Hey I'm back with more! I'm just so full of ideas that I just have to
write them down or else. Anyway, I'd like to say thanks and dedicate this
chapter to the following writers, you really made me feel all good inside:
Veggie
Halley
Darkone
Ev
Marie
A lil' increase on the rate just for a couple of bad thoughts, not R really.
Chapter three: You can try...but you won't succeed.
Alyssa woke up to a tremendous head ache, she rubbed her temple and winced at the pain she felt. Suddenly she remembered what happened and panicked, she scanned the room for escape possibilities but found none.
She was tied to the bedposts of an old bed that didn't seem capable of holding her weight much longer. It was a small, dirty room with no windows or any escape route, except for the door which seemed tightly locked. She panicked, who did this and what did they want?
Daddy please come and get me, I'm so sorry for disobeying your orders. I promise that I'll ground myself but please, come and get me. I'm sorry for being mad at you Maxie, I know you care about me and I really like it when you tell me things about your childhood at Manticore, I'm sorry. She thought at the verge of tears.
Suddenly the door opened and in came a dark man with brown hair and eyes, he wore torn down clothes and a small gun in his hand.
" Here kid, I brought ya somethin' to eat." He said in a gruff tone and threw her a small bag.
" Hello? I can't eat with hands tied behind my back, are you stupid or what?" She said in a despective tone, he growled and approached her.
He placed the gun on her forehead and let out a sigh, she could smell his awful breath. " Listen kid, you're tied up and far away from your rich daddy, you must miss him don't you? I suggest that you shut your little hole before I blow your brains out." Alyssa shivered when she felt the cold barrel of the gun on her head but refused to let herself be intimidated.
Threats are the most frecuent forms of intimidation your enemies can use, don't let feel intimidated. You'll be inferior to you enemies if you are, show no sign of weakness in front of them. She thought about all the military strategies that Max had taught her and smiled. Max had told her all that one day after she bugged her to craziness so she would tell her what she was taught when little. Max didn't like to talk about her childhood or Manticore with Alyssa, she thought it was too cruel but she did wanted her to know how to defend herself.
" You must be then stupidest kidnapper ever existed. It's so obvious why you had to kidnapp someone, you have no working neurons in that brain of yours." She smirked when he looked confused but hid it with another growl.
" Are you kiddin' me? Didn't you listen to anythin' I said?" He asked with a heavy sigh.
" Firts of all, you shouldn't let your enemy weave its way in to your brain and play with it. Secondly, you shouldn't leave your enemy alone with only its hands tied on a broken bed, and you better find another hide out than your apartment." The man was utterly confused and he sat on a nearby chair placing the gun on a table and running his hands through his head.
" Third, you shouldn't..." She started to slowly untie her hands and move across the bed with all the stealth she could afford.
" Shouldn't what?" He asked, his head never leaving his hands.
" You shouldn't leave your enemy unattended, with a gun in the room and hands tied in to a ridiculous ribbon." She cocked the gun and he looked up at the barrel pointing straight towards his head.
" Hey! Wait, please, come on kid give me the gun." He extended one hand carefully.
" You're obviously brain dead but I'm not. Show me the way outta here before I lose it and try anything funny." She said in a sever tone. Way to go Ally! You'd be one heck of a kidnapper.
The man walked in front of her down a corridor, he turned right on a door and opened the one in the end.
" That's the way out." He said and fell to the floor.
" Thanks for the help." She said proud of the blow she gave him with the gun.
Logan started feeling guilty for talking that way to his daughter and got up from his seat, just then the door opened and Max came in looking glorious.
" Hey Max!" He saluted her with a smile. God she's beautiful, I swear she's tryna kill me. Doesn't she know how she affects me? Max noticed how he looked at her and grinned in a teasing fashion. Yep, she does.
" How are you doin'? Where's the Ally cat?" She asked grabbing a green apple and taking a bite from it.
" I had a fight with her." He took his time enjoying the way Max slowly chewed on her apple and smiled.
" What about? You guys never fight."
" I'm investigating some kidnappings that have been going on and I wanted to be extra careful with her. So I asked her to stay inside for a while until I racked this thing up, needless to say that she went bellistic, she said I was unfiar nd left for her room. Haven't seen her in a couple of hours." Max arched an eye brow in amusement and licked some appe juice from her lips.
Lucky juice, I'd like to help you with the licking. 'Course I'd do a whole lot more and in different places. No Logan, think straight.
" Anyways I need your help."
" With Ally or Eyes Only?" Max finished her apple and licked her fingers. Oh God more licking, think cold Logan, Bling in a thong, ugh.
Logan turned around and Max noticed how tight his jeans were around his backside, how his shirt stuck to his broad chest and back. He turned to her again and licked his lips. Oh Logan, I could just take you in to that room and have you lick me all over. Now Max, think cold, think Normal banging the gong with...you, ugh. Now its not a good time to have a photographic memory.
" So, are you going to help me?" Logan interrupted his thoughts.
" Uh...yeah. I'll check on Ally first." He said and rushed to Alyssa's room.
Logan took a glass of water to calm his over driven thoughts and waited for Max to talk with Alyssa. She was a woman and she would understand his daughter's needs, he hoped that Ally wasn't too angry with him. He was surprised to find Max standing behind him with a worried look.
" What's wrong?" He felt his heart start to pound hard on his chest. Thump, thump, thump.
" She's gone." Max said in a weak tone.
Thump, thump, thump.
" Logan? She's gone, did you hear me?" Logan seemed lost in space.
Thump, thump, thump.
" Logan?" Max approached him and gently shook him.
" Check downstairs." Was all he said and headed for her room.
Max lost no time and ran downstairs to the garage, she searched everywhere and she even looked around the block but there was no sign of Alyssa, she only found her basketball. She went back to the penthouse and encountered a worried Logan and a look of horror creeped in his eyes when he saw her ball.
" I'm sorry Logan." Max tried to control the over flow of emotions that was threatening to fall out. Logan hugged her and let a few tears fall out from his eyes.
" We'll find her." He said more to himself than to her.
Meanwhile Alyssa found herself in a completell different sector than the one she lived in, it was crowded and full of music and shops. She gasped as an idea came in to her wicked little head and smirked.
" This is gonna be so cool." She said getting lost in the crowd.
Hey guys, another cliffhanger, sorry. Guess I'm just getting wicked but don't worry I'm not gonna let my fellow partners in crime hanging out. Here's the other one, enjoy but please remember to review. I promise some fun for Alyssa and y'all get to see a little of her bad side, plus Max and Logan are getting closer by the minute. And you'll get to know what really happened to Alyssa's mom, I thought about posting it at the beginnign but I was caught in the nervousness of the first chapter, sorry. Thanks to Lily, I appreciate tha advice and I'll take you on it. Lastly, be aware for two upcoming fics, they're cool if i say so myself.
Veggie
Halley
Darkone
Ev
Marie
A lil' increase on the rate just for a couple of bad thoughts, not R really.
Chapter three: You can try...but you won't succeed.
Alyssa woke up to a tremendous head ache, she rubbed her temple and winced at the pain she felt. Suddenly she remembered what happened and panicked, she scanned the room for escape possibilities but found none.
She was tied to the bedposts of an old bed that didn't seem capable of holding her weight much longer. It was a small, dirty room with no windows or any escape route, except for the door which seemed tightly locked. She panicked, who did this and what did they want?
Daddy please come and get me, I'm so sorry for disobeying your orders. I promise that I'll ground myself but please, come and get me. I'm sorry for being mad at you Maxie, I know you care about me and I really like it when you tell me things about your childhood at Manticore, I'm sorry. She thought at the verge of tears.
Suddenly the door opened and in came a dark man with brown hair and eyes, he wore torn down clothes and a small gun in his hand.
" Here kid, I brought ya somethin' to eat." He said in a gruff tone and threw her a small bag.
" Hello? I can't eat with hands tied behind my back, are you stupid or what?" She said in a despective tone, he growled and approached her.
He placed the gun on her forehead and let out a sigh, she could smell his awful breath. " Listen kid, you're tied up and far away from your rich daddy, you must miss him don't you? I suggest that you shut your little hole before I blow your brains out." Alyssa shivered when she felt the cold barrel of the gun on her head but refused to let herself be intimidated.
Threats are the most frecuent forms of intimidation your enemies can use, don't let feel intimidated. You'll be inferior to you enemies if you are, show no sign of weakness in front of them. She thought about all the military strategies that Max had taught her and smiled. Max had told her all that one day after she bugged her to craziness so she would tell her what she was taught when little. Max didn't like to talk about her childhood or Manticore with Alyssa, she thought it was too cruel but she did wanted her to know how to defend herself.
" You must be then stupidest kidnapper ever existed. It's so obvious why you had to kidnapp someone, you have no working neurons in that brain of yours." She smirked when he looked confused but hid it with another growl.
" Are you kiddin' me? Didn't you listen to anythin' I said?" He asked with a heavy sigh.
" Firts of all, you shouldn't let your enemy weave its way in to your brain and play with it. Secondly, you shouldn't leave your enemy alone with only its hands tied on a broken bed, and you better find another hide out than your apartment." The man was utterly confused and he sat on a nearby chair placing the gun on a table and running his hands through his head.
" Third, you shouldn't..." She started to slowly untie her hands and move across the bed with all the stealth she could afford.
" Shouldn't what?" He asked, his head never leaving his hands.
" You shouldn't leave your enemy unattended, with a gun in the room and hands tied in to a ridiculous ribbon." She cocked the gun and he looked up at the barrel pointing straight towards his head.
" Hey! Wait, please, come on kid give me the gun." He extended one hand carefully.
" You're obviously brain dead but I'm not. Show me the way outta here before I lose it and try anything funny." She said in a sever tone. Way to go Ally! You'd be one heck of a kidnapper.
The man walked in front of her down a corridor, he turned right on a door and opened the one in the end.
" That's the way out." He said and fell to the floor.
" Thanks for the help." She said proud of the blow she gave him with the gun.
Logan started feeling guilty for talking that way to his daughter and got up from his seat, just then the door opened and Max came in looking glorious.
" Hey Max!" He saluted her with a smile. God she's beautiful, I swear she's tryna kill me. Doesn't she know how she affects me? Max noticed how he looked at her and grinned in a teasing fashion. Yep, she does.
" How are you doin'? Where's the Ally cat?" She asked grabbing a green apple and taking a bite from it.
" I had a fight with her." He took his time enjoying the way Max slowly chewed on her apple and smiled.
" What about? You guys never fight."
" I'm investigating some kidnappings that have been going on and I wanted to be extra careful with her. So I asked her to stay inside for a while until I racked this thing up, needless to say that she went bellistic, she said I was unfiar nd left for her room. Haven't seen her in a couple of hours." Max arched an eye brow in amusement and licked some appe juice from her lips.
Lucky juice, I'd like to help you with the licking. 'Course I'd do a whole lot more and in different places. No Logan, think straight.
" Anyways I need your help."
" With Ally or Eyes Only?" Max finished her apple and licked her fingers. Oh God more licking, think cold Logan, Bling in a thong, ugh.
Logan turned around and Max noticed how tight his jeans were around his backside, how his shirt stuck to his broad chest and back. He turned to her again and licked his lips. Oh Logan, I could just take you in to that room and have you lick me all over. Now Max, think cold, think Normal banging the gong with...you, ugh. Now its not a good time to have a photographic memory.
" So, are you going to help me?" Logan interrupted his thoughts.
" Uh...yeah. I'll check on Ally first." He said and rushed to Alyssa's room.
Logan took a glass of water to calm his over driven thoughts and waited for Max to talk with Alyssa. She was a woman and she would understand his daughter's needs, he hoped that Ally wasn't too angry with him. He was surprised to find Max standing behind him with a worried look.
" What's wrong?" He felt his heart start to pound hard on his chest. Thump, thump, thump.
" She's gone." Max said in a weak tone.
Thump, thump, thump.
" Logan? She's gone, did you hear me?" Logan seemed lost in space.
Thump, thump, thump.
" Logan?" Max approached him and gently shook him.
" Check downstairs." Was all he said and headed for her room.
Max lost no time and ran downstairs to the garage, she searched everywhere and she even looked around the block but there was no sign of Alyssa, she only found her basketball. She went back to the penthouse and encountered a worried Logan and a look of horror creeped in his eyes when he saw her ball.
" I'm sorry Logan." Max tried to control the over flow of emotions that was threatening to fall out. Logan hugged her and let a few tears fall out from his eyes.
" We'll find her." He said more to himself than to her.
Meanwhile Alyssa found herself in a completell different sector than the one she lived in, it was crowded and full of music and shops. She gasped as an idea came in to her wicked little head and smirked.
" This is gonna be so cool." She said getting lost in the crowd.
Hey guys, another cliffhanger, sorry. Guess I'm just getting wicked but don't worry I'm not gonna let my fellow partners in crime hanging out. Here's the other one, enjoy but please remember to review. I promise some fun for Alyssa and y'all get to see a little of her bad side, plus Max and Logan are getting closer by the minute. And you'll get to know what really happened to Alyssa's mom, I thought about posting it at the beginnign but I was caught in the nervousness of the first chapter, sorry. Thanks to Lily, I appreciate tha advice and I'll take you on it. Lastly, be aware for two upcoming fics, they're cool if i say so myself.