and thinking of him. Just then the phone rang and Gordo picked it up.
"Hello?" Gordo asked. There was silence until he asked again, "Hello??"
The mystery voice simply said, "I was never a big fan of thunder storms."
The End
ANOTHER NOTE: So was the ending good or bad? Just wondering. Oh I started another story and was searching for some input on it....Its called "You Got Me, Baby" yeah its supposed to be similar to the Sunny and Cher song "you've got me babe" but I messed up in typing the title...it may be changed to "You've Got Me, Baby" later. Ok well that's about it. Good Bye.
Whaza: I've seen that episode....wow I didn't even think of that when I was writing it. Cool observation. sweet-angel-2-dark: I'm glad you didn't get confused...I get confused easily lol. Wednesday Adams: I'm sorry I misspelt shining. It was a mistake. You ARE right, Steven King is the greatest writer...I haven't read "The Shining," i have only seen the movie, but I have read other Steven King novels. Anyway, I know what you mean about people reading too much into the whole Lizzie and Gordo thing. Yeah there has been some hints about Gordo having a crush on Lizzie and all, but no ones sure about Lizzie liking him. That's why in my story, I explained that Gordo had been in love with her for a while. It might be true in the show, it might not be, but in my story it is, and its explained. I just reread through what I wrote and it may seem like I'm being mean or something, but I'm truly not, I'm just trying to explain something. Sorry if I seem mean, I don't mean to come off that way.
OK, on with the story:
Gordo straightened everything out with Lizzie, but not before revealing how he thought he felt about her. Things were a little strange afterwards, but they were able to get through it, though the friendship was never the same. Gordo's mind was always on something else and everyone around him could sense it, which forced him to be distant.
In the middle of October of freshman year, Ethan's father was transferred. Before you knew it, Ethan and his family moved to Virginia. With Chris's only remaining family in California gone, Gordo's plan to see her flew out the window. They promised to call each other every chance they got, but with no hope of seeing one another's faces it seemed to hard to hear each other's voices. The calls decreased from everyday to once a week to once a month, until there were no calls at all.
Gordo looked around his room, almost everything was packed away in boxes. He would be leaving for college in Boston in a few days. Everyone was shocked when they learned he had turned down a very good school that had a great directing department in California, close to home and Lizzie and Miranda's schools. Gordo told his family and friends that he wanted to experience a life on his own, but in reality he wanted to experience a life with the lost Christine.
Gordo glanced out his window, it was raining and thundering out. He always thought about Chris, but thought of her more on nights like this. They hadn't spoken in two years. He ran to his computer and checked the forecast for New York, it was thundering there too. Going back to the window he looked outside questioning whether to call her and wondering if she was looking outside her window at this very moment and thinking of him. Just then the phone rang and Gordo picked it up.
"Hello?" Gordo asked. There was silence until he asked again, "Hello??"
The mystery voice simply said, "I was never a big fan of thunder storms."
The End
ANOTHER NOTE: So was the ending good or bad? Just wondering. Oh I started another story and was searching for some input on it....Its called "You Got Me, Baby" yeah its supposed to be similar to the Sunny and Cher song "you've got me babe" but I messed up in typing the title...it may be changed to "You've Got Me, Baby" later. Ok well that's about it. Good Bye.