All in the Voice
Loyalty
I have some comments to address.
Infernal Jynk- I believe that if Brodi believed he found the right girl, he would NOT be celibate. Plus, why are you commenting on the topic in the 3rd chapter, which is completely clean? You CAN have lunch with a friend of an opposite gender.
Devilish Kurumi- JP will play a large part as of now, so, I'm anticipating some rejoicing. I know there's some serious JP fans out there.
That's it.
For some more positive comments, expect Seeiah to play a major role in the next few chapters. Cause she's cool, and she never shows up!
~*~*~*~
If I could fall into the sky
Do you think time would pass me by?
Cause you know I'd walk a thousand miles
If I could just see you tonight...
~*~*~*~
Marisol sat across from Brodi, pretending to be interested in his philosophies.
//Who'd be interested in his philosophy when you can look at those pecs?// She leaned forward slightly, leaning on the table. He was cute all right-This was going to make JP jealous, it had to!
But...
//If I'm only doing this to make him jealous, why do I feel so horrible?//
"All lives are connected in a web-when one link is broken, weaker bonds hold the ones together until the true pairings are aligned." She managed to make out through the hazy thoughts in her mind. That was how it was-this guilt was temporary. Until she got back with Jean Paul, she would feel this connection. That had to be it. She had never felt in the least bit tied to this man before the break up.
So why now?
~*~*~*~
Mac trudged into the nearby cyber café. The date with Kaori had gone...okay-ish, he guessed. He slumped down in front of a PC, and was moderately surprised to see Seeiah there beside him.
"What's the matter Maccie? Someone got you down?" He nodded slightly while checking his mail.
"Kaori, right?" He looked at her aghast-had it been that obvious?
"Calm down boarder-boy, it ain't the end of the world yet. It's not that obvious, no fear." He sighed.
"I just don't get it Seeiah. We were best buds the first time around but now..." He shrugged weakly.
"I'm not going to pretend to understand what's going on. But I will say one thing-Kaori's sweet. She wouldn't play you if she wasn't interested. You just have to try different ways of winning her love, that's all."
"Huh?"
"You know, do the whole candlelight dinner deal. Buy her flowers, that sort of thing." He nodded, biting his lip in thought.
"But what if she doesn't love me too?" He asked meekly.
"Then you'll have grown into an adult-and get a true friend. Cause you two are deep!" He smiled.
"Thanks Seeiah."
"Anytime, boarder-boy. Anytime." She said with her trademark lazy grin. It felt good to help people.
Especially when the people needed as much help as Mac. He had so much to learn, so much to realize...
"Ah, young love." She murmured before resuming her web-surfing. It wasn't exactly cheap you know.
~*~*~*~
Brodi frowned to himself. Marisol wasn't...herself. Part of him wanted to reach out to her soul, help her find whatever she had lost.
Another part of him was very glad they hadn't gone very far in the hot tub.
God, what was wrong with him? Marisol was hot-very hot. But she didn't touch him. He wasn't inspired when he looked at her, he just knew that he was looking at Marisol. It didn't make him feel special, or even more content than usual. It was strange.
He wondered vaguely about Kaori and Mac. The young DJ was evidently crazy about her, but did she feel the same?
He sighed.
//It doesn't matter to me if she loves him or not...Or at least, it SHOULDN'T.//
~*~*~*~
"Suteki da ne..." Kaori sang to herself in the shower, reveling fully in the steamy hot water. Everything was so...weird today. She had been looking forward to the date with Mac all week, and it felt-it felt empty to her, like it was all some show for the Kami. Rumors were spreading that Marisol was showing quite the interest in Brodi.
//Why would she be interested in a guy like him when she has JP around her finger? Besides, Marisol doesn't go for the sweet type. Sweet!? I've never considered him sweet before...//The thought hit her like a ton of bricks.
//Am I falling in love with him?//
Loyalty
I have some comments to address.
Infernal Jynk- I believe that if Brodi believed he found the right girl, he would NOT be celibate. Plus, why are you commenting on the topic in the 3rd chapter, which is completely clean? You CAN have lunch with a friend of an opposite gender.
Devilish Kurumi- JP will play a large part as of now, so, I'm anticipating some rejoicing. I know there's some serious JP fans out there.
That's it.
For some more positive comments, expect Seeiah to play a major role in the next few chapters. Cause she's cool, and she never shows up!
~*~*~*~
If I could fall into the sky
Do you think time would pass me by?
Cause you know I'd walk a thousand miles
If I could just see you tonight...
~*~*~*~
Marisol sat across from Brodi, pretending to be interested in his philosophies.
//Who'd be interested in his philosophy when you can look at those pecs?// She leaned forward slightly, leaning on the table. He was cute all right-This was going to make JP jealous, it had to!
But...
//If I'm only doing this to make him jealous, why do I feel so horrible?//
"All lives are connected in a web-when one link is broken, weaker bonds hold the ones together until the true pairings are aligned." She managed to make out through the hazy thoughts in her mind. That was how it was-this guilt was temporary. Until she got back with Jean Paul, she would feel this connection. That had to be it. She had never felt in the least bit tied to this man before the break up.
So why now?
~*~*~*~
Mac trudged into the nearby cyber café. The date with Kaori had gone...okay-ish, he guessed. He slumped down in front of a PC, and was moderately surprised to see Seeiah there beside him.
"What's the matter Maccie? Someone got you down?" He nodded slightly while checking his mail.
"Kaori, right?" He looked at her aghast-had it been that obvious?
"Calm down boarder-boy, it ain't the end of the world yet. It's not that obvious, no fear." He sighed.
"I just don't get it Seeiah. We were best buds the first time around but now..." He shrugged weakly.
"I'm not going to pretend to understand what's going on. But I will say one thing-Kaori's sweet. She wouldn't play you if she wasn't interested. You just have to try different ways of winning her love, that's all."
"Huh?"
"You know, do the whole candlelight dinner deal. Buy her flowers, that sort of thing." He nodded, biting his lip in thought.
"But what if she doesn't love me too?" He asked meekly.
"Then you'll have grown into an adult-and get a true friend. Cause you two are deep!" He smiled.
"Thanks Seeiah."
"Anytime, boarder-boy. Anytime." She said with her trademark lazy grin. It felt good to help people.
Especially when the people needed as much help as Mac. He had so much to learn, so much to realize...
"Ah, young love." She murmured before resuming her web-surfing. It wasn't exactly cheap you know.
~*~*~*~
Brodi frowned to himself. Marisol wasn't...herself. Part of him wanted to reach out to her soul, help her find whatever she had lost.
Another part of him was very glad they hadn't gone very far in the hot tub.
God, what was wrong with him? Marisol was hot-very hot. But she didn't touch him. He wasn't inspired when he looked at her, he just knew that he was looking at Marisol. It didn't make him feel special, or even more content than usual. It was strange.
He wondered vaguely about Kaori and Mac. The young DJ was evidently crazy about her, but did she feel the same?
He sighed.
//It doesn't matter to me if she loves him or not...Or at least, it SHOULDN'T.//
~*~*~*~
"Suteki da ne..." Kaori sang to herself in the shower, reveling fully in the steamy hot water. Everything was so...weird today. She had been looking forward to the date with Mac all week, and it felt-it felt empty to her, like it was all some show for the Kami. Rumors were spreading that Marisol was showing quite the interest in Brodi.
//Why would she be interested in a guy like him when she has JP around her finger? Besides, Marisol doesn't go for the sweet type. Sweet!? I've never considered him sweet before...//The thought hit her like a ton of bricks.
//Am I falling in love with him?//